MG FF - TIES/ Last Part + Epilogue / Page 82 / NEW FF LINK / PAGE 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Congo on the new ff lovely C's and prologue really intriguing maan and dev brother but hate each other geet and dev love each other dev got geet to intro her as his lover and would be wify maan flat seeing geet he was angry at said who wanted to give dev everything unless he marries maan wants geet and promised she will be his only geet is feisty maan loves it even more he called Lina their childhood friend the only link connection to the brother but seems there is something between dev as maan was the one who intro geet as devs wife Lina wants geet for maan as he was happy after so many years they have a plan

Quote

piyabulsara

@piyabulsara

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Awesome update dear
Love it
Lina show geet dev true color face

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Great update. Loved the story so far

Quote

kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Interesting update. Geet showed her fiery side to Maan and told him that she was not like other girls and keep a distance from her. Geet is annoyed with Maan. Maan is amused how his brother got such an honest girl. He called someone. Maan is angry with Dev for some reason and wanted to take revenge from him. He wanted to snatch everything from him. In the morning Dev came to Geet's room to call her for breakfast. Geet hugged Dev in front of Maan. A very beautiful girl came who is Lina, childhood friend of Maan and Dev. Maan introduced her to Geet when Dev ignored her. Dev does not seem to be the person as he looks.

Quote

singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

😃 Very interesting start

waiting 😊

Quote

khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

hi thanks 4 da awesome update! wonderfully written! Maan likes bold Geet! Geet hugs Dev! Maan sees this! Lina arrives! she is their childhood friend! she kisses Dev on his cheek! Geet shocked! So Lina knows Dev very well! So Dev is nt wt he appears 2 b! update soon

Quote

angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

intriguing

so Dev seems nice but is not

Maan seems like a devil but maybe

Geet is strong but innocent

n y r brothers so cross n hate each other

Quote

sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

nice

maan called Lina

dev was alert seeing hr

geet threatened maan

and he genuinely liked hr attitude

Quote

-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Nice part

Maan became like this because of dev...Leena childhood friend of maan and dev...and also fiance of maan...Geet observed dev face expressions when Leena came there...but shrugged it off...maan and Leena now together ..maan admant to marry Geet...he wants to save Geet from dev... eagerly waiting for the next part

Quote

Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Interesting concept and character sketch...

the lines "Is she/he really is what she/he portrays to be" for the characters of Maan, Geet and Dev intrigued me further..to know the hidden characters and real faces behind the misleading facade or appearance they make in others mind..

Part 1

that's fabulous update..

the first impression...not to trust what you see..seems it does apply to all the three here...

Maan appeared to be a flirt..while Geet looks innocent but is observing everyone in the mansion..Dev seems harmless at the moment except for his dislike towards Maan..
Dadima, she does not acknowledge the hard work of Maan or just using blackmailing as a way to get him settled..

and for Maan and Dev, there is a visible animosity between the two and a hidden rivalry about almost everything..property, business, their own image, other materialistic things and now also about Geet..

Quote

1 ... 5 6 7 8 9 ... 54

MG FF - TIES/ Last Part + Epilogue / Page 82 / NEW FF LINK / PAGE 1 - Page 7

Related Topics

Explore Topics