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pixelflower620

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Madhu..
Interesting start!!!
Loved the concept!!!
Will Maan succeed? 😉 😛

thanks 😃

hehe that you will see in time 😃😃😃

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Simran_Maaneet
Nice part ..
So Dev and Geet are in love with each other but now Maan is interested in Geet ..
Cool ..

thankss😃

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Junglebee
simply brilliant

thanks😃😃😃

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sanum23
nice
dev took geet to intro hr with his family
maan mwt hr and he's interested in geet
daadi told hr decision maan not liking
but he left not before kissing geet hand and warn hr
that he will make geet hr and after again he told hr he's
not joking wat he said

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tania90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

nice story
I just read prologue nd first part
so geet is in love with dev nd she came to meet his grand mom nd dev I dnt think he is good nd maan he said he will make geet his wife oops

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: soma.gurti
excellent start buddy...👍🏼 👍🏼

thanks buddy😃😃

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Interesting start. Geet and Dev are in a relationship. Dev is taking Geet to meet his grand mother. It looks Dev does not like his brother. Geet is waiting in the study when Maan came inside. He appreciated Geet's beauti and introduced himself. Geet also introduces herself. Dev came in with Dadima. He is not happy to see Maan there. Maan told Geet that he will make her his. Geet is shocked.

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love2_soma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

hi thanks 4 da fab update! well written! Geet n Dev in love! Maan doenst have a good relationship with his family! Maan says he will make Geet his! Geet has 2 stay wid Dev! Maan corners Geet! update soon

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Interesting concept and fabulous first part. Dev and Geet in love , he takes her to his mansion to introduce her to his family. It seems there is some undercurrent tension between Maan and Dev. Dadima indirectly forces Maan to get married so that he can get the business in his name. After seeing Geet, Maan decides to make her his and informs her of the same. Dadi asks Geet to stay in the mansion till her engagement with Dev happens. Loved it. Will wait for next.

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