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Posted: 9 years ago
I commend
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 56A
THANKS FOR PW.
MINDBLOWING EPISODE.
LOVED MAANEET SCEENES.
ESPECIALLY VEGGI MARKET SCENE 😃.
AWWW THEY ARE DOING AHEM AHEM 😳.
BT NANO-DEV BECAME KABAB MAI HADDI 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
The veggie market scene is very well written...
Maan got a glimpse of middle class people...
It's good to see them opening bit by bit...
awww...they kissed...
seems like they have really come closer to each other in such a short time...moi wondering what will happen when Vicky would be back...
can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Teaser

Everyone admired Aashi's taste of interiors and antique pieces she chose for her house decor.It was expected as wife of top architects firm owner and herself a fashion designer..On day when Aashi brought old piano from his grand father's ( nannu who was not any more ) house..Param made fun of her still dared not to ask her that it didn't match living room decor.

She smelt it...There was huge husband wife clash for one week where to place it. Aashi's didn't want to hide it and to put it in any dark corner .

It was Geet who sorted out matter n suggested to shift in dinning area. Param felt it strange but he left with no other option.So now it was part of dinning area ..
(intentionally in smaller size)


Geet never tried to be on piano when ever visited but it always attracted her. So what made her today to play these notes ?..Unknowingly how close these were to Maan's heart.

( Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do...Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do..initial music of piano )

He was listening her silently standing far near to stairs.When she was deeply engrossed in rhythm..Suddenly her hands stopped playing feeling his presence around..She turned back.He was there...


Why he was this much disturbed ? Why his eyes gone wet.
" Maan" Geet words broke his trance " Aap yahan...maine socha aap so gaye ? "

"Tum yeh dun (tune) kaise jaanti ho " totally numb he came close to her.


"Aapko yaad hai ? " she replied.He nodded his head.


"Agar yaad hai fir rokka kisne hai...kyo nahi baha dete ( flow away ) is dil per pade pathar( or can say heavy heart ) ko is dun ki lahron per "

Her hands again started to play same tune...After few minutes.He couldn't resist flooded with thousands of emotions he joined her...

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do ...Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do

Aaitbaar Kiska Hai...Intezaar Kiska Hai

Abhi Na Hua To Phir...Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin



Which bond binds them with music and what beautiful revelations from his past ll be there in front of Maan which he never knew...?

Why kids' names sound exactly like Maan's when Geet n Vicky hated him Mannat at starting n Arhaan at last...?


If almighty can forgive hardcore criminals .Didn't he deserve one chance to live ? When no one knew what was hidden in his past...Why a strong heart teenager turned out to be a stone heart to face the world for sake of his dear ones.But what he got in reward just hatred.

I thing its gonna be one of two last updates for the end of this track...



You are absolutely right, Sonia. If hardened criminals are given opportunity for pardon and rehabilitation, then why not maan. Yes, kya tumhe haq hai? Ye sawaal is kahaani ki har ek character par padt hai.

But at the same time, why doesn't this apply to people in another situation, where the person receiving ignorance and punishment is not even told what their fault is? Don't you think this genuine rule needs to be used in all places where it is applicable genuinely? I guess my curiosity is getting the better of me. But still I am feeling the void, which needs to be filled. I know you will soon do that. First you shall update the last part of this track. I am waiting desperately. Love all your stories very much.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

updating today last part of this track just for who expressed their interest in part 56 A


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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update. Maan has changed completly and now want sto live his life like Maan and not MSK. what a drastic change in his attitude. Its all because of Geet. Her support has given courage to Maan too. The last scene was awesome. Maan surrendered himself completly to her and tried to explain hi sside of the story for his behaviour in the past. Looking forward to next part now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update,.. geet took maan to hospital and then market, he was following her like first time seeing different world.geet emotions was high. maan understood her outburst and want a chance
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey part 56 A is just awesome. ...maan's breaking down in Geet's shoulders was quite touvhing.i simply loved the romance between maan and geet..
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Posted: 9 years ago

WOW lovely superb beautiful update yar..te way geet driving and my maan irritating his sherni was lovely cute..te way my maan first time going for veggie sopping with his wife and seeing his typical indian wives ki shopping bechare my maan babu but get use to it maan,next time u will be carrying te bags,he he he..my maan ki face wen she bargain and brought half kilo wat to do we will purchase for lakhs but wen it cums for veggeis we argue for 5 rs tats is indian ladies he he he..te way geet ki hidden desires slowly arousing being with my maan making her helpless tat she cant control at same time she cant voice it,yes she is also a girl with all desires was lovely..opps my maaneet ki kiss after long was lovely beautuful,it was like thirsty man got water after struggling in deserts for ages,really their kiss give live to their soul,very touchy yar...opps now only nano should cum,new story between dev and nano?..i love te update so much yar

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Posted: 9 years ago
LOVED THE WAY U CLEARED THE MISUNDERSTANDING BETWEEN MAAN AND GEET,
LIKED THE WAY U MADE MAAN REALIZED HOW COMMON PEOPLE LEAD THEIR LIVES,
LIKED THE WAY HOW MAAN ACCEPTED AND CLARIFIED HIS POV SEVEN YEARS BACK
LIKED THE WAY HOW MAAN MADE GEET COMFORTABLE AND MADE HER REALIZE THAT ITS NOT WRONG ON HER PART IF HER DESIRES ARE AWAKENED TOWARDS HER SO CALLED HUSBAND,
LOVED THE WAY GEET GOT COMFORTABLE WITH MAAN DURING THESE TWO DAYS
LOVED THE WAY U MADE MY EYES WET WHEN MAAN WAS BEGGING GEET THAT HE WANTS TO LIVE HIS LIFE AGAIN AS HOW AND WHEN HE WAS 10 YEARS OLD...

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