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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: priya_21



likh tu lu mein phle puri

ya adhi dedu


Nahi nahi full doh
Haan ho sakhey double dhey doh
Hume koi aapathi nahi hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
awesome update .
geet ko abhi bhi lag raha hai maan usse naraz hai issliye aisa bol raha hai ? geet maan ko pareshan kar rehi hai and maan irritate ho gaya geet and uski antics se .
waise agar mujhe bhi koi pareshan kare yea zabardashti mere life mei gusna chahe toh mujhe bhi bohot gussa aayega ...toh I can understand maan's irritation but still itna rude behave karna yea kaha se sahi hai ? maan is going to regret big tym .
precp dekhke lagta hai chahat aane wali hai and geet ka reality check .
accha hai jinti jldi geet khud ko samhl le ..barna baad mei woh tut jayegi .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
maan is really behaving badly with geet
but geet is confident that maan will come to her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Priya
Di Prologue me kya hai..
abhi I am confused ..
Maan chahat Geet ..
teeno...
ki feeling tangled .. lag rahi ..
hai ...
precap

Chahat to nahi aa rahi ...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
oh boy!!!
geet is going to be so damn hurt with the reality check.
she still living in hope that maan might consider her love and stop the divorce..
i so want to cry..when geet all hope will die.

continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46



[MEMBERSONLY]

Part 16

After thinking about geet at last maan get solution of this problem...

Maan : geet

Geet

Geet come running in room , first time actually he call her first time... he close the door then make her sit on bed...

Maan : I want to talk with you

Geet : ji

.

Maan open the laptop and login in face book account and then move the screen towards her...

Maan : mujhe nhi

Screen ko dekho

.

Ye chahat hai

Meri

Geet : aapki friend

I know

Aap nhi the na

Toh hum aapki tasveere hi dekh liya krte the

.

Maan : you sees the images already

Geet : yes

Maan : geet she is not only my friend

.

We going to marry with each other too soon

.

Geet : aapki shaadi ho chuki hai humse

.

Maan : forced marriage thi wo

And I don't love you

.

I love chahat

.

Tumhe dikhta nhi

Mein aur chahat kitne khush hai ek sath

.

Jo tum jabardasti humare beech aane ki koshish kr rhi ho

.

Geet : aap jhooth kh rhe hai na

.

Maan : no geet

Yhi sch hai

.

I don't want you in my life

I want her

.

Geet (whisper) mein kaise apne maan ke dil ko nhi smjh paayi

Wo apne geet ke bina rh sakte hai

Aur hum nhi smjh paaye

.

He held her by shoulder make her stand...

Maan : geet

Tum kya badbda rhi ho

.

Geet : hum galat the maan

.

Hum sch mein aapko nhi smjh paaye

.

He sees immense pain on her face, he try to hold her, but she takes step back...

Geet : ye haq aap kho chuke hai

.

Sch humare saamne the maan

.

Kitni baar aap dono ke sath ki tasvevr dekhi humne

Par humesha yhi mana

Humare Maan galat nhi hai

I trust you

.

Aap jaante hai geet aapka intzaar kr rhi hai

Toh aap kaise apni geet ka vishwaas tod sakte hai

.

Par hum galat the

Geet apne maan ko kbhi smjh hi nhi paayi

.

aap hume wo paper dijiye

.

Maan : geet

Wo mein

.

Geet : paper

.

Maan : hmm

.

He handover the paper to her... She goes outside from room...

*********

Guatami : acha huya tum dono aa gye

Dinner bs lag gya hai

Geet : maa

Papa

I want divorce from maan

.

Ram : is gadhe ne kuch kaha tumse

.

Geet : papa

Sch humesha mere saamne the

Mein hi pagal usse dekh nhi paayi

.

Ram : geet kya huya beta

.

Geet : nothing

Maan pen please

.

Maan : hmm

.

She takes pen from him and signed the paper then give paper back to him...

Maan : thanks geet

For understanding me

.

She laugh little... and said hum aapko nhi smjh paaye hai maan

.

Geet : maa - papa

Ab mujhe yaha se chalna chaiye

.

Bs mujhe kuch waqt dijiye

Hum apna samaan pack kr lete hai

.

Gautami : tum khi nhi jaayongi geet

Ram : ye ghar tumhara hai

.

Geet : ab mera yaha rhehna galat honga papa

Aur rahu bhi kis haq se

.

Karan : kyun galat hai geet

Ye ghar tumhare paiso se bna huya hai

.

Toh koi jaayenga bhi toh wo hum hai

Tum nhi

.

Geet : nhi bhaiya

.

Nandini : shi kh rhe hai karan

Gautami : tumhe humne apni beti maana hai geet

.

Geet : nhi maa

.

Karan : geet tum khi nhi jaa rhi ho

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Geet : aap sb toh smjhiye mujhe

I can't live here anymore.

Aap sbko meri kasam

.

Koi nhi rokenga mujhe

*********

She packs all things, and takes one of his images too...

Maan : sb packing ho gyi

Geet : ha

.

Maan : mein tumhe chod deta hu

Jaha tumhe jaana hai

.

Geet(think) ek baar jhootha rok hi lete maan

.

She passes the smile and said chod toh chuke hai

Ab aur kitna chodna baki hai maan

.

She last time seen her and left the place... She not hugged to anyone; don't want to break down in front of him...

**********

play this music you can feel geet pain more beautifully




From past half an hour she is walking lifelessly on road... Not know how can her maan love someone else... one side want to believe this reality another side not ready to hear reality voice... because it's giving immense pain in heart ...feeling any second her heart come out from her body... she reached some park , many couples roaming in park for night walk ..Some children also playing...

.

.

She close the eyes feel his presence around own, he wrapped hand around her, she placed head on his shoulder, tear falls...

Why you did this maan

Kya galati thi humari

Kya aapse pyaar krna gunaah tha

.

Maan why

.

Zindagi, kahan kahan se, guzarti chali gayi?
Main sochti rahi, sochti hi rahe gayi...
Zindagi, kahan kahan, se guzarti chali gayi?

She stand & start walk, he entangles finger with her...

Maan I don't getting today, where my life taken me

Phle toh aap the na sath

Toh aapse shuru hoke

Whi khatam ho jaati thi

Par ab kya karu mein

.

In mid she stop and hugged him tightly placed head on his heart...

I just want to become part of your heart maan

I always look from your eyes

Always think about you

.

Kaha galat thi geet maan

She takes step back and said har jagah toh aap hai maan

Jbse aap gye hai

Har jagah maine bs aapko hi dekha hai

Maan ko ye acha lagta hai

Ye nhi

.

Geet maan ko tujhpe ye color pasand hai

Ye unhe bilkul pasand nhi

Khud ko kya pasand hai

Ye toh mujhe yaad hi nhi ab

.

Pata hai kitna kuch tha aapko btane ko

While purchasing this house I specially see bathroom attached hai ya nhi

Kyunki pta hai mujhe

Aapko common washroom use krna pasand nhi

.

Kehta hai dil, ab tujhme samaa jaon.

Ankhon se teri dekho, tere labse muskurao.

Ankhon se tere dekho, tere labse muskurao.

Yeh ek pal ki hazrat, tadap ti hi rahe gayi...

Zindagi, kahan kahan, se guzarti chali gayi?

.

Chothe -chothe khawab the mere maan

Jb aap aayonge

Toh mere sath time spend krne ke bahane dundonge

.

Jaise karan bhaiya krte hai

.

Kbhi pani ke bahane

Kbhi button

Kbhi kuch

Kbhi kuch

.

My nights incomplete from last 10 years...aur ab puri hone ki koi umeed bhi nhi bchi

Every wish of mine, every thirst going to incomplete

.

Har dua mein aapko maanga

Jb bhi hath felaye aapki khushi ko maanga

Par nhi jaanti thi mein

Mera khud ke damaan mein bs kaate rahenge

.

Kuch baat hai adhoori, kuch raat adhoori hai.
Hoti jo akele main, mulaqaat adhoori hai.
Hoti jo akele main, mulaqaat adhoori hai.
Har aarzoo hamari, taras ti hi rahe gayi...
Zindagi, kahan kahan, se guzarti chali gayi?

She fall on ground try to control own self... She screamed whyyy maan

Why

Kyun daadi aap hume akela chodke chali gyi

Why you not take me too with you

Dekhiye jis maan ke hath mein apni geet ka hath diya tha

Usne usse kaha laake choda hai mujhe

.

Jaha na hum jee sakte hai unke bina

Aur na hi mr sakte hai

Precap : chahat & maan marriage talk

Note : I cried😭 ...I don't know what you feel

Please do long comment

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next update after 35 page

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Emotional update dear, poor geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Emotional update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
hate u maan...hate u...never forgive u to make geet cry...u will never b happy n dat time u will come to realise wht u lost...

painful update...


thank u very much fr d painful update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Finally I am done reading.
That was too painful priya.
Geet signed the moment maan said he loved someone.
I really didn't expect ram and gautam will accept geet leaving home,i thought mayb they will ask maan to leave,but geet stopped them by giving her promise.
Even after betrayal geet is finding maan in every place and every damn thing.
Poor her,geet needs support nah priya she is all alone ,why can't ram,gauyami karan took care of her.
How can they just let her go.
This maan is soo selfish,i just hope he too feels the pain one day what geet is now going through.
I WANT TO SLAP MAAN IN THIS ONE AND IN LIFE A DREAM ONE TOO,PLZZ NAA PRIYA EK TAPPAD TOH BANTHA HAI
Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago

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