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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 10

Sab karke she lays on the bed where he had laid down and opened the notebook he was scribbling on sochke ki isko bhi jalaana hai

But it wasn't something written, it was something drawn

It was a girl...the girl was beautiful...the sketch was itself beautiful

It was her...It was Geet...the way she slept

Maan had drawn after may be a decade. He had decided never to draw after that day

G- Maan...goldilocks you fool! You fool! You fool! You fool!

She chants up the note book

Gas jalai, ek page phada jalaya, next page then next page

Maan was also wondering ki itne saalon baad kyun usne draw kiya? Kyun wo roz Geet ke paas jaata hai? Why can't he forget her face? The serenity of her face, the innocence

Geet ek ek karke saare page jala deti hai, until she comes to page he had drawn on. She tears it out of the binding, holds it over fire lekin jalaa nahi paayi, and pulls it back before flames catch it.

Jaakar freezer mein slams it

Baaki sab jala diya aur pen bhi phek diya

She couldn't make herself do it

Ab Geet bahar gai. Wo sunday ko bhi 1 ghant ke liye hotel jati hai, baki uski shopping list wo monkey cap

Geet aaj bahar nikli to aaj sab street sabka mahaul kuch aur hi hai, sab khush hain, lovey dovey hain, streets mein flowers ki khushboo

Today is Valentine's Day

Red roses are being delivered; couples are roaming around hand in hand, some are confessing love, some are reminding, gifting each other, laughing with each other

Today was the day Maan proposed Tara and today was also the day he found that he had run away with his best friend

Maan ne bhi aaj Sunday workout and jo extra office work tha, sab kar liya

Sab karke aaj early drinking ka plan tha

Kahin sunsaan khaayi ke paas saara alcohol lekar plan set tha

He wants to know ki kitna bhi pi le, would he jump? Can he make himself jump...or would he be killed by driving drunk?

Maan baitha hi tha aur bottle kholi hi thi, bottle lips se touch ki hi thi...

Geet monkey cap ke liye pay kar rai thi

Suddenly, she felt like puking, like falling, like earth spinning out of control...in that moment she felt that familiar feeling..she felt him..she felt as she felt when he drunkly held his waist and asked her to stay

Sab chodakr Geet ne kisi se phone ki bheek mangi ek call ek call'

She doesn't have a mobile as she doesnt need a mobile. Wo hotel jaati hai, ghar aati hai, bas that's all

Phone lekar call ki Maan ko

Maan baitha hi tha aur bottle kholi hi thi, bottle lips se touch ki hi thi...phone baja...it's from an unknown number

He was irritated ki who was it to disturb

M-Hello?

G- Don't. Don't do it

M-What? Who is this?

G-It's me...umm ...Geet...

She says in a whisper

M-Geet?

G- Hmm

M-What is it? Are you ok?

First time, in God knows how many years he felt worry

G- I am fine...just don't do it

M-Do what? What are you saying?

G - You were going to...whoever you were going to do...don't do it

She whispers

Maan is silent for a moment and then he frowns

M-How..? How do you know?

G-Doesnt matter. Okay. Stop and go home

M-Are you spying on me???? Who are you?

Peeche se the person asks Geet ki phone dedo

G- Hold on please... just one minute more please...please

She beg the person

G- Dekho tum...faltu ki baatein chodo and just go home

She says over the call to Maan

G-Ulte seedhe kaam karna band karo... stop playing with fate ok...and I have to give the phone back so...please just don't

M-Where are you?

G - Supermarket

M-What place, stupid!

Geet mumbles the address

G-You don't have to come

M-Just stay there

G-There is no point in you coming. Don't come. I'll leave

Maan ne phone kaat dia

Geet returns the phone

Monkey cap bhulkar jo haath mei tha lekar bhagi

Aaj to kismat bhi saath naa de, koi taxi nahi auto nahi

She wants to leave before he gets there but she know she wont

She rips open the purchase looking for the darned gloves

A car screeches and stops

Nikla Maan

Geet starts putting on the gloves, left ka right mein ghusa rahi hai

He holds her wrist

M-Aao

Geet grows cold, hot, stumped, rooted, lightening, everything, nothing...he is so close...his hand on her wrist ...hand in hand

The gloves drop from her fingers

Geet looks at Maan with dying hope...ab to wo gai...ab bas Maan uski complain naa kar de stalker kehkar

He takes her into a lavish secluded sa restraunt where they can talk

Geet ko bithaya tapping her shoulders lightly

She keeps looking at him truly blank

M-Explain

She is silent, jut processing everything

M-Geet! Explain

She snaps out. Looking away for his face, down to those hands

She closes her eyes

G- I am psychic

M-A what?????

He raises an eyebrow

G- Some clairvoyance too...

M-Ohhh all those fraud mumbo jumbo people

She nods, eyes closed. Holding her wrist where he had held her, feeling his fingers branded there

He was looking at her

He realized that she may have felt bad by his comment

M-Hey

He says in his silky low voice

M-How and why do you know things about me? You know about everyone else too? Geet I know...you aren't any fraud you are genuine in whatever you do...you are not a cunning gold digger

G- It happens...I don't want it...it has always happened

She says bitterly but she is so happy inside, so relieved to say it out loud, to have Maan's acceptance. The whole world can go to hell

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow I'm first.. 😃
Mind Blowing Update.. Maan was thinking to commit suicide.. 😲
Geet got a sign beforehand.. 😲
Glad she called him.. Maan came to her 😃
Oh wow she told him the truth.. Truth about her how she knows everything beforehand 😳
Maan believed heeher 😉
Waiting for next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan draws and it's beautiful too . Geet again gets an anxious feeling and can sense Maan taking a wrong step so she phones but this time he wanted to see her probably to find out everything about how she know about him , it actually felt good that Maan realize Geet is not a gold digger and he can tell that she speaks truth .
Now I'm anxiously wanting to know what will Maan decide .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Us nai socha bhi na tha k
Koi hai Jo us ki har ahat ko mehsoos
Kar lagi
Yeh taqdeer hai uski Jo lai hai kareeb
Do dil bath lai dard sary



Zamana k nahi par tere ilzam say
Dar lagta hai
Toh sochey mujh galat is bath say dil Marta hai

For geet

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update
love it
omg. maan want to jump but geet's phone call stops him
she's psyhic nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update maan in devdas mood for tara he was going to try suicide but geet feel it and stop him hmm happy that this time he didnt doubt her thnx 4 pm
swapna.p thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update maan had drawn geets pic she wanted to destroy it but couldn't maan was depressed as it was Valentine's day the same day where he had proposed to Tara and it was the same day she betrayed him by running away with his friend maan thinking of committing suicide geet sensed it she called him and told him not to maan shocked he confronted geet who told she is psychic maan believe her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan was thinking to commit suicide but geet phoned him at that very moment.Maan came to know she has psychic powers and he supported her which was more than enough for geet's happiness.waiting to see what happens next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is called right n proper use of superpowers any person can have. Besides every feel geet always saves the life of ppl. Its another case that maan also comes in the coverage area. The way she made afforts to save his life is awesome. She dont want to have any relation with maan but cant see him dying every moment. Now about maan after feeling betrayal he got some sense of ppl nature as he dont misunderstand her but trying to understand the reason behind her mysterious or weird behaviour. Now i think effort of nature are starting to show their result as they start to have a peacefull convo that too on valentines day. Thanks for pm. Eagerly waiting for next parts.

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