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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Sweet update
Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
It was wonderful part...
Geet was so cute...
At age of 3 years she is getting married to make... this is making me curious...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
quite cute and interesting start
liked it
continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Made some changes with the name Maan's misthi not geeto with Geet's Meethe.😳


***You can Ignore the black part directly go to red part***

About the continuation of the story on the basis of readers demand.
As I have few ideas regarding the story but I was like kind of dilemma. So I kind of make it an OS from, so it seem like complete (to few readers) not fully complete.


let me tell where I got the idea thought of writing this story though few writers never tend to reveal it.

Frist my own story from PL where (actually I was editing few thing in chapters)Maan and ashima got child marriage, with that concept I wanted to write something with maan geet. But My little wifey took different direction. This is where Idea got popped and hand was itching to write.

Second few weeks back I saw a black and white movie "Balika badhu" According 70's movie I really like it though few places it really made me cringe not that disgusting kind of but something between silly type. You will understand it when you will watch it by yourself. I wrote it and made banner but didn't post thinking of readers how you will react to it .

And last but not least recently I read a story wattpad. Yes I still have 1000 of stories of added in library not sure when I will finish it and wherever I wanted to read any book either its published or taken down. So I lost interest easily I always keep switching between wattpad and ebooks(some books you should give a try "Lev" by bella aurora, easy by tammara webber, destroyed by pepper winter, Maya banks, destroyed by pepper winters all series. fifty shades no offence to the fan As all the books are in my selves but I could finish 1st book as it doesn't capture me that way many time I opened but i closed it instead of that I read slave by sherry hayes all series)

Offo..my bak bak...so here the link of that book which capture my attention and made to post the update. (specially the bribing part) damn she is a cute one
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/HKLXP4tROx

Most important thing I don't support Child marriage. What if write on child marriage on a fiction does it mean I am advertising this type of social issue? You Reader have own ability to judge if I write will this story affect you?

And lastly I will write this story on the basis of reader decision. if You say no more parts keep as OS. Its perfectly fine for me😳
so please give your views.😊


Edited by pixi_nightingal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
hi thanks 4 da note! pls continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
hello dear...
i read yr story first time... seriously dear.. amazing starting... and geet is so adorable... maan toh bechara aisa hi fida ho gya hai...
pls pm me also
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 note
cantinu soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Thank u for the note dear & plzz continue..
Its a nice concept..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i am taking it purly based on fiction and not any social issue... go ahead with whatever u feel right... :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plzzz write more parts on os we know u arnt supporting for child marriage it's just a thought that maaneet love each other and will get married at right ge but just that it story so cute plzzz continue and ignore such readers who just assume everything and forget it's just a story

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