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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

awesome cs loved the characters waiting for ur update dear

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Ye hui na true maaneet writer waali baat... ek story finish hui tho doosri yaha shuru...

Congo for the new story rashmi... looking forward to read u more...

Pv khatham hua tho mein soch rahi thi meri rozi roti kaise chalegi ab... PV ke banners and headers hi aajkal fixed hota hai mere LPW mein... iske bina lpw par kya daaloongi... but u r saviour... ab yaariyan aa gaya😳

Prologue

interesting hai... maaneet freinds hai par freinds hai bhi nahi... ye kaise... and geet kyu aur kaha gayi maan ke life mein se? maan jaisa dashing munda kahi aur thode na milega use😆

prologue is like showing a chat stall far away to a bhukkad... ab jab tak waha pahunchke chat haath mein na mile tab tak chain nahi... waise hi prologue se kya hota hai ... updates dena shuru kar... 😳

characters

sab ache siwaay ek DEV😡

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ab khud ka banaaya hai tho kya boloo... just i enjoyed making them😆 and looking forward to make more😳

Edited by -lakshmi- - 9 years ago

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Prologue is really interesting dii..
Its much about friendship 😊
Will be waiting to see a devil geet and sober maan 😃
thanku for pm

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Sana

@luvvivian286

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Nice concept

Interesting prolong

Awesome character sketch

Continue soon

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metromasti

@metromasti

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Congrats for new story 😊
awesome & interesting prologue ... looks like maaneet are friends ... but their relation is sweet , sour & chili ki perfect combi 😉 geet is devil & her one & only target is maan 😃
waiting for update 😊

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

My first waiting post for yaariyaan😃

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
Ye hui na true maaneet writer waali baat... ek story finish hui tho doosri yaha shuru...

Congo for the new story rashmi... looking forward to read u more...

Pv khatham hua tho mein soch rahi thi meri rozi roti kaise chalegi ab... PV ke banners and headers hi aajkal fixed hota hai mere LPW mein... iske bina lpw par kya daaloongi... but u r saviour... ab yaariyan aa gaya😳

Prologue
interesting hai... maaneet freinds hai par freinds hai bhi nahi... ye kaise... and geet kyu aur kaha gayi maan ke life mein se? maan jaisa dashing munda kahi aur thode na milega use😆

prologue is like showing a chat stall far away to a bhukkad... ab jab tak waha pahunchke chat haath mein na mile tab tak chain nahi... waise hi prologue se kya hota hai ... updates dena shuru kar... 😳

characters
sab ache siwaay ek DEV😡

Banner header

ab khud ka banaaya hai tho kya boloo... just i enjoyed making them😆 and looking forward to make more😳

Ab Maaneet ke bina zindagi adhoori hai..pahle ye mer aadat the ab zaroorat ban gaye hain (HAHA... Geet ka dialague hai- Maan ne Geet ke liye bola maine Maaneet ke liye bol diya😆😆😆)..agar likhna chhod dya to itni attention kaise milegi..

aur phir sabse badi baat-TERA KYA HOGA LAKSHU(Again Sholey ka dialague-Gabbar ne bola Kaliya ke liye..Maine tere liye bola 🤣🤣 ) waise bhi hum business partner hain na😆😆

ab chat ke stall ka wait karo khud ke paas aane ka tan tak taste imagine karti raho..

chaho to khud k creaton k tarif kar sakti ho..main bura nahin maanungi😆😆

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
My first waiting post for yaariyaan😃

And I want to see more and more😆😆

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parini

@parini

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Nice prologue
Waiting for your chapter

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Ab Maaneet ke bina zindagi adhoori hai..pahle ye mer aadat the ab zaroorat ban gaye hain (HAHA... Geet ka dialague hai- Maan ne Geet ke liye bola maine Maaneet ke liye bol diya😆😆😆)..agar likhna chhod dya to itni attention kaise milegi..
aur phir sabse badi baat-TERA KYA HOGA LAKSHU(Again Sholey ka dialague-Gabbar ne bola Kaliya ke liye..Maine tere liye bola 🤣🤣 ) waise bhi hum business partner hain na😆😆
ab chat ke stall ka wait karo khud ke paas aane ka tan tak taste imagine karti raho..
chaho to khud k creaton k tarif kar sakti ho..main bura nahin maanungi😆😆

waah aaj tho bade dialogues maar rahi ho

jaldi se update do tho mein bhi boloo lakshu khush hui😆(mr india ka dialogue mogambo ka😉)