MG SS ~With You~ #2 Last Chapter-24 Pg-45 Sept-24th THE END!

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#171

chapter 21

geet still remember their bakula tree and it's importance .

their anchor.but maan want geet to hold onto some other anchor .

seeing geet taking steps correctly made him realized how she is getting used to darkness.and maan doesn't what that.and neither do I.

now she is smelling flowers to know which flower it is.and seeing this I think man himself is feeling low.

i just want geet to be all right.

continue soon

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Superb update di!!

Loved it

Loved the past moments !!

Loved their teasing session

Past is beautifully penned

Geet is trying her level best to endure her pain to herself

Maan is feeling helpless seeing Geet

Hope the darkness goes away from geet's life and may her life shine bright with sunshine😊

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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Beautiful and emotional part.. just loved it...Maan and Geet pain their insecurity their love soo lovely described...

Update soon dear..

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Will be waiting for the next update di!!

Thank you for the pm!!😊

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Great part. In past it was maneet's first day after marriage. It seemed they got their all lost happiness. But somewhere they are.tensed thinking about leaving every one alone there. But I must say.both daughters in low of.khuranas very mature and understanding.

In present.maan is tensed.seeing Geet .getting comfortable.with her darkness . he was.tensed and was angry too. Geet was enjoying the cool.breeze in flown and.maan was.admiring her but along that.he braveness was making him.scared too. Finally he day come when Geet is.going.to operated. I hope.she gets back her eyesight. Waiting for next.dear.

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Awesome ... Superb...

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm...

Continue soon...

Maan is fighting with his own fears and insecurities... But he is putting a brave front for geet...

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

YAAR I WAS SO LAGGING BEHIND...BT EK TARAH SAY ACHA HUA ..I GOT TO READ LAST 10 CHAPTERS IN A GO...BT NOW AGAIN AFTER DIS CHAPTER ...I CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART...

ALL THE EMOTIONS WERE PENNED SO BEAUTIFULLY ...NO ACTUALLY IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL..PAINFULL...

PAST JITNA ..BEAUTIFULL HAI..UTNA PRESENT IS SO PAINFULL..

BUT WAT STANDS AND IS SAME IS DER LOVE ...DER TRUST ..DER PASSION ..ROMANCE...DAT IS STILL THE SAME..NO ..GROWING MORE WHICH EACH DAYS...

EVERY CHAPTER I HAD LOVED READING THEM...

WOULD LIKE TO HIGHLIGHT EVERY POINT I LOVED IN EACH PART..

THE WAY GEET STOOD FOR MAAN...LETTING HIM TO BREAK THE SHELL HE HAD BUILD ...

I TOO FELT BAD KNOWING DAT ..THE BAKULA TREE HAD DIED...

HOW MAAN HAD ...TAKEN ON HIM..FOR HIS DAD KA DEATH AND HIS MOM KA CONDITION..DAT GUILT ..WHCH MADE HIM..TO BE AWAY FROM ALL..AND DAT NIGHTMARES WHCH HE ENDURED . ...DAT WAS ...SO PAINFULL ...ND HOW GEET STOOD ..ND HOW HER LOVE ONE ..DAT WAS SO SWEET AND ..NICE...

I HAD LOVED MAAN KA CUTE CONFESSION ...I MEAN D WAY HE HAD LET DEV KNOW DAT WAT IS COOKIN BETWENN DEM...DAT WAS SO DREAMY ...I HAD LOVED IT VERY MUCH...

AND ALSO TO HIS FAMILY ...HOW HE HAD SAID ...DAT DER IS NO NEED FOR ANY ONE TO ...LOOK A BRIDE FOR HER..AS HE IS FOR HER...

DER MARRAIGE
HOW SHE HAD STOOD FOR HIM..DAT BLIND TRUST DAT COME WAT MAY SHE WONT STOP TRUSTING HIMM..
DER WEDDING NIGHT
..ND DER INFINITE STARS DAT WAS ALL BLUSHYY

ND NOW D WAY MAAN FEARS ...HE WANTED GEET TO B STRONG...IT MEANS DAT SHE HAS TO FIGHT THE DARKNESS ND NOT DAT..SHE HAS TO GET ACUSTOMMED TO...D DARKNESS..ONE SIDE HE WANTS TO FIGHT FOR HER ND OTHER SIDE HE IS THE ONE MOST FEARING... CAN SEE HOW HE IS ..HIS FEAR..HOW HE IS PORTRAYIN HIMSELF ..
EVERY EMOTIONS..PENNED BEAUTIFULLY DEAR..

ND NOW D D DAY HAS COME...
I WANT GEET COME OUT AS WINNER..ND LET DER LOVE WIN...

JUS WAITING...

Edited by Desire6 - 9 years ago

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Brilliant updates.

Read last 5 updates together.

So emotional story.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#179

hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! superbly written! Past - Priya teases Geet! Maan admires his wife! Geet gng 4 pag phere! Maan comes 2 fetch her! Geet emotional abt the plant! Naina upset as Maan teases her! Present - Maan upset as he sees Geet familiar with her surroundings! he wants Geet to fight! Maan tensed as she goes 4 her operation! Rano assures Maan! update soon

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Awesome beutiful part..
Maaneet marg ka baad 1st day hai and geet sach much jasmine ki tarha bloom kar rahi hai and priya vi usa tease karna ka koi chance nahi chodti kyun choda apne time ka revenge jo lena hai usa..
Geet apne bakula tree ki yaad ma hai usa tree ka pass spend kia moment usa yaad aarahe hai and wo apne dil ki baat maan sa karta hai ki usa tree ko kya hua aisa kaisa wo dead ho gayi and maan usa samjhta hai wo unka life ka ek phase ko pura karna thi aur usa jane do let it go..
Maan apne papa ka dream project complete karna US jata hai family sa durr geet ka saath and jab wo sad hai geet usa hasula deti hai..
In present geet ko apne dark life sa adjust karta dekha maan angry ho raha hai wo nahi chahta geet usa life ko apna lea apne kismat mane wo chahta hai wo usa darkness sa bahar ane ka liya brave and strong ho and maan nervous hai aur hospital ma and darra hua vi rano usa himat de rahe hai..
Hope geet thik ho gaye..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..