MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Maan proposed her lovely their marriage date fixed great thnx 4 update

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priyal12

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Posted: 8 years ago

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PART 13
Next day ,
Geet get ready to go to school, Shalini and her parents see her.
Geet mom: kaha ja rahi ho preeti.
Geet: Main school ja rahi hun.
Mom: Beta tumhari Shadi hone wali hai. School se chutti le le.
Shalini: Are jane dijiye , kal se nhi jayegi Geet aap bat kar lena school me.
Geet goes to school. Like always maan waits for her outside at school. Maan see Geet coming. He sees Geet wore beautiful green saree. He takes her with him. They go to mandir.Maan holds her hand .
Maan: Geet I cant explain how much happy i am . I love you a lot. Tum sirf meri ho.
Geet: Ha sirf aapki.
Maan: Hum aise hi milenge ro shadi hone tak. Jab tak tumko dekh nhi leta na Geet ye dil tadpta rehta hai.
Geet : Par hum nhi mil sakte. Maa ne kaha hai mujhe school se chhuti leni hai. Maine le li. Main kal se school nhi jaa rahi.
Maan pulled her close
Maan: Geet main tumse mile bina kaise rahunga.
Geet: Rehna to padega. Chhodiye mujhe koi dekh lega. Is tarah thik nhi lagta
Maan: Chhod dunga. Par mlenge to hum roj . I am MSK jo main kehta hun wo to hoga hi.
Maan leaves her.
Geet: Mujhe ghar jana hai. Sab wait kar rahe honge.
Maan: Koi wait nhi kar raha. Maine ghar me keh diya hai ki main tumhare sath time spend karna chahta hun. Ab chalo .
Geet goes with him.
Geet: Hum kaha ja rahe hai?
Maan dont answer. Maan takes her to mansion.
Geet: Ye aap.Dadi ko pata hai main aane wali hun.
Maan: Dadi Delhi gayi hai. Shadi ki taiyari ke related maine unhe kitna mana kiya par wo sunti hi nhi.
Geet and maan goes inside
Maan takes her to his room.
Maan:Ab tak ye sirf mera room tha par ab ye hum dono ka hoga. Tum kuchh badlna chahti ho is room mein to batado main kal ki kaam shuru kar dunga.
Geet: nahi, jaisa bhi hai achha hai.
Maan : Phir bhi Geet.
Geet kept her finger on his lips made him silent. She hided her head in his chest and hugged him. Maan hugged her back. Kissed her on hairs. Geet felt calm
Geet:I love you maan. Main aapke dil me rehna chahti hun. Aap mujhse pyar karte hai mere liye yahi boht hai.
Maan hugged her even more tight.
Maan: I love you a lot. Meri jaan ho tum. Bas aise hi bahon me rakhne ka dil karta hai.
Maan seperates her.
Maan: Chalo Geet dinner karte hai.
Maan takes her to terrace. Geet sees arrangement and feel amazed.
Maan sits on chair but do not allow geet to sit.
Maan pulls Geet and makes her sit on his lap.
Geet:aap ye...
Maan makes her quite.
Maan feeds Geet. Geet too feed him. They do dinner.
Geet: Chhodiye ab boht der ho gayi hai . mujhe ghar jana hai .
Geet tries to go but maan hold her in his arms .
Geet: Mujhe niche utariye.
But he dont listen her. And takes her to his room. Makes her stand before mirror. He moves her hair aside from neck. When his fingers touch her neck she feels her breath increased.
Geet: Ye aap
Maan: ssshhh... Trust me. Maan sees geet closed her eyes. He pecks on her neck. Ties chain with diamond pendant . Open your eyes geet.
Geet opens her eyes. She sees chain
Geet: Its beautiful .
Maan: Trust me Geet. Maine tumse kha na main aisa kuch nhi karunga jisse tumhe bura lage. He took his lips near her face geet again closed her eyes. Maan kissed her eyes and forhead.
Maan: Kitna sharmaogi Geet. Abhi to chhod deta hun. Par ... Anyways Lets go main tumhe drop kar deta hun
Precap:Maneet engagement

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Awesome update dear , loved it...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

hi thanks 4 da awesome update, well written! Maan arranges something special n gifts her a diamond pendant! update soon

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Madhu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Maaneet spending time with each other :D
Beautiful moments!!

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priyal12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

PART 14

Maan dropped Geet home. When she entered home. She saw Shalini and her mother sitting in living room.

Geet: Aap soye nahi abhi tak. Shalini said to sit her

Shalini:Jis ghar ki beti ki shadi hone ja rahi ho wo ghar shanti se kaise so sakta hai. Sahi kaha na maine?

G. Mom: Jee bilkul sahi. Main to preeti ki shadi ko lekar kitna pareshan rehti thi. Par main boht khush hun. Kitna achha ghar mila meri beti ko ,aap preeti ko kitna pyar karti hain.meri bachhi boht lucky hai.

Shalini: Itna sab hone ke bad bhi aap mujhe ye keh rahi hai.

Geet : Maa aap aisa mat bolo.

Shalini hugged her.

G. Mom: Aap ki koi galti nahi thi ji galti halato ki thi. Aapne apna beta khoya hai. To apka aisa bartav karna shayad galat nhi tha.

Shalini: Chhodo ye sab bate. Jaa beta so jaa.

G. Mom: beta ye chain gale me.

Geet blushed

Geet: Wo mom maan ne...

Shalini and mom smiled

Shalini: kal hame shopping ke liye amritsar jana hai, subah jaldi uthna .Jaa aram kar le

Geet went to her room. She recalling how she and maan met each other till how maan proposed her she blushed as she remembered his words and drifted to sleep while thinking about him.

Here In KM,

Maan saw Geets photograph and saying " Sab kitna pyara lag raha hai Geet. Tumhare aane se pehle ye zindagi zindagi nhi thi Geet. Bas yuhi jita tha na koi wajood. Tumne mujhe jine ka wajood diya hai. Tumhe main itna khush rakhunga Geet boht khush rakhunga. And hold her photograph near his heart. He too drifted into sleep.

Next morning

Geet and all other members get ready.

Shalini: Vikram beta tumne gadi bula di na .

G. Mom: Preeti ke papa hote tho hame alag gadi bulani nhi padti par unhe achanak court ka kam aa gaya.

Shalini: Aap bhi na itni choti bat. Chaliye

Nandini: Chaliye maa gadi aa gayi hai.

They left for amritsar . As they reached the shop They saw Savitridevi and maan there. Maan looked at Geet and smiled whereas Geet blushed.

Dadi: Aa gaye aap ki hi rah delh rahe the. Chaliye.

All were busy with shopping whereas maan was watching Geet only.

They did there shopping.

Dadi: Maan aap ne kuch pasand kiya.

Maan: Mujhe ye sab kuch samajh nhi aata dadi aap hi lijiye jo apko theek lage.

Dadi got idea.

Dadi: Jao beta Geet maan ki madad karo. Waise bhi maan ka khayal tumhe hi rakhna hai aadat dal do.

Geet went with maan. She was selecting sherwani for him.

Geet: Ye kaisa hai ?

Maan constantly looking at her. Geet called him taking him out of his trance

Maan: haa achha hai. Tumhe jo achha lage wo le lo.

Geet: par

Maan: Geet

Geet: Ok.

Geet said to salepersons she want to see more. Sales person went to get more.

Maan: Kya Geet itna bhi kya dekhna koi ek le lo.

Geet: Aisa nahi hota Maan. Aap rehne dijiye me dekhti hun . chuchap baithe rahiye.

Maan: Abhi se Bossy.

Geet was about to say something but suddenly lights went off . Geet feared she hugged him tightly. Maan hugged her back. After few moments lights back. Geet come out of hug. Person said sorry for the lights problem. Geet selected dress for him. They went to dadi.

Dadi: Ho gaya aapka. Chaliye ab ring bhi leni hai.

Nandini said something to Dadi in her ears

Dadi: Beta aap Geet ko lekar jwellary shop jaiye. Tab tak hum baki kam kar lete hai.

Maan : Are you sure?

Shalini and others understood what dadi wants.

Shalini: Haa beta dhero kam hote hai. Hum wo kar lete hai. Waise bhi hume jwellar shop se kuch lena nhi hai.

Dadi: jao.

Geet went with Maan. They entered in jwellary shop. Shopkeeper showing them rings. Maan and geet were selecting rings.

Shopkeeper: This one is very beautiful

Maan and Geet simultaneously said no. After it shopkeeper showed them more.

Finally Geet and maan liked One simple but beautiful.

Geet: Maan apko konsi pasand aayi

Maan: Tum hi select karo. In her ears he said mujhe jo select karna tha wo to maine kar liya shopping to bahana hai tumhare sath waqt bitane ka

She smiled. After selected one for maan. Then Maan took her to restaurent.

Geet: Maan yaha to koi bhi nahi hai.

Manager: Welcome sir . aapne jaise kaha arrangements ho gaye. Manager took him to place .

Geet saw the decorations.

Geet: Ye sab.

Maan:main har moment special banana chahta hun. Is tarah ki har pal ko yad karke bas muskurahat aaye chehre par.

They finished lunch and left.

Precap: Engagement

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Jasmine

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

i didnt get pm 4 last few parts.so i thot u discontinued it.was sad too.happy 2 c u back.maaneet proposal scene was romantic.maaneet dialogues abt they belong 2 each other was romantic.no words abt dinner.too romantic.light off scene n hug was another romantic scene.waiting 4 engagement