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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part one

In big company all staff running on their toe when they heard announcement that boss Is coming in 7 min all make things perfect and pray to god that please save us ...don't get scold by boss. All looking for their uniform (ya uniform ) and file ..ect ect .

After three min ...they heard in parking area

After 6 min in life they heard and next second all stop to took breath when they hard voice of pointed shoes ...tak tak tak

All know that here is come their boss ...come Yum...(god of death )

All greeted their boss but don't get response and that person zoom in MD cabin like there is no one ...around cabin door closed with thud ..and all took deep breath ...all thank to their luck that sba ki GM ho gai

But next moment ...thud voice come from cabin and assistant sasha run to boss cabin ...

And ask with fear ...may I come in MADAM ..

Ya ya its The geet handa MD of Handa empire ...and verse boss ...for staff

Geet - give angry glare to sahsha and say ...who put My coffee Mug like this ...geet pointed to coffee mug ...

Sasha get confused for sasha its on place but geet mam..

Sasha with fearful voice ...mam I am confused coffee mug to apne place ...

Geet put majerment scale near mug and say its .005 inch away from ...its place.

Sasha mouth open in O shape ...

Geet ask in anger now say me who put this ...sasha going to reply to geet but both stop with one man voice

Geet beta its me who put your coffee mug .005 inch away from its place ...sasha give surprise look to mr handa Father of geet handa ...

Mr handa hug geet and wink to sasha who mummer thanks ...to him who save her job today ..eles

Mr.handa - miss sasha u may go now I want to talk with MD please ...

And poor soul almost run from devil boss cabin...

Sasha drink full glass of water in one go ...all come to her table with pity face ...

Sasha say - kash koi aa jaye humko save karne wala from This devil boss ...she is too much ..

Same time in other part of city ...one man in early ..25 come in office he has aroma to took attention of any one ...a soft smile on face he is reply to each and everyone GM...he stop before ...pinky desk and took a chocolate and before pinky say anything he eat it in full speed like someone going to snatch it

Pinky cried - maan sir ...why u eat my chocolate ...that man give full smile to her and say because I love it miss pinky...

Yes its Msk ..the Msk Md of khurana construction its daily rooting of their office ..he is always in happy mood ...he love to tease pinky ...he always easy with staff never get angry easily ...

He entered in his cabin and shocked that his dadi waiting for him...he is confused why he don't come with him..

He hug dadi and ask ...why u don't come with me ...

Dadi - in strain voice Mr khurana it's your office not house behave professionally

Maan - what happened dadi I mean mam anything serious ...

Dadi nodded but in mind (ye mera the msk sach main so innocent imm serious ho gaya god)

Dadi - wo kya hai na ...I need one Gift from u whom I can play ...dadi say with serious face ..


Maan get confused with dadi demand ...


Dadi - I need a child msk...


Maan - do u want to adopt someone ...maan ask in more confused face .


Dadi - slap her forehead and say maan I need a child from u ...for that u have to marry to girl and give birth to my parpota ...and u have only 1 year for that ...so many emotions run form maan face its like ...mirror for dadi...

He is shock .confused ,shy and new dream ...

He look to other side and cried dadi ...

Dadi ...what dadi mann main to laduu foota na ...maan turn red in shyness ...its perfect time maan dadi say softly ...

Maan - dadi app bhi ...ya ya now I am ready for marriage but ... I want a girl who respect me and my family ...and I don't want to meet her before marriage I want we start our journey on marriage day itself ,after marriage I try to know her and she try to know me I want our relation blossom naturally no meeting before marriage I want arrange marriage like my dadaji ...maan give answer to dadi

Maan each word make more and more worried to dadima ...

Other side in handa office geet make fuss on talk of marriage but mr handa BM her

Geet reply on their talk , if u r happy with my marriage than I am ready for that but some point I want to clear itself ...if yes for my rules than go ahead ...

papa its clear I don't taking any risk u decide boy I am ready for marriage and I don't have time to love marriage but my condition in I have to live with him in his house before marriage for 3 month if any family and boy ready with my condition than I am ready ...i can not risk it ,I have right to know my would ne husband and family ..its need ..we have to think practically in few meting we can not judge people na

so u have one week time if any boy and his family ready for it say me now can u excuse me I have lots of work

mr handa once look to upper side and mummer ranoji ye kaisi robat girl birth ki hi apne ...now how could I say about all this to Mrs..savitri devi...

Edited by Mahimaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Congrats for the new story. Awesome teaser and part 1. Geet wants to spend time with the guy before marrying. Maan wants t to be like an arranged marriage. he does not want to meet before marriage. It is getting interesting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
thanks for pm
very nice update
maan n geet are in revarce role

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
superb concept and cs
coming to part
mahi dear role riverse kiya kya ?
geet is kahdusoo boss where as maan is sweet boss
they r pole apart
now both dadi and geet father fix
how will soul this problem which geet and maan put infront of them lets see how will soul this waititng for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
interesting update... geet and maan are poles apart... geet is tough and maan is cool...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations on new story
Loved the CS to the core
Lovely prologue
Looking forward to know how both contrasting people will fall in love and warmth yet both the poles are tend to attract towards each other!!😉😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Kon kisko woo
Karega ..
I mean Robot Insaan banegi...
Ya Insaan robot ...???
Maan Pinky ka chocolate kha gaya ...
hehehe ..
Geet ne dekha hota to Kya logic lagati ..
Haha ..
0,5inch door hahaha ...
Shadi ka kya hona hai...
Geet ko jaana hai Maan ko pehle shadi karni hai...
hehe ladoo phoota ..
wala cute .. Tha ...
hehe Mahi Di ek plan
chal sakta hai...
Geet Maan ko dekhe aur Maan apni eyes band karle ..
Ya rasta badal le Samne na pade Geet ke..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Nice update
Maan is friendly puri chocolate kha Gaya pinky ki
But geet ufffh 0.005 inch god yaar
Kaisa hoga in ka sath
Both are opposite
Yaar ek sawal hy kahan sy lati ho apne dimagh
Ma itni stories sab hi achi hain kitna Sochti hogi tum?
And update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Congrats for new story mahi. Great prologue and part 1. Interesting and unique concept. Beautifully written. Haila! geet toh bilkul robo jaisi hai without any imotions. Her entry was fab. Mujhe toh aisa laga jaise maan ki entry ho rahi hai. Maan is so sweet and jovial. Maaneet are poles apart one want to meet after marriage only and the other want to live with him for 3 months to know him and his family. Dekhte hai aage kya hoga.

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