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sk is so cheap...hate her...
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waiting for maneet to meet...
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Part 58



"Hathh hatt" Mansee throw aniee hands away with cute pout hugged her soo tight. "Mell maa" (Meri maa) Mansee said kissing geet's lips ...umm not exactly on lips of course but as per mansee it is.
Geet eyes welled up in sheer happiness she couldn't ask for anything. She waited for many years to hear this word. She don't know what magic is done ... By whom... It was definitely a cute sweet memorable moment for her.
"Pari kajal jyada hogaye kya" Aniee asked in concern watching tears in geet's eyes.
"Main bhina such an idiot" Aniee hit her head ran away saying she will get her mom.
"Maa maa" Mansee again tried to get geets attention. Geet sat in the chair in un moved state keep on staring at mirror where she can see mansee. Ritz understood her state, She saw soo many times how geet begged mansee to call her as maa. She is no one to judge the relation between the duo, all she wants was happiness on geet-mansee faces.
"Geet?" geet heard ritz calling her name little louder that made her look back instantly.
"Wo mai sorry mam" Ritz still in fix because she is third person in between them. "Mansee?" Geet stood up tried to take mansee ...she wants to hug her tight...wants to kiss her all over...she wants to listen her baby heart beats...like she did in old days...which indeed feels like rhythmic poem
"Na na" geet was taken back when mansee refused geet to touch her. Geet tried again but manse constantly refused every time, breaking geet heart. Geet helplessly looked at ritz for help...
Even ritz was surprised but one thing made her smile...Mansee keep on staring at geet murmuring something in her baby language, was checking geet from top to bottom.
As if making sure she is fine. Geet's dress, her waist long hair which is kept open mansee happily playing with those locks. Mansee took geet's hand slowly kissed back of her palm. Drop lets formed in geets eyes in joy...
"Lagtha hai highness missed geet soo much that's why she started crying... but she is not letting geet touch her...naraz...oops maan sir ki asar padgaya..." Ritz smiled looking at failed attempts of geet to touch mansee.
"Mam Please have a seat" Ritz indicated geet to sit beside them...Geet was unsure how to react for three things...
Firstly she saw mansee at that un expected place...secondly mansee called her as maa...which is her long last wish...
Thirdly mansee was not ready to come to her even after calling her as maa...Did this little angel had small hint how much importance that word holds. Geet wondered...signed sadly...
"It's very normal behaviour of mansee" ritz's words surprised geet even more. "She used to miss you when you didn't come to meet her...She feels insecure for you...she cares for you..." Ritz continued. Mansee laughed putting geet hair on her lips nose playing hide and seek game.
"How come I haven't observed these" Geet remembered days when mansee didn't even spare a look at her. "I was there with her all time when you meets her, she used to admire you when you are sleeping" Geets smiled weakly.
"Knowing her health state I knew it will take some more time for her to understand the things and accept you, please have a patience. "Ritz assured geet's heart.
"Tell me how many days it had been when you last visited her?" Ritz asked holding manseee securely in between them.
Geet looked away "That bitch" she cursed SK, it's been very long days. "So highness is hell angry on you right baby?" Ritz asked mansee with bright smile. Mansee nodded as if she understood the scenario.
"See" ritz know mansee is able to understand the few things now "She improved allot all thanks to the special angel" Ritz didn't mentioned maan's name, vowing the current situations between maaneet. Geet got puzzled "Special angel?"...who's that might be...
"Pari?"... Geet thoughts got disturbed when aniee came with storm speed literally breaking the doors. "Will you keep your mouth shut" Naina scolded aniee closing her ears tightly.
Naina and daadi scanned geet "She is perfectly all right now stop eating our brains" Aniee smiled sheepishly. "Arey chutki I am totally fine please don't bother them" Geet smiled at aniee weekly.
"Beta ise koi baath nahi hai but you know her right she dragged both of us here as if some storm chasing behind us" Daadi glared at aniee for creating such fuss outside.
" Chodiye na maa see geet is looking really gorgeous" Naina kept kaala teeka behind geet's ear. Geet smiled happily seeing soo much love from Khurana's. "We are not here to enquire or cross question you for anything" Dadi cleared the air. Geet is thankful for everything they are doing for her.
"Dear ladies if you are all done with praising things can I have a selfy please" Amy landed up not caring it's a ladies trail room. He clicked several selfy's and individual pics of all.
"Chalo chalo its time for photo-shoot with your BF" Amy commented taking little mansee in his arms. Geet blocked his way, amy raised his eye brow asking what?. Geet looking here and there as if searching for words.
"Shanti shanti kuch kehna hai?" Amy made her stand steadily "Bhai woo" Geet played with words. Amy heart swelled with happiness as it's the first time geet calling him as bro.
Mansee showed him handy cam geet nodded pointing at mansee. "Bara bar hai dono ek kuch bolthe nahi ek kuch bol nahi sakthe" Amy nodded in disbelief.
He took few pics of geet-mansee alone. In whole mansee didn't let geet touch her, but little devil hanging on geet's neck in few pics.
Geet kissed mansee vvery very tightly left her abruptly before she cries out for touching her. "Such a devil" Geet thought when mansee rubbed her cheeks. She is soo soo happy after long long years. Mansee not letting her touch but still there is change in the air...
She inhaled deeply twirled around like a newly born little honey bee. Ummm "Unko dekh naa unse bath karna baaki hai abb" geet thought. She wants to share this news with him urgently.
"Guys the time had arrived please welcome Mr.Maan Singh Khurana and Geet Kapoor" Aarthi announced with venom filled voice. All hooted high waited for their arrival.
"Baby mumma sorry saying na please maaf karde yaar" Geet whispered slowly standing at centre of ramp tagging along with mansee.
"Maa maa" Mansee squealed in happiness continued playing with her duppatta which is hanging on geet's wrist.
"You want my duppatta not me" Geet murmured waited for him to join them. She is soo excited to show mansee to him. He loves kids she knew it well..
"Fursat mila ab humko" Maan galred at Arjun sia and amy for blocking him in the trial room. "Is it my marriage reception party" He got frustrated looking at his attire that amy made him wear forcibly.
Sia laughed whole heartedly its her favourite fun time to see irritated maan. "I will see all of you guys later" Maan glared at all left to the dais. "Thada" group high fived each other taking big sigh of relief.
Maan made his entry with MSK attitude making all girls heart beat skip a bit. "Dreamy"..."Hotyyy" MSK... He smiled in his mark hearing those names.
Oops his heart missed several beats when he saw her...beautifully cladded in the dress he designed. Oh my ...she is looking breathe taking. His choice of colour and dress was simple perfect...
He smiled delightfully when he saw mansee with her. The evening was soo bright...why not when his two beautiful girls were shining like super moon..
She gapped at him with her mouth wide open ...He is looking soo soo handsome...she inhaled the fresh air deeply his fragrance touched her nose. He is like a bright star in the whole event. If she dressed like dulhania he dressed like dulaa exactly matching with hers.
She blushed lowered her eye lashes braking there brief moment of eye lock.
"Maa maa" Mansee flew like bird to maan when she saw him. Geet thanked her stars as the distance between them is not soo far, little angel haven't left her duppatta even...
"Pari" Maan took his little gf tiny hands in his broad palms kissed her hands lovingly making mansee grin ear to ear. Mansee asked him to carry her in his arms which he obeyed happily.. Geet was looking at duo in amazement ...
Ummm that strikes geet's head "How come maan knows maansee?"
Shock pe shock shock pe shock... she wondered what more was in store...
She ogling at maan-mansee unable to believe or digest what she is watching...forgetting they were in middle of fashion show..were supposed to do ramp walk.
Maan shifted his guage to geet, tried to read her eyes...
As few mins back she is running away from him..what might she thinking?...
That bloody fuss which was happened disturbed there lifes allot... He just hoped she wont be thinking or doubting that could be his play...
Only he knew how much time it took him to erase her insecurities, to brake the barrier that was surrounded her. He was unsure how much he is succeeded as she never shared anything with him. One thing was sure she accepted his love reciprocated it without complaints and demands.
"Chale" Maan asked for her hand, Geet was lost in her dilemma didn't replied anything. Her silence... it was breaking his heart in all possible ways. "How ??? when???" questions running in geet's mind constantly.
"Maa maa" Mansee showed geet to maan excitingly, for which she lost her balance as her duppata was in mansee hands. Accidentally maaneet lips brushed slightly with minimal distance. Current passed through her veins, Her heart beat did a marathon...
Geet cheeks burned in sheer embarrassment, She blushed with pinkish and red hue which made her look even more tempting. She forgot all other things made distance between them avoiding his gauge.
"Maaneet maaneet" Amy and Aniee hooted loudly and the rest tagged up.
Maan was revealed, he could never forget how much she can get effected with his small touch.
Things were same between them...He smiled with dreamy look..Her blush he will die for that..."Agar is treatment pe itna kuch hotha tho hum pehele se hi try karthe hai" His statement made her flushed.
"I love you" His words were slow but loud enough to hear...Geet was lost in the moment ...
He had that magic...His charm...His smile... He belongs to her she felt blessed.
Maaneet took centre of stage ramp heated up... Maan let mansee walk freely the way she wants after two rounds. Few more models and film stars joined them. Maan never left geet's hand ..didnt even given chance to any to stand beside him..Its only her right his geet.
She is fully under his control blushing.. with glorious smile like fresh flower...But at she never left that GK attitude that she carries all way around. It was imprinted in her totally by now...
Maan was on cloud nine ..Mansee joined on maan's right side while geet on left side. Media didn't missed any moment to capture ...especially maaneet...the burning hot topic in the world...
"Yaar party tho bantha hai aaj ek mast malang saa..." Amy jumped in joy literally dancing on his feet. "Dekthe haii" Dev curt reply was expected one. Meera nudged him "Kyu nahi bhai we will plan" Meera announced when dev was perplexed still.
"Maa aaj ghar mai third world war jaroor ayegi" Naina whispered in daadi ears while looking at ranjith who stood along with Aarthi's dad.
"you know about your maa right so just enjoy the event baaki hum dekhthe hai" daadi assured naina, calculating Ranjith's expressions. They got busy in the event Maan and geet continued magnificent show introducing all fashion designers who made it on.
Ranjith gauge was struck on only one point today, his face was motion less...
For a change its not on maaneet but on Mansee... "She?..."''' His words died in his throat when aarthis dad and few more started asking his opinion about whose best today. Ranjith answered all of them coolly but his eyes never left mansee...
Unable to formulate or understand or conclude what he is thinking right or wrong he excused himself from there made his way out to open lawn. Someone dashed him with such force that made him look back angrily.
Its none other than Sk , Who is finding ways to go out without gaining media attention or any fuss.. Ranjith was stunned totally...Many things roamed in his mind which he all ways wants to forget...
He hated this women existence totally, He wishes to kill her at the moment he saw her...His anger filled eyes scared SK, Her soul existence doomed off. Before ranjith do anything she ran away saving her life...
"Whats going on?" Ranjith fell into deep puzzled thoughts with turn of events. Old memories hunted him ...
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"Pari had this milk like a good girl" Maan tried for nth time showing glass in front of mansee. She nodded for a big no making her curls dance along with her head moment.
"Pari is a good girl na please sirf ek glass" maan pleaded making baby face. Mansee clapped her hands saying no comfortably sitting on his lap. Maan hits his head on bed post "Kya kare?" if its any other in mansee's place his treatment would be different he thought sadly.
"Join us when you are done with your GF's paalposhana" Amy ran away saying this to save himself from maan wrath.
It's been three days after the glorious event, they all gathered in maan's farm house it was like youngsters day. The media started targeting maaneet more after their fashion event. Maan cared damn so as khurana's, Geet never ever cared about anything, Well GK can handle it in her own way.
But maan kept special team to gather information to know who played that ugly game with them. Because they under estimated MSK, they have to pay worst...
Maan at last made mansee had that milk...with lots of promises and black mails of course.
"Kuch kehna hai" Geet heard his voice when she is busy in checking them, who laid on her stomach beside them comfortably. She nodded for no making baby face hides her face in cushions.
Maan instantly looked at her "There is something"
he thought as this is happening daily after the event day. Like as usual she never shared but this time she it not gloomy sad or distant like old days.
She is happy the glow on her face saying it...But her eyes and mind wondering somewhere or something all ways. She had that new freshness on her face still...
"Say whats the matter?" he asked lovingly making geet rest on his side, placing his hand securely around her. Geet snuggled close when there is no space in between them also..
His manly sent thrilled her as he just done his work out, His black west teasing her without any mercy. His un shaved cheeks touched her smooth skin making her ache in sweet pain. She loved it...
She is loving the whole turn of events happening around her. She looked at mansee who is busy playing with her duppatta as usual.
"How he met mansee" Her baby? the answer was still un known, She don't have guts to ask directly.. Because she needs to made her mind to share many things before she tells him about mansee.
But is she ready? Geet looked away started thinking deeply. Will he able to accept her? Will he understand her? She got scared to even think about it.




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Lovely update dear
Loved it!!
Geet was in emotional turmoil with Maan see around her
Ritz made geet understand Maansee's gesture and perspective
The gang were delighted to see new happiness on geet's face
Maaneet o ramp walk along with Maansee !! The picture perfect family
Maan's dad was worried and restless seeing Maansee and cherry on top he met SK too
Maan was happy and was feeling contented to see new glow and Zeal in geet's face and life
Geet was still questioning thyself how maan and Maansee knew each other
And her mind was revolving around whether maan would accept her and Maansee after knowing their truth
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Thanks for the pm
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Part 59


She is loving the whole turn of events happening around her. She looked at mansee who is busy playing with her duppatta as usual.
"How he met mansee" Her baby? the answer was still un known, She don't have guts to ask directly.. Because she needs to made her mind to share many things before she tells him about mansee.
But is she ready? Geet looked away started thinking deeply. Will he able to accept her? Will he understand her? She got scared to even think about it.
She can't run away all the time, Things were falling at right place if she tells him about anything now, She is unsure of what might happen..
"Pari agar teri prem kahani se break mila tho come yaar lets play , Do you realise THE great aniiee woken up this early was impossible task so come..." Aniee extended her hand with expectant eyes.
Ummm both geet and manse was at same place on maan staring at aniee for disturbing them. Aniee didn't mind geet being so close to maan in front of her ..There is no space for any awkwardness...Aniee know geet needs time with her bhai...And she will give as much as time...
"Gosh why on earth we chooses same name for both as pari only" Maan smiled hearing aniee's complaint...
Well its surprised him as well, he never cared to think deeply when he love calling manse as pari...
"Agar itna confusion irritation haitho change karle teri pari ki naam" Maan commented as matter of fact to tease aniee. Mansee nodded when he asked for her approval...
"You are soo mean bhai never ever I will do that" Aniee announced folding her hands on her chest...
Maan forgot one person there...its geet...She was not ready to accept his suggestion..."Pari" is her chutki's name given to her...She all ways feels solace whenever aniee calls her lovingly...She go connected to that name emotionally deeply...She wondered whyyy... Her instincts saying she had some deep connection with that mere name...
"Bhai I too won't approve for changing geet's name from pari" Meer entered carrying his black coffee and green tea for geet.
Geet freed herself forcibly from maan's hold at ones, He is not ready ..Haven't expected that even...May be meers entry made her feel shy.. He thought dismissing the fact...
Meera smiled lovingly when geet sat away from maan keeping distance , She very well know geet could never stay away from maan even for a minute...but what geet did now might because of her presence meer thought appreciating geet.
"Yes bhabhi we are not going to do that" Aniee thanked meer through her eyes with bright smile...
Maan saw girls teaming up against him, he looked at geet for her to speak something...But he is surprised when she avoided his gauge...
"Now what?" he wondered...
Geet was hurt ...It was silly issue her mind saying but her heart is not ready to dismiss this...
She wants to fight for that name "Pari?" How foolish and funny...still she is not convinced...Pari name had that effect on her...
"Kash wo bhi muje ise koi naam diya hotha" her heart demanded sadly but she didn't voice out that.. Pari name makes her feel contended...happy she couldn't understand why she is having such strong feelings...
On other hand he named her baby as pari , She should feel happy but disapproval written on her face...damn she is feeling jealous of her own baby..."Ise koi kartha hai kya" She scolded herself
Geet took her green tea left the room without even saying anything nor looking at him along with Aniee...
Maan was busy checking his mobile his emails,,didn't spare a look at her...His schedules everything was being handled by Adi, Still he cont let it go like that...He is keeping an eye...Its Friday morning next is weekend he had nothing much to think.
All headed up for playground which had all indoor and outdoor games facilities... Its fresh early morning of rainy season which is about to end in two weeks.. The cool breeze that collided with bright sun shine making wonders... All were having their own good time playing games of their interest.
"Don't you think your litte GF needs some space" Amy was back when he saw maan not leaving mansee for a second. The little angel busy playing with volley ball as football ...oppss. Maan didn't left a chance to steal galnces at geet who is playing shuttle with aniee meer and sia... Her shots was sharp she never loses. He is indeed impressed...
Amy waved Arjun and dev indicating he will join in few minutes in the volley ball match they are playing...
"Come maan lets play guards will take care of her" Amy asked him with pleading eyes...
"Bacho ki games kaun khelegi" Maan commented amy's face expressions were worth watching...
"Bhai then prove it" Dev throw tennis racket at maan , He hold it at right time..."Haa bhai let's see whose kid her" Aniee came dragging geet with her as amy informed her to do...
Geet looked away when he stared at her as she is looking little distant.. Her eyes were glued to mansee only..
"Bachi tho sirf ye hai is ke saath game?" Maan laughed silently took his position in the court... Geet cursed aniee when she forcibly handled racket in her hands...
Maan was now sure she is mad at him but why? He wondered... He pat the first shot she handled it technically... He is amazed to see such force...
Its geet turn she is actively giving tough competition to him...Geet enjoying the game its her all-time favourite game after all.. Meer , Aniee ,Amy and Arjun teamed up with geet encouraged her with loud hootings... Sia took the charge of chair umpire..
Maan flew flying kiss to mansee when he saw she is the only one by his side..
"I have my pari with me I don't need any" Maan commented when the court is filled with geet's name only...
It strike at wrong side geet shot a forehand shot maan was not at ready ball hits his wrist making it swell instantly...oops the burning anger... Maan hided his pain even geet didn't acknowledged it..
Remaining all were busy in the game he didn't complained continued the game... The score was 25-20 geet - maan..
Both were not ready to give up but all lost the energy their stomachs crying making loud noises now...
"Time up" Sia announced declaring the score at 29-26 ..oops he lost it...His wrist pain not at all helping him. Still he mad till 26 he consoled himself. "Yepieee Yepiee geet won" Sia celebrating her success all joined congratulating geet.
Mansee ran to maan demanded to take her in his arms...But his wrist was badly swelled... He securely took her in his left hand kissed her both cheeks lovingly... Mansee copied him making him laugh delightfully.
He missed to see the longing eyes of geet who stood there looking the duo...Her eyes burned with unknown reason...Worse guilt also eating uppp...She is getting J of her own baby...How pathetic...
She ran away unable to fathom anything...Maan turned back only to see her running away he saw ahead gang heading up to mansion. May be she wants to join them...
The breakfast is simple at delicious but maan didn't turn up all were very hungry so they finished fast. All retired to the rooms to get freshen up meer sent juice to maan and fed mansee with her own hands..
"It should be The lobster" Aniee stated "Its green room" Arjun said enjoying the scary eyes of aniee... "You idiot don't scare her" Sia warned Arjun "it's don't breathe only" Sia high fived Arjun showing her tongue at aniee..
"Guys if mansee is here we would be watching jungle book only as she is sleeping now it's your choice" Dev asked geet to choose any... Geet stared at him as if he is some ghost not answering anything... She is lost...Maan laughed and the rest joined...
Meer nudged dev to ask her again ..Dev needs to accept geet it would be done only if he make conversation with her...
"I prefer green room" Maan concluded, he all ways love watching horror genres and aniee is opposing most importantly so he wants to see it any cost...
Geet glared at maan..."Gosh kuch kehthe kyu nahi" He thought as she is sitting silent all the time...
"Great he wants to enjoy the movie now?" Geet thought sadly...She is least interested...She made a move to left from there.
"Someone got scared" Dev teased geet...She is struck she sat beside aniee covering up...
Beside aniee its maan who sat keeping his right hand securely on cushions after hot water treatment and applying ointment. All settled on floor Arjun hided remote beneath the cushions.
"Ab ayegi maza" he high fived with amy, who is staring at ritz who joined them after finishing her night shift at KH. Dev meer cuddled with each other, She loves watching horror movies at day times ..but only to show the after math to dev in the nights...
"Aaj mai gaye kaam se" Dev pleaded her not to watch only to receive wake on his arm... Maan smiled when dev cried in pain..."Sherni's hai sab ki sab"
The movie started, aniee ate her all fingers nails when its been 10 mins only it was started...
"Aaahhh" Aniee screamed holding maan's shirt tightly...Maan was enjoying her plight "Such a devil" Geet thought patting aniee's back. Maan tried number of times to steal glances but she ignored totally.
"Mummyyy" Aniee ran away from the room when its pre interval scene... "Ha ha ha Chutki aaja aaja jaldi" Maan laughed whole heartedly aniee is such a scary cat..
Arjun went out in pretext of call to keep eye on her...Geet landed on maan's left side when aniee ran suddenly...
"You also wonna run away like that?" He teased her holding her tightly by her waist. His proximity...words died in her throat... She missed being with him from morning no matter she is mad, hurt or J whatever.
"Muje kahi nahi jaana but, its you who is busy all the time" She complained making baby face... None could hear there murmurs all thanks to the loud noise. He felt bad un knowingly he is making distance between them. He couldn't ignore mansee also "Kya kare" He thought. He never let her make space in between them, Pecked her lips slightly making her blush.
They continued watching the movie she slept peacefully in that position, he admired his sleeping beauty... Her hair started disturbing her sleep...He had the urge to kiss her eyes...Moved his right hand to keep away those locks...forgetting about his swelling.
"Ooch" Maan cried in pain when geet kept that disturbing hair aside with her hand. Accidentally her hand hurted his wound. She opened eyes instantly "He is in pain?" her mind warned her.
"Hum bache bhi yaha hai careful guys" Amy's teasing voice reached her ears... All giggled resumed watching the movie
"Great" Maan mumbled as they are thinking something else...
"Hua kya?" Geet asked with droopy eyes snuggling close to him... He is warm she loved it...
He is blessed at last she opened her mouth..."Kuch nahi" He dismissed the talk bearing the pain silently..
"Pakka?" She is not convinced "Tu soja?" He diverted the topic...The room is dark and his solace not helping her to open the eyes...
"Kisi ki nazar na lage" meer said looking at the sleeping maaneet. "How come someone sleep peacefully watching movie like green room" Amy felt it soo funny.
"Pyar mai kuch bhi ho sakth hai" Ritz blurted looking at maaneet with dreamy look...
"Tho tuje bahut kuch patha hai pyar ki bare mai" Amy asked her directly blocking her view to maaneet.
"Haan tho?" ritz was innocent enough to answer back absent minded.
"Madam jee please educate me" Amy commanded ritz eyes popped out, she nodded for a no...
"Bhayya you can do your romance outside let's give them some privacy" Sia dragged all out of the room before they disturb maaneet beautiful sleep.
Geet woke up first when she felt pain on her neck as she is sleeping in same position. The first things she saw after opening her eyes was his calm and handsome face.
He is such a handsome man , She blushed kissed on his lips without disturbing his sleep. She continued checking his face structure ...lips face eyes, She stayed there till heart content...
She checked the time its going to be past 7 oops they are sleeping from many hours it seems.
She tried to get up but couldn't as he is holding her hand tightly while his other hands is busy keeping her secure in his embrace. Her cheeks reddened, She kissed his hand which is holding her's...
That's when she saw wound on his wrist and that swelling oh my god its soo red...Her eyes swollen...
"How it happened" she felt low when he is suffering like that she is unaware of anything. "Dimag kaha rehtha hai tera?" She hits her head "Such a stupid she is"
One things is sure the wound is not there in the morning...Then when it happened? Droplets rolled down when he hissed in pain even in his deep sleep. She hugged him tight wetting his shirt wetness touched his cheeks...
He woke up feeling wet on his hand and cheeks... He took peaceful breathe as she is in his arms secured. "Why are you crying sweet heart?" He is concerned...
She looked straight in his eyes breaking the hug...Her eyes saying the story she is feeling soo low...
"Please don't cry say it na" He pleaded wiping away her tears, he still feels his wound is fresh..
She ran away feeling low and shamed of herself, first she is feeling hurt and j of her own baby second he is in pain...She never knew it...
That's too much to handle he all ways takes care of her every single things but look what she is doing...
Maan tried to get up but his body discomfort didn't helped him as he is sleeping in same position keeping her in his arms.
"Geet please don't go" He called her softly feeling helpless... She ran away not even looking back...Is she doing what she supposed to do?... Her heart cried..

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Yet again a lovely update dear
Loved it!!
The name Pari brought out unknown emotions from geet's heart
She felt displeased when maan called her baby her Maansee as his Pari
Geet was green with envy as Maan was spending time and his warmth with Maansee
Tennis match between Maaneet and Geet took away the top spot
Everyone failed to see Maan's pain and discomfort
Gang come up thyself to watch movie
Maaneet moments
Geet felt guilt stricken as she was feeling jealous of her own baby and also that she could connect to maan's pain and agony when maan would always take care of her and her pain
Geet needs to open up herself before she loses thyself in self stricken mood and pain!!
Hope geet's releases all her agony !!

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Will be waiting for the next update😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update. ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AWESOME FABULOUS UPDATE
MAANEET MOMENT WAS SO SWEET
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Ahh!!! you back on updating ...

Welcome back sweets... 👍🏼

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