MANEET SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[THANK YOU NOTE ON PG 80] - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
Great updates! Parts 5 and 6 really helped Geet get closer to Maan! Maan now knows that he can somewhat be ok around Geet and trust her! Maan cares also otherwise he would not have reacted the way he did. Great updates!

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update

Maan is avioding Geet.. due to someone from his past..

aww Geet got lunch & fed maan bhendi forcefully.. but he feels some familiar taste

waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5

Was Maan's pain triggered by eating Geet's food
what did he really mean she too is selfish she is no different
while Geet cannot understand his pain
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6

Fantastic and Awesome

Seeing Maan's caring and concerned side was surprisingly good
at least Geet took that step forward and made friends with him , he accepts and it seems he accepted her friendship wholeheartedly
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Posted: 9 years ago



THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS FOR YOUR LIKES AND REVIEWS.😳

COULDN'T MAKE INDIVIDUAL REPLIES DUE TO MY HEALTH.🤢 😭

HOPE YOU GUYS WILL UNDERSTAND.


- HARSHADA

Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb updates
Maaneet became friends :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
A we some update
Maan caanot sse hurt geet si she... She wants him to open up & share his pain to her
Now they become friends.. Lets c how their relationship goes

Thnx for pm.. Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago



Hey guys, I know I am very late in updating but I am still struggling with my health issues and moreover my college has started. So hearty apologies for the delays in updates.


A huge thanks to all of you for the response on my previous two parts.


Here is the next part of this SS. Hope you guys will like this.



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PART SEVEN




"Okay baba" uttered Maan in giving up and soft voice. This was no less than a shock for Geet. It wouldn't be wrong to say that she was the very first time witnessing this playful and happy side of Maan. But she didn't make it visible on her face as she was scared what if he again got awkward and got back to his original state. No... she could not let it happen. She had to bring him back... she had to bring the original Maan in him back... she had to take away all his pain... and... and she had to again make him believe in love and relationships... she had to make him believe that LOVE... LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL.



She had so many questions in her mind...she wanted to ask him to share his pain with her... she wanted to ask him why did he had tears in his eyes after eating her made Bhindi... she wanted to ask him what cruel game destiny had played with him and made him every aspect of love...she wanted to ask him so much... but she preferred not doing so... he was looking happy at last...and making him upset by dragging his past now would be the least thing she wanted to do that time.


She just returned him her sweet smile.



"Accha... now can we go to the canteen? I am very hungry... I didn't even eat properly..." said Geet while making a cute puppy face holding her stomach.


Guilt took over him. His expressions immediately changed into apologetic one. She had truly cared for him from the start... and he...he had been the reason of her pain and problem... because of him she didn't even eat properly... and he was the reason of her hurt hand too... wait...what?... yeah her hand didn't get hurt accidently... she herself banged her hand hard on the wall... yeah she absolutely did... he had been watching her doing that... yeah he had actually never left... he clearly remembered when he was seeing her hiding at the entrance when she thought he had left... but why did she do that...was that because of him?...was that because of his harsh words?...was that because he said she is selfish...did his words seriously affected her to that extent?... does he really matter for her so much that his anything affects her to the core ?... Maan's mind twirled due to all this.


"Maan... Maan chalen?" he came back to reality from the world of his numerous thoughts and unanswered questions by Geet's shaking and calling.



"Ha...haann" said Maan stumbling with his words. Geet started at him weirdly. She frowned, "Kya haan haan... chal jaldi... then we have to resume our assignment too... yaad hai ya bhul gaye?." She reminded him about the assignment they had to finish.




"Yeah I remember" he said while getting up from the chair. "Arey chalo bhi... pichle janam me snail the kya?" she laughed at her own sentence and literally dragged him from medical room to canteen. He followed her silently.



They settled themselves on one table and Geet ordered one sandwich for herself and one coffee for Maan remembering he had not finished his coffee earlier. She purposefully didn't open her tiffin not wanting Maan to see Bhindi again and gets upset.




Their order came and Geet started munching her sandwich.



"Tumhe sirf coffee chahiye? Woudnt you eat something?" she said offering him sandwich. He nodded negatively.



"Abhi to liabrary band ho jayegi... and kal chutti hai... ham apna assignment kaise karenge?" Maan asked Geet glancing at his watch.



Geet who busy with her sandwich, signalled him to drink his coffee. "Drink your coffee first" she ordered him.



"Lekin..." Maan tried interrupting her.



"Lekin vekin kuch nahi... just drink" she said giving him no choice.



"Okay fine" he said taking a sip from his coffee.



"Ham apna assignment tumhare ya mere ghar pe kar lenge" said Geet.



"Are you sure?" Maan asked her with slight doubt in his tone.



"Haan... kya hua? Any problem?" Geet asked him raising her eye brows wondering why did he look so unsure.



"No... nothing" he said brushing away everything.



Geet nodded. She stood up but immediately sat down and started biting her nails. Her face got filled with tensed expressions.



Maan stared at her weirdly asking, "What happened?"


No response.



He shook her and a bit loudly, "I said what happened?"



"Wo... actually... we can't do it at my place" she told him in a feeble voice.



"Why?" he put forth his question not understanding what was the problem of doing it at her place.



"Because... priya went on her college trip today for 2 days... she will return on day after tomorrow" she said while continuing her nail biting session.



"So?" Maan asked confusingly not understanding her.



"So I forgot to take extra key in the morning... priya must have thought I have it... but I don't... now what will I do?... where will I stay for two days..." Geet started cribbing making a cry baby face.



"What????" Maan literally screamed hearing her.



Geet nodded and started making weird voices while crying.



"Okay, okay... relax...stop crying" Maan said calming her down.



"Here I have no place to stay... I dont know anyone here... and you are asking me to relax" she started crying even more.



Maan raised his eyebrows at her hearing her complaint. All what he could do was...smile at her cuteness. She looked so cute while crying.



"Geet... Geet listen... you can stay at my home for two days" Maan offered her to stay at his place.



"What? No" she said refusing him. She was aware of the fact that things would go awkward.



"It's okay. You can stay... aur ham assignment bhi kar lenge" he said assuring her.



"Okay" she finally agreed realising that she doesn't have any option for now.



Maan nodded smilingly.



"Liabrary band hone se pehle books issue kar lete hai" Maan said getting up from his chair.



"Haan" saying this Geet and Maan made their ways to issue the needed books for their assignment.



TO BE CONTINUED...



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Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So finally maneet are friends. But both are having so much quaries for each other. Especially geet who deadly wants to know about the cause of maan's rudeness and about his pain. But geet decided to let it go for now as she doesn't want.him to go back to his painful land. Omg geet is homeless for.two days n maan offered her to.stay at his place
Waiting.for next.dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update this is turning to be a really cute story maan accepted her friendship geet wanted him believe in love again though she wanted to know abt his past but didn't wanted him to back in his shell maan felt guilty as geet didn't eat coz of him she cared for him he realized that she left her food for him even hurt her hand geet dragging him to canteen they were discussing abt assignment thinking where to do when geet realises she forgot to take keys from.her friend geet making cute crying face making maan smile he offered she can stay at his home and they can complete the assignment too geet agreed

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