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CHAPTER 6

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL TERMS, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!

Location : KHURANA FOUNDATION (KF)

A week later, Maan was requested to attend Khurana Foundation Annual Day. Maan reached on time but Rajeev and Sumitra got late as Savitri Devi took time to get ready, due to her poor health. As Maan was already there and it was children's function, the in charge of KF took Savitri Deviji's permission and started the show. The program started with teenage girls diya dance, then a farmer's dance by little children. Next was a semi classical dance based on on the song---
"Madhuban mei radhika naache re,
Girdhar ke murliya baaje re..."


(Mysterious girl's dance lehenga)




(Mysterious girl's dance jewellery)

Dressed in red and white lehanga traditional jewellery. She was the same girl who was at the club, in the desert and now in this function. The classic Kathak dance gave her poise, elegance, grace, rhythmn and free flow as if there was no bone in her body, she was extremely graceful and fluid in her movements! Her waist and her dance walk was as graceful as walk of an elephant i.e. "Gajgaamani". The dance depicting naughtiness, coyness and coquettish behaviour of Radha along with her innocence took away Maan's heart towards the mystery dancer.








(Please imagine Drashti in all the above dance poses)

Maan unable to stop himself clicked the dancer's photographs in his phone in various poses, to adore them in the privacy of his room. The dance concluded to a roaring applause. The dance had just finished when Savitri Devi with Rajeev and Sumitra walked in!

Rest of the program went off well but Maan was restless as the graceful and beautiful dancer did not appear on stage again. His eyes continously were looking for her here and there till Sumitra finally reprimanded him, "Maan theek se beitho beta, sab humari taraf dekh rahe hain!"(Maan sit properly everyone is looking in our direction!)
Maan tried to control his restlessness for sometime. Once the current dance performance got over he excused himself saying, "Maa, mujhe ek zaroori phone call karna hai, mai abhi aata hoon!" (Mom, I have to make an important phone call, I will return in sometime.)

Maan came outside and contacted his most trusted Detective Agency. He sent one or two photographs of his mystery girl. He had just finished his call, when he saw a group of little girls playing with a lady in a saree a little distance away from him. Maan could not see her face as her back was towards Maan. Just then two men came and spoke to the woman, she immediately straightened and turned, Maan's world stopped!! Seeing the body language of the men Maan understood that they are either from Defence or Law and Order Officers in civilian clothes. But before he could go near her, the trio left.

Location: Army Base in an undisclosed place in centre of Thaar Desert, Rajasthan
Ganga had come to meet Major Rudra Pratap Singh and was not going to leave till Lieutenant Dheer let her meet the Major. Lieutenant Dheer came running and was going to yell at her when Major Rudra Pratap Singh walked. However in a low voice but at a pitch higher than normal said to Ganga, "Tum phir aa gayeen? Maine kahaa naa ki abhi abhi Major Rudra Pratap Singh yahaan aaye hain. Kal aana abhi woh vyast (busy) hain. Aaj jaao kal aana!" (You have again come? I told you that Major Rudra Pratap Singh has just come. He is busy right now come tomorrow.)


(Lieutenant Dheer)



"Mhare ko tause koi baat naa karni. Bade sahab aa gayo unse baat karni hai." Ganga said and pushed Dheer and ran towards Major Rudra Pratap Singh and said with folded hands, "Hukum, Mhare ko tause bahut zaruri kaam se. Mhaari baat sunn lo!" ('I don't want to talk to you but your senior officer' Ganga said and pushed Dheer and ran towards Major Rudra Pratap Singh and said, 'Sir, I need your help urgently. Please listen to me!')



Major Rudra Pratap Singh controlling his laughter said with a straight face, "Lieutenant Dheer let her talk to me. Can you please send a cup of coffee and one cup masala tea. Thank you!"



Half an hour later, when Lieutenant Dheer came with cafeteria boy carrying refreshments he was shocked to see the scenerio, Major was laughing (which was as rare as solar eclipse). Ganga was gone, in her place was a lady officer of Captain rank sitting. Seeing Lieutenant Dheer, Major Rudra made a straight face and Ganga stood up at attention. Rudra introduced, "Lieutenant Dheer, I would like to introduce you to Captain Swarnanjali Singh. I also apologise for my sister's behaviour but she is working undercover on a mission!"


(Please imagine Drashti in this uniform)



"SISTER??" Lieutenant Dheer voice squeeked but gathering himself Saluted the Captain and said, "Welcome to the Army Base in Thaar Desert...Ma'am!"


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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Friends,
I know its a small update but could not type anymore. Please bear with me!!!
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Nice update
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Tks fr the wonderful update yaar even with your poor health.. The story is getting interesting day by day... Can't wait to read more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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nice update, sorry sounds like teaser, by the way geet has many awatar in this ff and maan is curious to know about her.

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