Maaneet SS : A Letter which changed my life update at pg 11 on 7 /5/18

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A Letter which changed my Life

Basically it is my first story in geet forum and if any mistakes to be found then pls ignore it kindly let me know ur views about my story if is bad also. k enough of my bak bak now follow the story.Actually

Prologue

Basically it is the story two different persons who hate each other till the core with no specific reasons. How will the love blossom between these two and how the one letter changed their lives.Lets c now.

Maan Singh Khurana : A very fun loving college guy and intelligent but lazy about studies if he will study he will be the top due to his laziness he always get scoldings from his father but he loves both his parents. Hates geet since childhood and always ready to kill each other.

Geet handa : she is also fun loving girl sincere in studies hates maan and always probe maan father against maan how weak maan in studies and get maan scolded by him .

Maan Friends :

Aaksh Sharma

Rahul nanda

Adhiraj sinha

Vishal mehra

Karan singhania

Geet Friends :

Nandini

Nupur

Paridhi

Meneka

Part 1 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4677871/maaneet-ss-a-letter-which-changed-my-life-update-at-pg-11-on-7-5-18?pn=2

Part 2 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4677871/maaneet-ss-a-letter-which-changed-my-life-update-at-pg-11-on-7-5-18?pn=3

Part 3 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/144263337

Part 4 : 11

Edited by sonakshi.sharma - 7 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats
prologue seems quite interesting!
Maaneet are ever ready to kill each other 😲
would love to read more..
Please add me in ur pm list
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congrats
story look promising
waiting for updates
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Congrats for the new story 👍🏼
Nice prologue... Waiting for the update
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Congo on ur first story on maaneet
seems interesting
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congrats on the SS! superb start! update soon n do pm! thanks
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interesting concept ..
looking forward to it ..
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Part - 1

Maan's mother : Meenakshi Khurana

Maan's father : Vikranth Khurana

Geet's mother : Madhuri handa

Geet's father : Pratap handa

An early morning geet was jogging on the streets of the road with a smiling face enjoying the pleasant nature across her.Geet reached the corner of the her house and saw maan father reading news paper in the lawn and thought to book maan in front of vikranth.

Geet : hi uncle Good morning

Vikrant : Good morning geet have u completed jogging?

Geet : ha uncle to get first in class jogging is important .

Vikrant : What is relation b/w jogging and first rank?

Geet : If we jog mind will be fresh and we can concentrate on studies totally.Is maan also like that

Vikrant : maan aur jog these two are opposite and if mistakenly open the progress report then there will be only zeros. Therefore i gave the books and flask at night to study till 1 am.

Geet : Maan aur 1 am its funny uncle woh 10 pm kidiki pass aaya tha mujhe laga woh sight marne aaya tha par woh toh light switch off karke sogaya tha.

Vikrant: Aaj is maan ka kher nahi. Geet leaves.

Meenakshi comes towards vikrant to give coffee and vikranth asks ye dusra cup kya hai .Meenakshi says maan ke liye coffee hai.

Vikranth : aaj isse mein doonga coffee

A well furnished room with the posters of the different heroines in sexy poses.Maan was sleeping on the bed on his own dream land . Vikranth went towards maan put the hand in the hot coffee. By sensing burning finger maan woke up at once.

Maan : Kya hai papa yeh mere ungli kitni jal raha hai

Vikranth: wake up call itni der so raha hu sharam nahi aati

Maan : son eke liye neend zarori hai sharam nahi

Vikranth : bakwass band kato aur kal raat maine kitne baje tak padne ke liye bola tha

Maan : 1 baje bola tha aur maine 2 baje tak pada isme mein bhi problem hai kya

Vikranth:Tum kitne baje tak padai ki thi sari information aaya tha

Maan : kisne bola tha?

Vikranth : Geet ne

Maan muttered iss geet ko tho baad mein dekthe hai and said to vikranth "kk agar light off kiya toh nahi pada kya".

Vikranth : toh light off karke kya kar rahe the

Maan : Yaad kar rahe the

Vikranth : yaad kar rahe the kisko

Maan : subject ko

Vikranth : Nalayak us geet ko deko hamesha padai padai aur tum deko kisi kaam ki nahi .

Meenakshi enters into maan room

Meenakshi : subah subah maan per kyun chillarahe ho?

Vikranth : lo ye cup ye pillov aur aake daattha hu and he leaves

Maan : dekho maa papa hamesha mujh per shout kartha rahtha hai

Meenakshi : tum bura mat maano baeta jake ready hoja college ke liye ho rahi na.

At geet house,

Geet comes with a face pack in front of madhuri madhuri asks" what is it on the face "

Geet : mamma face pack hai

Madhuri : ye face pack,mouth lock se better haldi lagado tho kitna acha rehta

Geet : poor mamma woh sab old fashion hai

Pratap(geet dad):fashion aur style ke bare tumhari mamma ko kya pata hai bilkul tasteless hai in a comic way

Meenakshi : isliye toh maine appse shadi ki

Pratap : mujh mein kya kami

Meenakshi : height hum dono saath jathe toh sab log has rahe hai

Pratap : agar aisa hai toh main kisi aur ke saath jata. meenakshi fumes and leaves.

After some time Geet shouts " maa mere dupatta kaha hi is dress ka "

Meenakshi : upar terrace per hai

Geet : kya maa app sham ko lekar aana chahiye na

Meenakshi : yeh kaam tum bhi toh kar sakte ho na ghar mein em kaam bhi nahi karte ho

Geet : papa urgently nayi maa ko le aana

Pratap : ha beta mein bhi soch rahi hu kal hum exbhition jarahe hi na vaha nayi maama ko select karo

Geet : teek hai papa

Geet reached terrace looking for her dupatta and saw maan cleaning the bike with geet dupatta and shouts " re maan"seeing geet maan clean the bike with dupatta with more pressure.

Geet : why are u cleaning with my dupatta its a costly one . u r doing it deliberately na ?

Maan : if i know it is yours then i will clean the bath room and throw the duppata towards geet. Geet sees the material with all oil stains andU stupid , idiot

Maan : wear this oil stain dupatta then server oil company will give the award

Geet : u idiot,stupid

Maan : geeet tum ladke ko datraraha hu

Geet : aaj kal tumhe aise ladke hone ka doubt bhi aaraha hai kya?

Maan : oye

Geet : abhi bhi tum movie dekhe rote ho

Maan : aaj bhi tum ko toh ghar ka kaam nahi athi hai

Geet : aaj bhi uncle se daat kathe ho sharam nahi aathi

Maan : mujhe kyun sharamana hai yeh to tume aani chahiye o sorry tum ladki ho toh sharmathi ho na subha subha jogging ke naam pe shorts pehenke bahar ghumti ho

Geet : ja re kutta

Maan : lomdi(fox)

Geet : gadha

Maan : gadhi , kamini

Vikranth and pratap meets ouside the house

Pratap : subah subah shuru haga dona

Vikranth : ha naya hai kya hum logo ke liye

Pratap : ha dono ne nayi nayi bhasa mein lad rah rahe hai. meri beti bhi kam nahi hai

Vikranth : shayad mere bte ko mera hi inspiration haga. agar koi bhi aas pass ka ghar hi toh dono dosti karege nahi toh love karege agar zyada hai toh shaadi karege yeh dono salo saal ladadi hi kar rahe hai.

Pratap : ha sahi baati hai teek hai mein chalthe hu nahi tho in dono ke chakkar mein late honge .

Vikranth : maan ruk jao abh ladadi mein nahi padadi mein compete karo.

Geet : dekha uncle kaisa baat kar ra hai maan

Vikranth : ha geet mujhe pata hai tum gold ho tum jao aab

Geet : bye uncle. Maan reluctatedly leaves to collage .

Precap : maaneet at collage

Edited by sonakshi.sharma - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for story
very funny update
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Imp Note :
Thanks for ur coments and likes U want story of maaneet silly fighting or maaneet love story based on ur comments i will post the further story pls reply me in 2-3 days
Thank you

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