MG OS : NEVER MEANT TO BE || PART 2(a) PAGE 16|| JUNE 25 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Prologue
Maan is confused why geet is claiming Khushi her daughter when khushi is Maan,s and Divya,a daughter
Waiting for the story to unfold
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow lovely fav of my maaneet..lovely interesting pro dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update plzz dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update wen u can, thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Intro
Please add me in😉😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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will b waiting 4 an update
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hi there! wishing u will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

eagerly awaiting updates


its already written i will find the parts and shall post
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Posted: 8 years ago
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~NEVER MEANT TO BE~

PART- 1

@cutical and khwaishfan thanks for waiting

Time was never in favor of geet.. She always had been alone at that time too and now, things didn't changed. She lives in the loneliness that was gifted to her by her own decisions all alone. She never let her parents interfere in her life after that incident the life changing events that changed her perspective of life. She didn't knew how she grew up from a bubbly twenty two year old to a cold, unreachable girl. she was never a cold hearted and detached geet , she was also full of life she knew how to enjoy her life... how to let her self-indulge in those fun filled activities that will gradually change into a cherish able moments of life... the sweet moments that she will always remember and then will probably laugh out loud...

But life never gives us what we desire.. that's what happened with her the only man whom she loved with all her heart and soul left her alone to face all those allegations on her... the love that she once felt was no less than a nightmare she felt... but the feelings that she underwent through the life that she had nurtured in her womb made her alive once again... she won't deny that she wasn't an unmarried mother and was that her fault when her baby's father turned out to be a Scoundrel and a total B**** he had just used her for completing his so called lust ... the emotions that she thought were out of his love their love were just his lust. His raw physical desires that he accomplished through her...

Constant tears were pouring out of her eyes.. Today she got to know that the precious life for whom she had fought with everyone was alive... till now everything was broken and blurred but she didn't knew that there was everything in a web of lie created by her own parents.. But now everything was crystal clear khushi was her daughter..Her daughter...

Geet laughed and cocooned the small soft toys that she had brought for khushi.. to gift her thinking that she would gift those fluffy soft bunnies to khushi as she always love the soft things to play with and the next moment It will be in her mouth cherishing her favorite soft toy...

Geet cried in happiness she curled herself... she hadn't thought that she will ever in her life will get this happiness back ..Getting her baby back. But it seems like god have shown pity on the mother who cries for her baby and was craving for her one touch...

Geet: thank you babaji for bringing her back in my life ... I can't repay to you what you have given me ...

It's been four hours she had confronted maan about her daughter and since then she was there trying to get all the possible ways to get her child back and the main thing that how did her baby went to maan ..That was the main question... and she needs her answer ...

Geet quickly wiped her tears and called her parents asking them to reach Delhi as soon as possible she can't take this pain any more she needs her baby ...

Geet: maa I need you and papaji here ..Please come fast...

She was sounding low and vulnerable though geet didn't say anything but she wanted them there ..and sounding aggressive wont work she knew when they had played with her life so being a little manipulative will not hurt ...

MAAN immediately went home..he didn't knew but today he was feeling that geet was saying truth but his mind was not accepting... khushi was his daughter and divya gave her birth then how come geet be her mother and why was she claiming khushi to be hers... his mind questioned...she was not even married ... he questioned...

His mother was surprised to see him early and before she could ask anything he went to khushi's nursery. There she was sleeping and her nanny was just sitting ... though no one in the family wanted nanny for khushi but maan knew that he couldn't let his responsibility be taken lightly, he knew how his family , his dadima and mother wanted him to get marry again , just for the sake of khushi but he couldn't. One such argument had lead maan to hire a nanny for his daughter even though still his mom does all her work and never lets nanny touch the little one but still she didn't say anything since she knew what wants ...

Baby just had her milk and was sleeping.. The nanny informed..maan nodded and asked her to go...

Maan: you can go...

The nanny left the father to spent some good quality of time with his baby.. maan was actually having a slight fear when geet very confidently said that she can prove that khushi is hers and even she is ready to go on medical terms... this was something that he was dreading what if the baby's DNA matched with hers ..said his one weak side...

Maan would have continued in his thoughts when the slight whimper let him know that his baby was wide awake and has again sensed her dadda and was now all ready for her naughtiness...

When maan looked at her crib she was sitting holding her teddy and was looking at him with an angry baby face...

Maan quickly went near her and took the baby in his arms cocooning her..She immediately placed her head on his chest feeling protected and pretending like she was all tired ... maan knew her all sweet and cute naughtiness starts as soon as she gets up..

Maan kissed her nose making her giggle. He was tickling her and now this is not possible that she would remain behind... she immediately looked at maan giving him sloppy kisses... and then she herself laughed. While maan made a baby face...

Maan: baby is getting naughty day by day...

Khushi giggled blabbering in her baby language trying to make her father understand what she meant...

Khushi: eeh... Ah...

Maan laughed when she didn't stop...

Maan: so you played with daadi..And then she nodded like she understood..

Maan took her with him to his room... and settled her on bed in his lap and rested himself on the bed post making her giggle playing with her trying to forgot his earlier confrontation with geet.

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