MADHURVAANI: EK VARDAAN YAA ABHISHAAP?*Upd.Pg.122 *05/06/17

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Neha gandhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Nice character sketch ... but where is Geet ??no character sketch of geet . .. I think anna is Geet right???

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific cs! bt know Geet???? wonderful update, excellently written! Lalaji is sad! he is missing his granddaughters! he hopes 2 fond them soon! Past well incorporated! Khuranas came 2 meet Geet! update soon

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Prerna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

nice cs
but geet kaha hai
aur maan ki mom and dad ki age mein gadbad hai
nice part
poor handas and senior khuranas
both families are so heartbroken and hurt
continue soon

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Interesting C's..
Waiting for pm dear

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LM1991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: prerna1
nice cs
but geet kaha hai
aur maan ki mom and dad ki age mein gadbad hai
nice part
poor handas and senior khuranas
both families are so heartbroken and hurt
continue soon

Prerna,

Thank you for noticing wrong ages in CS. I have corrected it, I hope it tallies now!

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Nice CS👍🏼

Lekin geet ka cs nahi hai... Is anamika geet😎

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: LM1991
THANK YOU TO EACH AND EVERYONE FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS!

NAKH 5683, I APOLOGISE FOR NOT MAKING IT A LIGHT HEARTED STORY AS MY CS AND STORY PLOT WAS ALREADY WRITTEN. BUT NEXT STORY I WILL DEFINITELY TRY AND MAKE IT LIGHT HEARTED.

LM

no problem dear u dont need to apologise i was pulling ur leg its ok i like ur ffs

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

locvely cs and a great twist so according to story geet hads been missing ever since maan rejected her its bee 7 yrs since geet and rajji had gone missing darji hadnt spoken since geet left beeji was lost in the past how khuranas had come to meet handas where they met each other all were impressed to see maan all grown up geet siblings going gaga ovee maans good looks