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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .hayaat.

maan unneccerarily gets angry on geet
liked that geet replied back
now its time maan cmon see her good side ...

thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago


Part 7 -


" Maan app Geet ko gumana kaha le jarahe hai ? " Dadima asked as them at dining table ..its almost a month they are married but they couldn't go because of her health... both always stay worried because of her ...but now she is fine ...so she wants them to enjoy their married life...

Geet almost chocked her food understanding Dadima's wish ...but Maan only surged his shoulder " kahi pe bhi nehi ..Dadima im busy now I can't...if she feel bored she can go out with her friends ...like she always do .." he doesn't want to sound bitter but the words come out automatically...


giving a glare at him Geet was about to say something but stop hearing Dadima ..." Maan bete humare bahar gumne Jane ka matlab the aap log honeymoon pe kaha ja rahe ho...? And also Geet can't go honeymoon with her friends right "


" mere sath jake bhi kya karegi ? friends are her everything it's better she go with them " he mumbled to himself but looking at Geet's angry face he understood he was quiet loud and She heard everything...


" kya kaha aapne ? " ...


" Nothing umm Dadima I'm busy with new projects ...too much pressure I..."


" I don't want to hear anything... what type of husband you are ? aapne biwi ke liye waqt nehi nikal sakte ...humne kehe diya aapko jana hoga bus ..." Dadima gave verdict without giving him any chance to escape...


Maan tried to argue " par Dadima ..."


" mujhe unke saath kahi nehi jana ..." Geet interrupt in between...which Maan glared hearing her words..

" par kyun bete ? San kuch thik toh haina ? " Dadima got little worried...


Geet smiled softly " umn mera matlab hai ki hum abhi nehi ja sakte ...Dadima Maan thore busy bhi hai and you are also not fully well ..."


" nehi hum bilkul thik ..."


" no Dadima I m not going to leave you at this condition and that's it ...we will go but not now..." Geet said with so much authority that surprised Maan ...he look at Dadima who is not pleased by this ..but still keep mum...

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" yes Adi book two tickets for Switzerland ...and " he stop as Geet walked in signal him ...he cut the call ..." What ? " ...


" sorry maine aisa distrub kiya...I just want to say trust me this honeymoon is not my idea ...I don't know how this things came in her mind ..." Geet knows that Maan is not willing to go with her but as she know him again he will blame her for all this again so she wants to clear this...


" I know you...I mean we are newly married so Dadima must have thought..."

Geet looked at him surprised... seriously he is not thinking wrong about whole situation which is so unlikely of him..." oh I thought you will again start your blame game " She felt little relieved.. her husband no Maan is thinking rationally...


Maan frowned " Why would I do that ? "

" like you always did " Geet said as a matter of fact...


Maan felt a little guilt but surged it..." umm you girls are just impossible... khud ulta soch the ho aur blame mujhe karte ho "

' ye kabhi aapni galti nehi mange ..khai why do I care...' Geet said to herself ...Maan look at her for sometime...he is actually liking their conversation ...other then usual Dadima's topic they are talking to something else...


" anyways I just want to tell ..I have convinced Dadima ...woh maan gaye hai so we don't need to go anywhere for a while..."


" you did what ? " Maan asked her in between shockingly ...

Geet looked at his confused face and said as matter of fact " we don't want to go together... we can't even stand each other so going and staying is totally impossible... but now problem solve we don't have to go ..."


Maan fumed hearing her ..' she doesn't want to go with me with her husband... husband where the hell this come from... whatever the thing is she is rejecting me ...who the hell she think if herself ' ..." ya how can we go for honeymoon... your friends can't be there na "...he hates her friends ...every time they go out together she would ditch him saying she will go to her friends.. why she gave them so importance... why its so hard to spend time with him? ... is he that bad that she can't even stand at my presence ? ...

Geet looked at him not understanding what he was saying and why he always bring her friends in everything...


" but good you did the right thing... mujhe konsa tumhare sath jane main interest tha...if you didn't convince Dadima then I would have do something to stop this so called outing..." ...' liar you wants go to Maan admit it ...that's why you said Adi to book ticket ...no I didn't I only did that because Dadima told right ... only did this for Dadima 'he start fighting to himself...


that's the limit for her...she came here to give him good news but again he is showing attitude ..." yes I know you don't want to go ...yeh bhi janti hu kiske sath jana chahate hai...and for your kind information I am also not interested going with you..."


" good we are equal here ..." Maan said with gritted teeth ..." I don't want you to start think high you know ...this Nikah everything only a facade... " Maan is angry he couldn't accepted the fact that Geet doesn't want to go with him this rejection is not going well with him ..." so better ..."


" you don't have to remind me anything... I know where I stand in this relation..." Geet hurt by his words how easily he is saying their marriage a act ...she knows he doesn't accept this marriage but hearing it from him is very painful..." its only matter of few days then I will be gone ...happily from this charade..." hiding her pain she told coldly...


Maan doesn't like it at all ...yes he himself said those about their marriage but hearing this from her is disturbing... but instead said " yes its only a charade...we better remember it " ...Geet only nodded and leave from there as tears start falling from her eyes...

He keep looking at her retreating figure..' what's wrong with me ? ' ..he is confused by his own behaviour.. he couldnt understand why he booked ticket for them ...? why he get ready for honeymoon... and why he not liking her rejection..." this girl just think too high about herself... nothing else ...waise bhi main bas Dadima ke kehene par yeh kar rahi thi ...aur kuch nehi " he gave a good reason to himself and surged unwanted emotion and went to study to work ..more of all to forget everything...





Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

thnx for reading di ...you are too sweet to read and comments on every part


I WILL B MORE SWEET IF U UPDATE NEXT PART šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167


I WILL B MORE SWEET IF U UPDATE NEXT PART šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰

updated... šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice

hope maan will realize his feelings before it's too late
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
good part
but i want my beautiul wife
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm dear
Ok so maan koh bura laga as geet was spending tym witg her frnds!? Kuch azeeb nahi hai...he he he
Dadi wants maneet to go on honeymoon and maan was about to booj tickets but thanks to dadi and geet ..
Geet made dadi agree to cancel the trip and maan was angry at this...
They both argued and hurted each other...
Wilb waiting..
PS: DO UPDATE MY BEAUTIFUL WIFE...
I WANT BAND BAJA OF MM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting. Maan is getting attracted to Geet. But Geet has no hopes from him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 7.

Maan needs a kick in the head! He has no idea if he is coming or going. The boy is so confused and his Ego keeps making things worse.

He should ask why are Geet's friends so important to her? The answer being that they are all she has.

Geet has no family and in her view point, she has no husband. To her this marriage will end soon. Poor girl.

But I admire Geet's courage and strength.

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