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Posted: 7 years ago
nice pt hope Geet understand wat mona try to make hr understand maan told naintara that he won't help hr she have to consult with lawyer
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thanks for the pm! amazing update! well written! Hate Tara! glad Maan took Geet for dinner!
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thanks for links to ur other stories!
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Nice update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm. Lovely update.
Maan is confused with one more similar person like geet but more weird. Ahh so funny mona asked maan having elder brother. Hahaha. Its a cute gesture. Slowly geet is trying to normalise their relation. Maan is so much confused with blushing.
Tara got her lesson again. Good to see that.
Thanks for the links of other stories. Surely will read them asap get time.
Waiting for next.
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im surprised seeing your stories
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please dont quit
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ohh maan's thinking is right mona is really weird
im also glad geet not like that
but now again tara
why cant she leave them alone
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congratulations for your wedding..
nice story..
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hope geet won't do anything stupid just because Tara called
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Part 48

M-Hello?

Its a familiar voice on other side but hoarse

"Maan...Maan it's me Tara

"I miss you... am in such a miserable condition...u have to help me...plz come and meet me...plz Maan...I love u...u are the one I have...who cn understand me...its a trap...Pratham and that b**** is trapping me...Maan plz...u will come naa

M-No. Don't bother calling again...you have a lawyer, you should talk to him; if anyone can or will help u its him

Maan phone kaat deta hai

Geet is looking at Maan

He looks back at Geet

M- It was Tara... said they are treating her bad in prison. What do think anyone would expect inside jail? A Hilton? Wanna go for a walk after dinner?

Geet chup hai...concentrates on her food

M-Guess no walk then

G-You should help her

M-I am not a lawyer

G-Every woman in trouble or pain wants her man with her

M-She is not my woman. I know you don't believe that but stop telling me who I love and who not, your telling me won't make it true and your denying a fact won't make it false either and only u being blind to all can make u truly believe that in the little cocoon world u r building for yourself in which no one other than u is a part of

G-But u did love her all your life, now she needs u, your presence...the moral support

M- I am not a lawyer...what i felt for her i am realizing was not love. She doesnt need my presence and moral support she needs me to pull strings and use my financial and social influence and i am not the only person she is calling... she has got many other beaus ...if once doesnt work try another

G-How do you know that? You were getting married to her...

M-I knew she had many partners...i figured it was in past...and maybe this time she really would stay with me and not run off with the next best thing...i was hoping for that...but then by the time the day came for marriage.. I didn't really care if she stayed or ran away...

Geet looks at him

Oh those beautiful deep eyes

He looks back at her...he had nothing to hide, if only Geet would see the truth in his eyes

She placed the corn grain between her curved sexy lips and chews

He stared then looked away

What was he becoming? To ogle his wife in public like that even sex addicts dot behave so pervertly...

He takes a huge gulp of water

Geet ko to kuch bhi nhai pata chalta...wo thoda stretch hui...Geet ke legs Maan ko touch ho gaye momentarily

Maan jerked visibly in his seat

M-Dance?

He says getting up

She widens her cute eyes

G-emm...cant

She bites her sexy lips

M-We dont have to do much...just stand and shuffle our feet. Waise bhi humme kaun janta hai... kuch hua bhi to kal ko kisi se nai milna..

Geet thoda sa idhar udhra dekhti h...she is cute like a doll

Then stands up nervously

He offers her his hand

She lightly keeps her hand on his

He guides her away from the main crowd...just out of the shack on the sand wet ground. Drifting music could be heard but no one would be looking at them there

Geet is looking up at him mesmerized as if all the characters of her dreams coming back to her, as if the couple of the temple are reuniting after centuries, as if zen and his wife have found each other again as if the feathered lady is smiling at her

Maan bends down on knee and tugs her foot on his raised knee. He takes her sandals off then takes her other foot and takes the other sandal off

He gets up and removes his own shoes kicking the footwear a bit aside

Geet sways a little and collapses as smoothly as a feather would gild on air with a blissful smile on her lips her eyes half closed

Maan manages to catch her

He pats her cheek gently yelling Geet Geet!'

She doesnt look fainted. She looks in a blissful happy slumber

He isn't sure whatever is wrong with her...how can he tell if it trance or a faint or a normal sleep or some other psychic thing ...Geet never discussed

He picks her up

He feels something on his shoulder; a beautiful white feather is on his shoulder as if it is illuminating

He looks here and there surprised ki yeh kahan se aaya

He has no idea where it came from or the significance

He picks Geet up and takes her back to the restaurant

The owners help them to a get to a nearby beach cottage where Geet can rest and recover

Sabko laga ki Geet ki tabiyat to kharaab hi thi maybe coz of exertion and exhaustion she fainted but it looked like she was asleep so they told Maan to not worry

Geet ko Maan room mein le gaya bedpe sulaya

Maan thoda pareshaan hua but she looked ok not pale or worried or stiff like her earlier faints so he thought maybe she just fell into exhausted asleep

He could hear...a voice of a lady...coming from somewhere..but not clear and it sounded like Geet's voice...Zen...O Zen...i am so happy...i love u too...u r my life...

Another lady with similar voice...chinta mat karo...main tumhare saath hoon...hamesha tumhare saath rahungi,...tumhari Sundara ab sada ke liye tumhari hai

Maan feels a headache coming with the voices...he is confused...he wonders who is Zen who is Sundara and then he thinks why is he hearing random words and voices... maybe he is too tired too..after worrying about Geet for so long...sleeping on the chair for last 3 days...he hadn't had decent rest...maybe he is hallucinating...but again Zen kaun hai aise random hallucination to absurd hue

He looks at Geet, is she projecting something..? If its Geet then he would ask her who these people are...only she could tell him

Maan lies down besides Geet and curls her into his arms and just as fast falls asleep

After a while he feels soft breeze on his forehead and eyes

He opens his eyes slightly to see where it was coming from, to check if Geet was ok, thand to nai lag rahi usse

As he opens his eyes he sees Geet's soft pink lips...the source of the breeze

As he opens his eyes slightly her lips curve into a smile

Maan smiles in return, puts hand to run through her hair close to back of her head

G-Let me up...[her lips move to whisper]

M-Dont wanna

He says equally slowly, another hand another finger trace the edge of her smiling lips

G-What is upon you...let me get up

Maan pulls her closer very slightly and raises his head a little, their nose touching

M- Didn't i tell u on the ship... about u giving a finger and me grabbing the hand?

She chuckles

He tilts his face to kiss her jaw

She closes her eyes...lets out a sigh

He brushes his lips across hers lightly and runs his hand down her back, letting go of her head but running his hand up and down her spine in slow languorous patterns

He raise his face again this time to push his lips a little against her...in a small kiss...he won't go any further than she wants to...but it doesnt mean he wouldn't try and see how far she will go

She smiles a little happily little mischievously

Third time he kisses her more fully...longer across the lips tasting her lips

She closes her eyes, relaxing her body

He holds her close kissing her softly slowly... for a while kindling the passion ...making it burn slowly into something more

He slips his hand inside her shirt touching the dip on her back slowly gliding upwards

Maan gently rolls her over so that she is lying on her back

He was kissing her lips...slowly he moves down

She was comparing the last time with this time, last time it was so abrupt and this time its so different

While Geet can think the poor man cant

He is leaving a trail of wet hot kisses as he moves down to the base of her neck, putting his lips on her rapid pulse

She is clutching the bed sheets hard

Maan sighs her name

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Thanks for all the good wishes for my wedding...Please all of you do come...no, I am not leaving IF(My would be hubby is very encouraging of my writing, he is himself hooked onto reading 'Jaded Prince')...also thanks for liking my list of stories,please do check them out too so that we can discuss them

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