Maneet TS 'FitOor' updtd 1(B) on PG.5 (16/07) - Page 3

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FITOOR

PART-| (CONTINUES)

You have noo idea.. how good it feels To waKe uP eVerY mOrning Knowing Ur miNe & Am Urs...

.."Umm.. Then where is ur parents' the lil girl asked
"i dont knw" he replied
"Dont knw..?? Then how come u here.."
"we live in mumbai.. We came here 3 days back..Mom dad said me to attend spring festival in auditorium.. In which the havoc happened a lil while ago.. & the went to meet the doctor somewhere in the hall" he ended
"ohh.. Thats why u were alone in the hall" she absorbed the information
"yeah..& u too"
"Noo.. Am part of spring festival association.. How do u think i knw all the steps of the song..?"she said slyly.
Realisation drawn on him "now i get it.. U are a part of the group.. But as they said.. Tiny you..!!"He teased her again
"yeah whatever.. I"ll grow up soon" she said & he agreed nodding his head.
"So.. U have no idea.. Where ur parents are NoW"
"No" he said getting tensed.
"dont worry.. Lets get to my parents.. Then they will get u to ur parents" she said getting idea.
"okk.. I dont have any other way out either"
"hmm" she hummed.
"whatz ur name.. Btw" she asked after sometime
"Maan.. Maan singh khurana"

She nodded.
"Nyc bracelet.. Btw" he complimented
"Thanks.. Its my fav.. I love these stars" she said gleefully pointing at the stars on her bracelet.
"i too lyk it.. Shining STARS" he said looking at her bracelet.
"There.. We reached" she declared merrily & rum to her home taking maan with her, narrating Her parent's maan's part of story.. While he stood there silently..


.."Do u knw ur parent's number baby..?" Pammi.. The lil girl's mom cooed him.
"yeah.. I knw" He said getting comfortable at Pammi's motherly gesture.
"Good Maan.. Tell me.. I"ll contact them" siddhart handa, the girl's father said & dialed the number.
"Maan. . I have talked with ur parents.. They are safe & they are at hotel Residence now.. Letz go... I"ll drop u there." Siddhart said caressing Maan's head & maan nodded & smiled thankfully at him.
They begins to walk out but maan stopped on his tracks, & looked back at the girl, who is standing there smiling brightly at him. He too cant resist & gave her his famous dimpled smile.
"Bye... Take care.."She waved.
"Bye... Ermm.. Whtz ur name.. I forgot to ask..!!" He said scratching his head at his stupidity.
"heheee.." She giggled "Geet... My name..!!"
"Geet.. Misty..!!" 10 years old maan Smirked& leaves from there, locking up all these beautiful moments in his heart..
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2014______SHIMLA


Kaise suni tune meri khamosi...
O parvardigara..!
(how did u listen to my silent wish... O parvardigara..)


Its getting dusk.. & a car is running through the deserted road... Light gently breeze caressing the shiny hairs of the Guy ,driving the car. Fitoor song playing on Fm
Just like the slight gentle breeze, a slight gentle smile is playing on his lips, listening to the song.

After 10 years he is Back on the Same Road from which his Journey of FitOor started. He is on his way to Luxor Auditorium, the Same Auditorium he came years back. The Spring Festival is going onn.. The same festival he once attended years back. His Heart holding the ever Longing wish to see her... Her.. The Same Girl he met years back.
Years back, maan took leave from Geet.. Form shimla.. But he cant ever take leave from her memories..her tiny dancing form..her innocence..her gleaming eyes..her smile..her holding his Hands..her immature-mature talks..her helping nature..her..the Whole of her.
He can never get over her. Infact in all these years, his hidden feelings has grew more stronger. He adore her.
After coming back he lost all contacts with shimla & her.. Geet.. But his heart never left her. Being a child he cant reach her.. With time Geet became his most beautiful dream in his heart. As he grew up, he got connected to social networking site & came across Geet's dancing institution page ^Junoon Institution-- shimla.. He tried to track her down but wasnt successful as in that page only Geet's name was mentioned as a member but no other information.. Seems like she isnt active in social networking site.
In all these years..She has became his Fitoor. He can think of her but cant go to her.. Coz there is no future.. No future of him.. No future of them. No matter how much he want.. He cant change the fact & his Fate. From the age of 9 his heart problem started. He heart is weak.. Weak enough to destroy him & his future. That year also, 2004 he & his parents went to shimla to meet Dr. Dev, to discuss Maan's health. Doctor said with time his heart would deteriorate.. & would become ineffective. Only way out is heart transplant, but that holds a grave risk , as if Maan's body dont accept donor's heart then thing would take worst turn. He might die. Since then Maan's parents are busy in arranging funds, consulting doctors, finding donor who can give him his/her heart. And he definitely cant drag his dream, his Geet, in his uncertain messy life.
He decided to admire her only & never to meet her again but with time he cant stand fix on his decision & Now He Is On His Way To See Her.
"There is no harm in seeing her once.. I wont meet her" he thought sadly but content.
He got to know that she will perform today so he is here in shimla.
"They said am tiny" he chuckled remembering her complaint in her baby voice.
He parked his car Car in parking lot & anxious, curious, Maan steadily walked inside the dimlitted hall holding all his old memories & making place for new memories.


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"Ye fitoor mera.. mujhko laya hai tere kareeb...
(this craziness of mine brought me to you)...

p.s ignore spelling mistake & also ignore Dr. Dev... lol.. i knw its hard to digest...lol...

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Aaniya :)) 😳

Fabulous updates. Loved the two cuties and their sweet talks, how little Maan was saved by tiny Geet. Now after 10 years Maan has come to Shimla to meet her, sad to know about his heart ailment. Different and interesting. Waiting for next.

Awesome update feeling bad for maan hope he will survive

thats cute start

Superb update. Maan once again came to Simla to meet Geet. He could not forget her in these ten years. Maan is a heart patient. His heart is too weak to survive. Maan saw Geet's dance academy on social network. He decided to see her from far and come back.

Originally posted by: Junglebee

amazing update. Loved it

Thank u soo much... Am glad u like it...!!

@Payal.gupta177
Thanks dear.. Am glad u like the scenes.. Maan wasnot too active in childhood but geet was.. After 10 years, maan is back to shimla to see geet.. And he is suffering from heart disease as well..
Thanks for the lovely comment😊

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Awesome update feeling bad for maan hope he will survive

thanks dear.. Yeah, we'll..😉

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

fab update! well written

thank you so much...