'AN INCURABLE INSANITY' New thread link Pg 150

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Hi all! (waves)

My name is Simi. I'm an old hat of IF but I'm posting on this forum for the first time. I'm not sure why since I used to be a huge fan of Geet.

I'm a writer and have had some of my stories published as well. 'An Incurable Insanity' is one of my first. I've posted it elsewhere as 'Sweet Dreams' (some of you have read it). My dear friend Drashtilove asked me to post it here since it fits the mood of Geet and I think Geet and Maan's personalities fit the protagonists very well.

Kindly do not copy and publish this story anywhere else. I own the copyright.


So here goes---

Prologue

Her heart fluttered as she heard the key turn in the lock. She quickly adjusted her maroon silk sari with the yellow border, the one that had caught his eye, and waited for his footsteps.

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven... Yes, exactly seven steps before he stopped, hesitated for a few moments, then removed his shoes one by one and arranged them neatly side-by-side on the shoe rack.

She smiled. He had been mindful of taking his shoes off every day. "I am not used to it, but I will if you want me to. It's probably a good thing to do anyway," he had said after she made her request.

He walked into the hall toward his favorite chair; he never sat on the settee beside her. As he settled down, he'd pick up the TV remote and, without looking at her, would speak in his smooth baritone, "So how did you spend your day, anything interesting?"

She'd shake her head, still looking down, though out of the corner of her eye she'd steal glances at his feet---they were nice to look at, clean with well-manicured nails---then realizing he was not looking at her, she would vocalize in the negative.

Her soft "no" would drown easily in the raucous loud blast from the game on TV. He probably didn't hear her; he probably didn't care.

tbc


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INDEX

Prologue- 1

Chap 1: 4

Chap 2: 8

Chap 3, 4: 12

Chap 5: 17

Chap 6: 21

Chap 7: 25

Chap 8: 28

Chap 9: 32

Chap 10: 38

Chap 11A: 40

Chap 11B: 44

Chap 12A: 47

Chap 12B: 53

Chap 13A: 53

Chap 13B: 60

Chap 14: 64

Chap 15: 68

Chap 16 (A, B): 71

Chap 17: 80

Chap 18: 84

chap 19: 88

Chap 20: 94

Chap 21:98

Chap 22: 102

Chap 23:106

Chap 24: 109

Chap 25:114

Chap 26: 120

Chap 27 teaser and note: 125

Chap 27: 128

Chap 28: link 131

Chap 29: link 136

Chap 30: 140

Chap 31:143

Chap 32: 145

Chap 33:148


My new story 'The Accidental Wife' http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4772908

Kindly check out my website: http://simikrao.com/

Blog for rest of updates (password protected) https://mystorypadblog.wordpress.com/

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Keepdreaming thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi
good to see u here
I'm very excited to read it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start!!
Looking forward to read it😃
Glad to have another writer in our GF!!Welcome🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi congrats in the FF! Welcome 2 the forum! Intriguing prologue! well written! pls post cs! update soon! pls add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi. Welcome to the forum. Very interesting prologue. Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you sooo much di
so happy to see you here
wow again i going to read this beautiful story
again thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intriguing but interesting prologue. Will wait for the story to unfold. Pls add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome di!!😃😊
Glad to have another writer in the forum
Looking forward to the story
Nyc intro
Thanks keep dreaming di for suggesting me to read this FF and Drashti love di for introducing her to GF
😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

hi
good to see u here
I'm very excited to read it



Thanks for the welcome dear and thanks for spreading the word!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhu..

Amazing start!!
Looking forward to read it😃
Glad to have another writer in our GF!!Welcome🤗


Thank you!

Its my pleasure being here 🤗

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