MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 42

Created

Last reply

Replies

869

Views

71.6k

Users

58

Likes

3.3k

Frequent Posters

Endgame thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Geet is feeling so low just hope she wont go into depression just want geet to slap that jerk maan thnx 4 pm
Cartoon.Buff thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Maan's mom is pretty imposing but at least better than Geet's parents. They are absolutely useless!

Maan is so daft! He seriously does not get it even now. Wonder if he even has his conscience in place. I am sure if Geet does not tell him why she is behaving like this, he won't even bother finding out or think what is wrong. I just hate him right now!

Hope this honeymoon helps him regain his senses.

Continue soon please.

Risingsun626 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm. Due to rituals geet came but not able to coprate due to her stressed state. I dont know whats going on in maan head but he seriously upset all of us. Poor geet how much upset she is with all events going on. Waiting for next.
Flame_of_Forest thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 28

I loved her reasoning that brownie, ...the animals need me..truely said, they can understand her feelings better, but not Maan..
Maan's mother seems to be good person, only if she knew about how the marriage took place..and the reason behind Geet's emotionless and cold behavior..
Maan toh he did not even realize his part of the mistake yet..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago
vrinda22 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 8 years ago
geet is like a robo now..
she feels gud only with her pets
she as called back by her mil
n maan shows concern seeing her block out
but he still didnt understand what geet is feeling
she does everything mechanically
nice part
heycookie thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
nice part
maans mom planned for maaneet hm...wata next cant wait
NilzStorywriter thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

PART 29

M-Why don't you lie down and rest, you blanked out for a while back then

G-I am fine...thank you

She replies still doing what she was doing

M-You should rest... umm have you been blanking out for such long times recently?

Geet shakes her head

M-So was that...what happened... normal...?

Do I look normal? I am the biggest messed up creature God has made. (She thinks to herself)

She shrugs concentrating on folding clothes.She doesn't discriminate, Maan ke bhi kapde fold kar rahi hai

M-Well as long as you aren't worried about it; and wo... the honeyoon.. ..mom was just trying to get us a fresh start

G-ok good

M-You should pack... women do take long to pack...tickets kal shaam ki hai...

G-Don't worry...newlyweds hardly need clothes in honeymoon

She says blatantly without shying or coying

M-Well, mom booked us to a scenic place...it would be a shame to not see those places..

G-Hmm excuse me

Geet kitchen mein chali gai dinner banana as uski habit thi to acha bura jaisa bhi khud ka khana khud banati thi

Kitchen mein Maan's mom was already looking over dinner preparations

M Mom-Arre beta Geet tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

G-Dinner banana hai

M Mom- Wo main bana rahi hoon

G-I'll help

M Mom-Tum nayi nayi bahu ho ghar ki tumhe koi kaam karne ki zarurat nahi hai

G-Main khali nahi baith sakti. Mujhe sab kaam khud karne ki aadat hai

Maan's mom looks at Geet for a moment then says

M Mom-Fine ok

Passes her a plate of vegetables

M Mom- Lo, ye kaato

Geet chup chap kaam karne lagti hai

Dono milke khana bana lete hain

M Mom-Lo chalo sab ban gaya tum Maan ko bula kar lao, main table par lagati hoon

Geet has made it a point not to interact with anyone and not let anyone get close to her

Geet ne apne dil ke darwaze puri tarah band kar liye hain ki bahar ki awaaaz tak unn tak naa pohonch paaye

She goes to room

G-Dinner. Come down

Bolke mudke chali gai, her usual love missing

Maan muhh kholta hai kuch bolne ke liye lekin Geet chali jati hai

Geet was serving; as Maan came she sat and stared eating mechanically only looking at her food

Maan also eats

M- Geet khana tumne banaya hai?

Geet was in her own thoughts, remembering when Maan used to show up drunk and she always made extra food coz she knew he would be hungry, and then she would feed him sometimes. Her heart was full of emotions as she thought about those days

But today Maan sat next to her but she just felt emptiness and an inert pain

Next day, Greece ke liye unki fligh thi

Geet to so gai chadte hi

Maan ne socha ki uthaye baat kare lekin phir he did notice she looked a bit tired through the day and maybe coz of those flashes she was having trouble sleeping so he let her sleep

Geet beech beech mein ankh kholti phir so jaati dekhke ki nahi pohonche

Maan baitha thodi der magazine padta hai bore hota hai...fir wo bhi so jata hai...

Aisa hi juda juda.. dono pohochte hai..

Dono ko dekh kar lagta nahi ki wo newly maried hai, aisa lagta hai jaise dono ka divorce hone wala hai and had been married for years. They are attuned to each other's need and character and yet there is no chemistry between them...

Hotel mein checkin kiya

Mom ne to honeymoon suite hi book karay tha

Porter bhi dono ko khushi khushi lekar gaya

They are the most gorgeous and sweet looking couple sans the love part, as if dono ko thapad maarke bhej diya ho

Room ke bed par flowers the, champagne the strawberry the. Mood set karne ke liye saari chege the honeymoon suite mei

Geet ko kya farak padta, she aren't interested anymore. Kabhi aise sapne dekhe the, she day dreamt but ab raat ko bhi sapne nahi dekhti

Abhi Maan ko kuch karna hoga to wo kar legi aur Geet won't oppose

Geet kapde lekar bathroom mein ghuss gai change karne

Hotel ke bathroom mein bada sa jaguzi hai, bohot saari scented candles rakhi hain and itne cream and lotion and naaa jane kis kis cheez ki bottle hai aur ek chocolate ki basket

Geet ne pucha kapde pakad ke ki

G-Bathroom kahan hai?

Maan ne dekha idhar udhar ki nahi hai, wo hi hai, aur wo open mein hai...

M-emmm

He points to the Jacuzzi place...

G- You can use that. I have to go down and check on something. I would be back in half an hour

Geet looks where he pointed

M-Oh...but how come they gave a room without a bathroom door? We should change this room

G- Umm tum abhi to use kar lo mei neeche poochta hoon change ho jayega to

M-No we can...

Geet intercom uthake dials the reception

G-Hello...I am calling form suite no 406

Reception mein kisi ne poocha greek accent mei

Hello how may we help you?'

G-There's some problem with this room...we want to change it...it has no door in the washroom

Receptionist ek minute ke liye chup.

Phir kahan ki

Receptionist-errm...mam every room is like that

G-Huh?..How will I...? It's so...I mean...why does...? Fine but isn't a one person room...we are two people here...so no door?

Receptionist-Madam, you were b ooked in the honeymoon suite...will si and madam...no be staying together for rest of the week then...as in...separated?

Receptionist ne adhi greek adhi english mein poocha

Maan khada tha

G-emm..no...emm...forget it..

Geet ne phone rakha

She lets out a sigh

M- They had a free room?

Geet shakes her head...

G-All rooms are same

Maan nods after a moment

Geet ko gussa aa raha ki pagal Europeans! Shaadi shuda hain to kya...koi sharam nahi karenge kabhi bhi...sab khullam khulla?

M- Tumahri tabiyat zyada kharab hai? sarr mein dard hai?

She shakes her egad

G-No I am fine

Geet khadi hui..kapde uthaye

Maan nahi bahar jayega to koi nahi, Geet ne socha. It has to happen someday. She has to live with him forever...there's no escape. Kabhi to, phir aaj hi sahi

Maan dekhta hai Geet going their

He turns and goes to the door

M- So I'll go and see about that thing

Keh kar nikal jaata hai

Alamelu thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
Omgpr geet she has shut herself off. Does man sense this does he realize will he do something
SheenGcian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Aww nice update.. seriously they look like married for several years waiting for divorce
Newly married kahin se nhi lag rahe.. I hope Maan realize something is wrong with her behavior dhakkan Maan 😡
Waiting for next
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 8 years ago

terrific update! well written! thanks 4 da pm! Geet avoids Maan! Maaneet in HM! Geet upset! Maan needs 2 talk 2 her n clear mu! update soon

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part 25 on PG 47 / 14-7-2025

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

6 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24 Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24

Hi, as the title suggests this story is going to be full of sorrow, but because it's my FF there will be unconditional love as well Whoever...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

4 years ago

Maan Geet new Ss Binding by Love Pt 29 page 47- 10/1/25

She met him in an unfavorable time when she was running behind the time to save him. Save the only one member of his family whom she call his...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".