MG SS : a bit of a lie || note pg 91 May 16, 2019 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
thank you those who liked and commented on this comedy

posting next part :D

now next parts will be after I am done with all my exams
still two r left
Edited by suhaaana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

The Seth's had left the moment geet fainted and raj was actually looking engrared at his son's deed . naina chose to be quite and savitri Devi was trying to cool down her angry son.

This is the limit ma , maan ne toh hadd hi kar di , aise kaise wo kisi se bhi shadi kar sakta hai.. Aur phir jhooth bolta raha itne din , how can he do this to Natasha and usse bhi jyada geet , wo bachi , I am not getting how can that innocent child marry my good for nothing son . maan ko aap janti hi hain , he is not responsible at all and him committing for marriage is a shock for me..

Savitri Devi was also having an intuition that geet was not what she was appearing , she could see her scared eyes when she saw maan questioning Natasha and her silent conversation with Arjun was making her suspicious..

Raj , you were the one who always wanted maan to get married ab agar unhone shadi karli hai than also you are blaming him. Tell me one thing what do you want from him.. Savitri devi finally asked her son.

Ma , ye aap kya bol rahi hain.. Maan ko hame toh bata Dena chahiye tha , hum use mana nai karte geet se shadi karne ke liye aur aaj shekhar aur sumedha (Natasha's parents) ke samne aise sharminda toh nai hona padhta. Raj tried to put forward his point and this time naina supported her son .

Maan never wanted to marry Natasha , aap bhul Gaye raj how he was denying and you never paid at heed to his words , naina's words made dadima smile and raj left knowing thattif he was wrong at some place so was his son but the mother and granny won't leave supporting their maan ..

Meanwhile in maan's room

Maan was pacing like a hungry lion and geet was sitting scared and timid , his mom had definitely called the doctor and if the doctor will come then definitely the drama will open in front of the family and there were high chances that Natasha will be again tagged to him , and maan couldn't take that deadly risk definitely.

He turned and saw geet sitting folding her legs and looking very cute and extremely beautiful in that fake mangalsutra , sindoor adoring her parting and that red small bindi making her look extremely pretty not to forget that red Saree with the sleeveless blouse was making her look truly MSK's wife.

Maan out of blue asked geet making her started ..

You selected this dress for yourself geet ? Maan asked doubtfully as he knew that she didn't even know F of fashion and here she was truly transformed. Her glasses were gone replacing with contact lenses , the loose fitted salwar suit was replaced by red designer Saree and maan didn't mind oogling at her , how perfect she was looking probably the kohl in her eyes made her look more enchanting.

Arjun sir arranged , geet replied meekly and averted her gaze away from maan hiding her self in the pallu from the eyes of maan..

Sir , what's wrong ? Why are you looking at me like this geet asked suspiciously..

And maan answered her making her shock ..

Call me maan , i am not your boss now.. Damn you are my wife and stop saying maan sir , geet behave like my wife and I still doesn't get why did you come ?

Maan.. But.. Geet was stammering and maan who was already fuming came close to her and held her with her shoulders and commanded.

Say .. Maan asked her , he was directly looking into her eyes and for the first time he released how beautiful his secretary is ..

Geet was shivering and maan when realized her body shivering he left his hands from her shoulders by just with the eye contact he was intimidating her.

Maan.. Call me maan.. Maan asked her in his husky voice and geet stammered..

M..a..a..aa.n sir...

Maan.. Say M.. Maan asked her .. She said just getting lost in the fear of him and his dark chocolate eyes..

M.

Now say A.

Geet parroted him ..

A..

MAAN.. Maan said..

And she finally did what he wanted..

MAAN ..

Very good now you will call me maan.. Samjhi geet
He stood up leaving the scared and timid geet who cursing the moment she agreed to be his wife.

Maan was busy on the phone trying at reach Arjun who was the only one helped him and landed him in a mess all thanks to the overexcited Natasha and he couldn't help to throw some profanities on him

Maan : its all because of that good for nothing Natasha , I just had to kill her simply that B**** made me land here , she wanted to marry me.. Galti kardi shadi karke zindagi jahanum banani thi uski .. Maan was concerned one for himself and now for also himself only seeing his timid so called wife.. Maan sure in a day or two this plot of him will be revealed and then no one can save him from his dad's wrath.

Maan do something , you know that you can't afford to loose this game .

Here geet was lost in the moment she said yes to Arjun , who came as a rescuer in her life where she needed some money and Arjun forced her threatening her to be sacked from KC

********* YESTERDAY MAAN'S CABIN *******

You do something get a girl Arjun who will play my wife , I want to get rid of this bug named Natasha as soon as possible I swear I tried each and every tactic but that girl is hell bent on marrying me..

Then marry her maan , its the simplest possible measure I have. I am tired of finding a perfect wife for you , the twenty candidates you rejected just because..

Before Arjun could complete maan lashed out his not so good anger on him..

They were not the ones who could be easily caught you fool , you think dad will believe , I need a full proof plan Arjun for god sake get a girl who could confidently stand in front of my family and could ask MAAN SINGH KHURANA that she could sue him.. Get a girl , she should look like my wife , beautiful confident and she should have the qualities that would make my family believe that I love her . before maan could continue more of his ranting his cell phone buzzed and seeing the number maan's mood changed quickly and he sweetly talked with the bug in his life.

Arjun was sitting trying to think how to find a perfect wife for maan as he wants when geet knocked and entered carrying files in her hands and and was saying something without knowing that maan was not there.. Arjun was looking at geet and something came in his mind and he stopped geet from going away.. As she was about to leave after keeping the files on maan's table..

Hey wait.. Arjun called geet..

Geet stopped and looked at Arjun adjusting her specks though the specks were sleek and slim but still Arjun knew how he could transform her into maan's wife..

Hi I am Arjun , maan is not here he will probably not return do you have some urgent work Arjun tried to ask geet to know her..

But geet just kept mum..

I will leave sir.. She was about to leave when Arjun stopped her and he explained her in detail what she has to do now..

Geet was horrified even with the thought and politely denied .

I cant do this sir.. She was about to leave when arjun blocked her way ..

Listen you have to do it its maan's order and its just a drama and you can't say no.. Arjun tried to threaten geet..

Geet looked at Arjun with angry eyes and said no..
That devil wants me to portray his wife but I don't want to , take any other female employee and this is not my job so please leave my way.

Fine you will be sacked from the job Arjun. Finally played his last card making geet horrified..

You can't do this , why me ? Geet asked getting a little scared .

I want to talk to maan sir , he can't do this to me.. Moreover I will not be able to act. Geet tried to reason but Arjun didn't listened to her , he knew that he have to make her agree and that was the only possible way left out now otherwise no could save maan from Natasha and him from maan .

Geet see this will benefit you , you will be promoted , double salary and whatever faacilites you want just say yes.. He tried to bribe geet .

Geet nodded in a no and cut arjun's words with her intelligence.

I can't be promoted because I don't have any other qualifications to be at a higher post and please don't bribe me. Let me go .

Arjun was now getting frustrated as geet was no way doing it and finally he said to her.

Fine you are fired just leave . arjun's words made geet tensed and Arjun asked her to think again. Geet needed the job as she was alone in the big city like delhi having lost her parents in a car accident few years back she was all alone and agreed to arjun's plans.

*************&&&

That's part 2
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Edited by suhaaana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

maine ek pal padh liya!

usse adhura kyun chod diya?
maan geet ko love karta hai toh aisi konsi majboori thi ki tanvi se shaadi kar raha hai?
geet ka serni avtaar,,,,awesome!
geet ne kapoors ki toj dhajiyyan uda di!!!

yup ek pal me geet bahut strong h
baki story toh likhi hi nai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
loved it
so its arjun who planned geet as maans wife nd she looks totally like GMSK
nd maan want to save himself from his dad wrath if he came to know about the truth
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Wonderful part...arjun blackmail geet to act as maan wife... Maan dad also realised his mistake forcing maan to marry Natasha... Msk first time notice how beautiful geet is... Can't wait for next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲...
Kya scene hai... Yaar..
Maza aa gaya ...
Geet bechari .. phasayi gayi .. Arjun ke through ..
Hehe Savitri devi aur... Naina on Maan side..
Natasha unko bhi nahi pasand shayad ..
Geet ko almost sare Khuranas pasand karne lage ...
Wah wah...
Lagta hai..
Maan ki 2yrs ki Girlfriend ..
ka patta katne wala hai..
Maan liking Geet new avtars... wow...
I like this ...
Update soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part - 1

wow lovely omg update..te way my maan was ready to marry nats but his sherni geet came a stopped te wedding , and my maan was smirking at nats who was shocked and all were shocked to see my maan already married and going to be father, i think khuranas were slow in my maan's life so he took fast step..te way he know who is behind all tis was lovely,but i think all tis are drama to stop my maan's wedding?..i love te update dear
Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow lovely superb update..te way dadi ki suspecting mind started to work seeing geet's eyes was lovely..opps my maan babu was drooling his sec cum fake wife,so its all arjun's plan tp help my maan to get rid of tat nats..omg..opps but geet got struck as scarp goat he he he..now te real game started ,i think along with my maaneet's destinty dadi too play a game..i love te update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! sorry 4 late likes and comments! so Maan didn't want 2 marry Natasha! Geet is his secretary! all this was arranged by Arjun 2 help Maan! Geet was forced by Arjun 2 do this! she needed her job! Maan stunned seeing Geet's transformation! he wants her 2 call him Maan! the doc will be arriving! Maan tensed! Please do not stop writing! will wait 4 updates!

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