Maaneet SS : A Letter which changed my life update at pg 11 on 7 /5/18 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3

Maan house,
At night maan was seeing magazines of models ad maan father saw that and took the magazine from him and gave the project books and said to complete it and goes.maa makes faces and murmmers i also wish to study but by opening the book only gets sleep and walks on the terrace and lits the cigarette and saw geet from other side balcony and murmmers" by looking average only flys high then if she is more beautiful then she sits on the sky"geet speaking on the phone and signals him to turn back. When maan turns maan father looks on and says "ok geet u can keep the phone i will talk to him". Geet says"ok uncle".maan mother saw maan father with cigarette and says" if u will smoke then ur helath will spoil dont u know this?. Maan father says"say this ur beloved son he is smoking".Maan mother says "maan from where u get the money for cigarettte"Maan father says" robery Chori:
Maan mother says" from our family none will do like robery"Maan " maa from my pocket money only i bought cigarette"Maan father " pocket money means not from out siders pockets from my pockets only so from now onwards ur pocket money is cut"maan angrily shouts geeett.

Morning at college,
maan and his friends at college canteen and geet passes by and maan stops geet,
maan : geet why did u complaint about my cigareete to my dad
Geet : y did u game me a still
maan : ha ur looking lke a heroine ur name is geet not deepika and look once in a mirror
Geet : u only look like dustbin
maan :u only look like chewing on the slipper dont be like jealous looks at vishal
vishal gestures dont stop go in a flow
Maan : daily wore new dress to college u think she will buy no she is doing part time job in laundray and wear the customer dress
Geet : when u open the mouth only lies
Maan : when u open the mouth only cavities
Geet: go away baverse
Maan : karshi shambu
Geet: fool
Maan : u fool
Geet: kuthe
Maan :idiot
maan and geet got ready fight and their friends stop each other and take to class.

Edited by sonakshi.sharma - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Note : hi guys am so sorry for not updating so many months and sorry is not enough bur pls forgive me and i will be regular now onwards and so biggg sorryyyand on small suggestion is if u want more of maaneet hate story or if u want to move story forward then pls let me know
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
thanks 4 da pm! welcome back! superb update! well written! Maaneer forever fighting! Geet complained 2 his dad n Maan angry! their friends try to stop their fight! update soon! interesting teaser! wld like the story 2 move ahead! pls add that u updated today after the pg 8 so readers will know! 😃
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Prologue is interesting

Maan and Geet hate each other and she always tells his
dad just how weak he is in studies
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Chapter 1

Geet really makes sure that Maan gets into trouble with his father
and for revenge he takes her duppata and cleans his bike
surely Maan hates her because she interferres in his life
always telling tales to his father
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Chapter 2

Gosh ! Maan's friends are all mischievous
but ouch Geet and Maan in college their fights are like little kids
in class though it seems like Maan is very intelligent
the proffessor seems to like or adore the girls in his class
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Chapter 3

The moment Maan feels he can smoke Geet is on call to his father
and his father now has reprimanded him
well he too should get Geet into trouble
again at college their fight starts and their friends had to pull them apart

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Posted: 7 years ago
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when can we expect next update?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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its now 3 months since you updated
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Eagerly waiting for you to continue please

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