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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update n thanks for pms
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 20

ek haath mein Geet and dusari mein bottle..
dono ka hi nasha chadh gaya hai Maan ko...dono ko chodd nahi sakata, he cannot stop going behind them..
bas pyar ka nasha chadhana baki hai
Maan ko dekh ke lag raha hai, the myth is true, drunk talk is the real talk which is otherwise suppressed in the heart..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 21

goldilock ka hisaab barabar, like him she also got a chance to snoop around his house..
what hidden secrets did she find there..
he is not even aware, how his every action is affecting her so much..
instead he is becoming rude when sober..
hope it starts in a reverse mode soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 22

Gudda didi..kahin ye Tara to nahi..
Substitute? ye kya bol raha hai Maan..😲
why substitute? why can't she be just a friend? why she has to substitute Tara?
that is too much..he can't even differentiate between different relations and bonds..
why he has to take a stick yard of Tara's relation to fathom this one?


he is a totally confused banda now, who does not know what he wants and what he has do..
seriously, he is missing the depth of the relations and actions IMO,
he is jumping on one foot seeing Tara and ready to marry her, when just a day before he was close with someone else, something beyond my comprehension..waiting for his view on this and thoughts over this..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 23

at least a little conscience is left in him to think about his actions and feel guilty about it to himself for if not in front of Geet, for leaving her devastated...in front of Geet, he has with the same, rude and ignorant behavior..
I hope he retrospects the whole thing..she deserves much better of person in him..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 24

they say love is blind and she is still helping him...
I had hoped she would give it back to Tara for the slap..
at least she should not make it so easy for him, when he realizes his mistake..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 25

Shaadi bhi gayi..aur dono ko pata bhi nahi..
waiting for their reaction in their conscious state..
will Geet still leave him..I hope she does..
and also hope Maan realizes the depth of any bonding or relation..does not take it in either shallow way or out of guilt or out of realization of true face of Tara..

Nice updates..
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART 26

He opened his eyes and first sight was Tara's face and Geet's lowered eyes smeared with tears with hand print on her cheek

She was constantly shouting at Geet with her shrill insensitive voice and Geet kept on murmuring I am sorry'

She accused Geet of forging and it all

Tara had his phone

He saw the pictures in them and the videos

He was shocked

Slowly the memory starts creeping in bits and pieces

Tara was accusing Geet for stooping so low for getting Maan

Geet looked miserable; she was shivering a little with grief

Tara asks about the happenings

Maan answers honestly that he doesnt remember much

Must have been really drunk, he thinks

Geet's eyes are also fixed on him

Tara smirks and says

Tara-Whatever. It doesnt matter. What you do Geet, this marriage isn't valid. Marriage in intoxicated state isn't valid. But Geet your true colors are out, I never knew you would stoop so low to snatch Maan and I won't let you secede, if your plan is to create some sensation and grab attention

Geet mutters

G-I...am...sorry...I...really...dint had any such...intentions...I...don't worry...I will go right now...no body will know about this incident...don't worry...I am sorry...sorry both of you

Tara-You better be!

Geet utar ke chali jaati hai

Tara kisses Maan

M-Don't be so rude to her

Tara-Shut up Maan. You don't know these girls

Geet's heart was shattered...Maan again rejected her, again and again and again and she is a mighty fool, stupid vulnerable fool. She tries to make herself understnd that Maan was always Tara's

Tara ka uspe hakk tha, Geet uska hakk chinn rahi thi. Hakk hone mein aur hakk chinne mein bohot farak hota hai

Geet inn sab se durr sidha airport chali gai

Bhale raat ki flight thi, par wo wahan karti kya

At least wo airport mein gumnaami mein baith to sakti hai, apne tutte hue dil ke saath

Chup baithi thi

1 ghanta gaya

2 ghante gaye

Dopahar ho gai

Apne khayalon mein gumm, duniya se durr, duniya kahan jaa rahi hai kuch pata nahi

She feels a nudge on her shoulder

She looks up

G-Arre Pratham jiju?

Geet wondering what is Tara's ex-husband doing there

Pratham-Tum yahan?

G-emm...haan main..wo..kahin jaa rahi thi

Pratham-Kitne saal tumse nahi mila

G-Aap yahan kaise?

Pratham-Bass business ka kaam

G-Par...apne travel kaise kiya?

Pratham-Plane se

G-Nahi wo...aapko permission? Wo...term kahtam ho gaya?

Pratham-Kya keh rahi ho? Kaisa term?

G-emm..wo...aap jail mein the naa fraud ke lie...emm..jis wajah se aapka aur di ka divorce...

Pratham-Kya??????????????? Ye tum kya keh rahi ho? Ye sab tumse kisne kaha???

G-Tara di ne

Pratham-Tara? Wo tumse kahan mili?

G-Yahin India mein...wo aap se divorce ke baad India hi to aayi hai

Pratham-Tara India mein hai?

G-Haan aaj..aaj..unki shaadi bhi...

Pratham-Kyaaa shaadi kisse?

G-emm..Maan...Maan Singh Khurana

Pratham-Maan..to mere college ka dost

Geet nods

Pratham sits

Pratham-God!!!! Now I get it. Such a cunning b****

He looks at Geet

Pratham-Jaldi apna phone do. I need to alert the authorities

G-Kya?? Kyun?

Pratham-Geet, Tara is a fraud. The Australian intelligence is looking for her; aur hamara divorce to kai saal pehle ho chuka tha when I got to know about her greed and real motives. Tara ka to passport seize hone wala tha, par lagta hai usne chaal achi chali, India bhaag aayi aur Maan se shaadi karne wali hai jisse usse Indian national maan le aur Australian intelligence kuch naa kar paaye

G-Fraud? Kaisa fraud?

Pratham-Company mein jahan she worked unka paise ka ghapla kiya tha aur she used to sell confidential information to the rivals

Geet ne kaha; thik hain main chalti hoon. Aap pohoncho police leke, jo karna hai karo

Pratham says, Nahi you have to come, gavahi and all, venue tak le jana ye wo, we have to do it fast

Geet ko jaana hi pada

Tara to arrest ho gai

Maan ki maa ne Geet ke parents se kaha ki shaadi ka mandap hai to, Geet ki shaadi ho jaaye Maan se

Maan ki om ne Maan se poocha to, he just smiled, and nodded looking at Geet and holding his ear

Geet ke parents Kashihs ko side mein le gaye ki, haan bol de, isse acha rishta kahan milega tujhe.Tumne hamesha hamaa sarr sharam se jhukaya hai, kabhi to hamare liye kuch kar le

G- Mom dad...main hamesha aapki achchi beti banna chahti thi...wo beti jispe aapko garv ho...fakr ho...par..shayad main...par ye karke aap logon ko khushi milegi to...thik hai

Geet's parents happily announce ki Geet maan gayi

Maan takes Geet aside

M-Geet, I...just want to say sorry...about...everything...I know it's such a small word but...and thank you for agreeing for this proposal...

Geet nods lightly looking at her feet

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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update
just don't like maan
if Tara won't get arrested he would have married her
really doubt if he actually have any feelings for geet or only know to use her in his need
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Posted: 8 years ago
Geet ko chelejana chahiye tha!
She shouldn't have agreed...

Insab me mujhe pyar kahi dikh bhi nahi raha!😕

Jo bhi ho maan doesn't deserve geet!

Past aur future ka pata nahi... But abhi maan is🤬

Waiting for next!

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