MG Mini SS- A Prey Of A Random Experiment, COMPLETED ! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sagorika93

its good to see u back ..
congrts for new os
superb start
maan and geet in same college and maan now want to be geet's frd ..
maan was her first crush .
can't wait for next part
update soon...

Thank u...
Updating soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: hira2010

Seem like you are writer
May I get the link of you work
Wish to read

I won't be able to provide u the links right now but u can check my posts ..u will find all my works there easily...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: akkub.92

Nice concept and part loved it waiting to read more so update soon

Thank u..
Updating soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
nice part
loved it
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Lovely OS really funny so geet in her dream college all was going well when she met her crush cribbing why she met maan who was with her in her school but geet don't really like him coz of his Casanova behavior she thinks she won't fall for him not if the writer can help it geet is so falling for maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely OS really funny so geet in her dream college all was going well when she met her crush cribbing why she met maan who was with her in her school but geet don't really like him coz of his Casanova behavior she thinks she won't fall for him not if the writer can help it geet is so falling for maan

Thank u...
Writer can do anything 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part -2

Next day at college too went same for Geet like previous day..as she was moving towards her hostel she thought about the happenies of previous day..she didn't want to encounter maan again but seems like luck was not at her side..he again appeared
Maan- hii...
Geet(forcing a smile on her face)- hii
Maan- so how was ur day??
Geet- good...and urs?
Maan- good as well...
again the unwanted silence covered the place for a while... which maan broke..
Maan- let's walk and talk..
Geet-hmm, and they started walking
Maan- why do I feel like u don't like my company?
Geet(st)-becoz I don't...
Geet- no its not like that..
Maan- u don't talk much ..why??
Geet- maan I have always been like this only..u might have not noticed but in school too I use to behave like this only!
Maan- no..I have noticed u a lot u were always in that cheerpy mode with ur friends..
Geet- becoz they were my friends I was comfortable with them!
Maan- so m I!
with that Geet stopped and looked at him seeing her stop he too stopped
Maan- what?
Geet- okay ! let's get to the point maan..why are u doing this?
Maan- doing what??
Geet- all this friendship n all...u know we were never friends..friendship is far thing we never even talked to each for more than minute in school life ...if u remember u were the one who was interested in my best friend and just to grab her attention u used to eat her tiffin , that was the only time when we used to talk ,remember!
Maan(rolled his eyes)-u girls what all u assume.. I don't eat her tiffin to grab her attention, her mom was great cook that was the reason to eat her tiffin!
Geet-whatever!! but now why are u behaving like I'm ur long lost buddy?
Maan- geet..he was going to place his hand on her shoulders but she took a step back not allowing him to do so...
okay..that day when I saw u outside the principal's office I immediately recognised u and I thought u too..so I just thought to have a talk..that's it..there's no rocket science in it..
Geet- but why now??
Maan- I don't know I just felt like..everything is boring around me..same routine every day ... I'm just tried..so just thought to make u my friend maybe I will get something new from ur side...
Geet made a face at his reply- what kind of weird reason is this??
Maan- whatever it is..for ur query I have this answer only..hope it satisfy's u!
but Geet still had that same expressions on her face..
Maan- come'on Geet why are u making this simple thing this complicated??
Geet(suspiciously)- tell me do u have some hidden motive behind all this...something like trapping or something...but Maan cut her in between
Maan- god!!! Geet u r impossible.. do I look like that kind of a guy to u?? ,he gave her a disappointed look..never expected this from u...here I was trying to befriend u and u...in today's world there is no place for goodness..saying so he turn to leave..hearing his words Geet realized what mistake she did ..he just needed a friend and she...
Geet(st)-looks like u crossed the line Geet...u might not know him well but how much ever I know he don't seems to be that bad..
Geet- Maan! ,she called him
hearing her call Maan stopped, she walked towards him and stood in front..
Geet- sorry for all that..but nowadays u can't trust anyone blindly right?? plus ur over friendly behavior.. I'm..m..really sorry...let's begin it again...
Maan- begin what??
Geet- our friendship!
Maan(smiled)-good! friends again..he forwarded his hand ,and this time Geet willing accepted his friendship!
Maan- so now we are friends so can we exchange our numbers??
Geet- why u need number??.
Maan- during free classes we can hang out with each other right?? or when a guy tries to trouble u , u can call me for help..
Geet- oh..I see..
Maan- yes a friend in need is a friend indeed ,right??
Geet- right!
with that they exchanged their numbers!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update geet was avoiding maan but met him he wanted to know why she didn't like him geet was suspicious of his behavior coz in school he wasn't so interested but maan felt geet insulted him geet apologize and decided to give their friendship a chance
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i hope he doesn't have any hidden motive... There is more to this than what meets the eye... Atleast thats what i hope
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
in this friendship maan has any motive ?

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