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Hey guyz... Am Aaniya...
Am not completely new here... As i keeps visiting this forum..
And my sincere apologies to u guyz to make to wait.. I have res this post couple of weeks ago.. But couldnot post the content as i was stucked with some personal work...
Now am here... & here is my 1st first...
Hope u all will give this a chance
As the title suggest.. It gonna be intense one...
FITOOR
PART-|
Fitoor means immensly deep feeling, passion, craziness, love, for something or someone. It is something which once gotten inside ur head, it cant be driven away.
You would be ready to be anything, do anything for... For "FITOOR"
This story flows with the lyrics of the song...hence the song has been translated...
2004___SHIMLA
""I cant let u Burn me up... Nor can i resist u... No Mere Human can Stand in Fire and not to be consumed...!!""
Zindagi ne ki hai kaisi saazishein...
Poori hui dil ki woo farmaishein..
(Wht kind of conspiracies did life create..
Those demand of life got fulfilled...)
A beautiful group of 5 people, swayed their bodies gracefully, matching each other's steps, enhancing the beauty of the song. Their pale white dress & golden costumes adding glories to the song. The group was dancing lost in their own world, covering the whole stage.
Whole lots of people came in the Luxor Auditorium to see the dance performance. The whole crowd is lost in the magical beauty created by the dancers & the song. The hall was dim litted.
When the whole crowd was indulged enjoying the dance performance, a lik boy sitting on his seat, looked bored with the performance going onnn. His boyish face twisting, making faces... His beautiful eyes sonetime gazing the crowd, & sometym looking at the performance going onn uninterestedly.
He is occupying a seat in the auditorium , keeping his chim on his plam, & miving his legs back & forth as his legs are too little to touch the floor beneath his chair.
He randomly was taking a glance of the whole crowd, when his eyes caught a lil figure, at the corner of the hall, trying to imitate the steps of the dance performance going on in rhe stage.
He looked back at the steps of the dancers on the stage & then he looked back at the cute figure in blue color frock.
He observed her steps __
"Hmm.. Not bad.. She is exactly copying the steps"
Good, atleast something hold his interest.
He begains to twisting & turning on his chair to see her face in the dim litted hall, more clearly. But the the mean moment...
CRASH...!!
Huge chunks of bricks, dust, roofs falled on the other corner of the auditorium, damaging the building & creating havoc in crowd.
All started screaming & begun to run leaving their seats.
The lil boy looked bewildered at everyone.
"Whts happening" the lil boy asked holding a runing woman's hands forcefully with both his hands.
"Earthquake... Coz of its influence, the corner part of the building shattered... Where are ur parents ?? Run out from here..." The woman said in one breath & unholds the lil boy's hold from her hands & rush from there.
"I dont knw where my parents is..!!" The boy mumbled to himself.. Not knowing what to do..!!
Following others.. He too ran towards to exit.. But the large crowd overpowered the lil boy's figure. He got knnocked down on floor.
"Mamma" he cried for help.
But no one is their to help, except a lil hand wearing a star bracelet.
A lil hand forwarded towards him, he looked up to meet the doe eyes, of the owner of the lovely hand.
"Gettt up.. will u..?" the owner said restlessly. getting no movements from him, giving up, she grabbed his hands with her lil hands & tried to fetch him up, with all the lil force she has.
seeing her efforts, he too helped himself & both the kids stands up, making a lil space for themselves in that pushy suffocated crowd.
"U alright naaa.."the lil girl asked with concern, while he continued to look at her, his object of interest.
Getting nno reply she said "hey...you.. R u alright..am.." She cant complete her sentence as she got pushed by the restless crowd.
She straightly falls on the lil boy's chest & the boy on his instinct , put hhis protective arms around her, as if protecting her from every owed.
She looked up with her baby eyes, to see her saviour, who is already lost in her.
Maangi dua ek tuj tak jaa pahunchi..
Parvardigara..
(i have made a wish which reached to you...
parvaardigara.. muslim god name- Allah)
"Letz get out of here.." She whispered breaking the eye lock & lookinf around the crowed hall.
"I dont know the way out" he confessed as he too looked for way out.
"I knw.. Letz go" she promt & took hold of his hands, making their way out.
Their fingers entwined, they started moving to the backyard as suggested by the girl.
"Where are we going " he asked trying to keep the pace with her as she dragged him hastily.
"To camel's nest" came a sarcastic reply.
"Whttt..!! But camel dont built nest..!!"he said not getting a thing.
While walking she stopped suddenly, making him dashed on her coz of her sudden stoppage.
"What ??" He aaked perplexed.
"Again dumb question...& whatz with ur falling... Why u keep falling on me..!!"she inquied in her baby voice & frowned..
"U too falled on me"he defended himself.
"I didnt fall.. I got pushed..anyway.. Mom said nnot to fall on others.. So maintain distance okk.." She warned him of her lil knowledge that her mother gave her abt peoplle & their intentionns.
"Okkiiess" he said & unwrapped their entwined fingers, breaking the physical contacct with her. "Now good.."!!"
"Yeah.. & we are reaching thaat gate" she point at the broken gate "form there is the main road we will get out of here soon"
"But how do u knw.." He asked.
"i knw this place quiet well. & wothin minutes am sure , this place will be crowded too , as people are trying to get our.. So lets go." She again took hold of his hands & they moved out.. Jumping off the gate.
"Now where are we" he inquired as they walked on deserted road for past 10min
"Abandoned road" he commmented looking at the road ahead.
"Hun..!"" She snorted at his comment. "Wht abandoned.. Cant u see snow falling on the road.. So its two thing, road & the snow & forests too.. Then how caan u say that this road is abandoned"
"i dont mean that.. I mean people.. No people here" he said cutely.
"Why no people.. U & me are here naa.."she said making him understand her part of logic.
He smiled at her, loooking at her, in the moon light, snow falling on them as they walk.
Snow flakes makes the two lil angels looking more anglic. Then he observed the same blue frock rhe girl is wearing, dancing in the corner of the stage.
Somewhere he got that happy feeling to have her here... Here with him.
"U were dancing back theere nas..." Hhe asked as they walked side by side on the deserted roadd.
"Where"
"Stage's corner"
"U saw.!!" She said getting embarass.
"Yeah" he grinned.
"I love dancing... I also want to participate in the spring festival.. But they said only elders can participate & am tiny" she frowned at the tiny comment.
"Hahahaaa... Thatz u r..!" The boy couldnt stop laughing.
She glared at his laughing form.. Thats an insult to her.. She shake her head & angrily moved ahead of him.
He stopped laughing & run to catch up with her.
"Hey wait.. DONT LEAVE ME ALONE.. I WOULD GET LOST WITHOUT U..!" he said getting back to her side, but what he dont know was that his words holds VOLUMES which he didnt understant.
"Then hold ur LIFE not persons... Then u wont get lost ever.." She said thoughtfully.
"THERE IS A LIL DIFFERENCE.. IN MAKING SOMEONE PART OF UR LIFE & MAKING SOMEONE UR LIFE... U CAN LIVE WITHOUT PART OF UR LIFE.. BUT WITHOUT LIFE THERE IS NO QUESTION OF LIVING..!!" he said with utmost sincerity.
She looked confused at him...
"Thatz the longest sentences.. I cant deciper its meaning.." She said sadly.
"No problem" he assured.
"U didnt tell me where are u & where are we going..??"
"We are in mount road.. Just a few distance away is my home" she answered.
"Ohh.. But i cant go there.. I need to go to my mon dad" he declared.
"Ummm.. Then where r they ?"
"I dont know" he replied.
Thats for now... Plz do leave ur reviews...!!
I will continue depending on responses... So plz do LIKE & COMMENT...😊
Love
Aaniya
Am not completely new here... As i keeps visiting this forum..
And my sincere apologies to u guyz to make to wait.. I have res this post couple of weeks ago.. But couldnot post the content as i was stucked with some personal work...
Now am here... & here is my 1st first...
Hope u all will give this a chance
As the title suggest.. It gonna be intense one...
FITOOR
PART-|
Fitoor means immensly deep feeling, passion, craziness, love, for something or someone. It is something which once gotten inside ur head, it cant be driven away.
You would be ready to be anything, do anything for... For "FITOOR"
This story flows with the lyrics of the song...hence the song has been translated...
2004___SHIMLA
""I cant let u Burn me up... Nor can i resist u... No Mere Human can Stand in Fire and not to be consumed...!!""
Zindagi ne ki hai kaisi saazishein...
Poori hui dil ki woo farmaishein..
(Wht kind of conspiracies did life create..
Those demand of life got fulfilled...)
A beautiful group of 5 people, swayed their bodies gracefully, matching each other's steps, enhancing the beauty of the song. Their pale white dress & golden costumes adding glories to the song. The group was dancing lost in their own world, covering the whole stage.
Whole lots of people came in the Luxor Auditorium to see the dance performance. The whole crowd is lost in the magical beauty created by the dancers & the song. The hall was dim litted.
When the whole crowd was indulged enjoying the dance performance, a lik boy sitting on his seat, looked bored with the performance going onnn. His boyish face twisting, making faces... His beautiful eyes sonetime gazing the crowd, & sometym looking at the performance going onn uninterestedly.
He is occupying a seat in the auditorium , keeping his chim on his plam, & miving his legs back & forth as his legs are too little to touch the floor beneath his chair.
He randomly was taking a glance of the whole crowd, when his eyes caught a lil figure, at the corner of the hall, trying to imitate the steps of the dance performance going on in rhe stage.
He looked back at the steps of the dancers on the stage & then he looked back at the cute figure in blue color frock.
He observed her steps __
"Hmm.. Not bad.. She is exactly copying the steps"
Good, atleast something hold his interest.
He begains to twisting & turning on his chair to see her face in the dim litted hall, more clearly. But the the mean moment...
CRASH...!!
Huge chunks of bricks, dust, roofs falled on the other corner of the auditorium, damaging the building & creating havoc in crowd.
All started screaming & begun to run leaving their seats.
The lil boy looked bewildered at everyone.
"Whts happening" the lil boy asked holding a runing woman's hands forcefully with both his hands.
"Earthquake... Coz of its influence, the corner part of the building shattered... Where are ur parents ?? Run out from here..." The woman said in one breath & unholds the lil boy's hold from her hands & rush from there.
"I dont knw where my parents is..!!" The boy mumbled to himself.. Not knowing what to do..!!
Following others.. He too ran towards to exit.. But the large crowd overpowered the lil boy's figure. He got knnocked down on floor.
"Mamma" he cried for help.
But no one is their to help, except a lil hand wearing a star bracelet.
A lil hand forwarded towards him, he looked up to meet the doe eyes, of the owner of the lovely hand.
"Gettt up.. will u..?" the owner said restlessly. getting no movements from him, giving up, she grabbed his hands with her lil hands & tried to fetch him up, with all the lil force she has.
seeing her efforts, he too helped himself & both the kids stands up, making a lil space for themselves in that pushy suffocated crowd.
"U alright naaa.."the lil girl asked with concern, while he continued to look at her, his object of interest.
Getting nno reply she said "hey...you.. R u alright..am.." She cant complete her sentence as she got pushed by the restless crowd.
She straightly falls on the lil boy's chest & the boy on his instinct , put hhis protective arms around her, as if protecting her from every owed.
She looked up with her baby eyes, to see her saviour, who is already lost in her.
Maangi dua ek tuj tak jaa pahunchi..
Parvardigara..
(i have made a wish which reached to you...
parvaardigara.. muslim god name- Allah)
"Letz get out of here.." She whispered breaking the eye lock & lookinf around the crowed hall.
"I dont know the way out" he confessed as he too looked for way out.
"I knw.. Letz go" she promt & took hold of his hands, making their way out.
Their fingers entwined, they started moving to the backyard as suggested by the girl.
"Where are we going " he asked trying to keep the pace with her as she dragged him hastily.
"To camel's nest" came a sarcastic reply.
"Whttt..!! But camel dont built nest..!!"he said not getting a thing.
While walking she stopped suddenly, making him dashed on her coz of her sudden stoppage.
"What ??" He aaked perplexed.
"Again dumb question...& whatz with ur falling... Why u keep falling on me..!!"she inquied in her baby voice & frowned..
"U too falled on me"he defended himself.
"I didnt fall.. I got pushed..anyway.. Mom said nnot to fall on others.. So maintain distance okk.." She warned him of her lil knowledge that her mother gave her abt peoplle & their intentionns.
"Okkiiess" he said & unwrapped their entwined fingers, breaking the physical contacct with her. "Now good.."!!"
"Yeah.. & we are reaching thaat gate" she point at the broken gate "form there is the main road we will get out of here soon"
"But how do u knw.." He asked.
"i knw this place quiet well. & wothin minutes am sure , this place will be crowded too , as people are trying to get our.. So lets go." She again took hold of his hands & they moved out.. Jumping off the gate.
"Now where are we" he inquired as they walked on deserted road for past 10min
"Abandoned road" he commmented looking at the road ahead.
"Hun..!"" She snorted at his comment. "Wht abandoned.. Cant u see snow falling on the road.. So its two thing, road & the snow & forests too.. Then how caan u say that this road is abandoned"
"i dont mean that.. I mean people.. No people here" he said cutely.
"Why no people.. U & me are here naa.."she said making him understand her part of logic.
He smiled at her, loooking at her, in the moon light, snow falling on them as they walk.
Snow flakes makes the two lil angels looking more anglic. Then he observed the same blue frock rhe girl is wearing, dancing in the corner of the stage.
Somewhere he got that happy feeling to have her here... Here with him.
"U were dancing back theere nas..." Hhe asked as they walked side by side on the deserted roadd.
"Where"
"Stage's corner"
"U saw.!!" She said getting embarass.
"Yeah" he grinned.
"I love dancing... I also want to participate in the spring festival.. But they said only elders can participate & am tiny" she frowned at the tiny comment.
"Hahahaaa... Thatz u r..!" The boy couldnt stop laughing.
She glared at his laughing form.. Thats an insult to her.. She shake her head & angrily moved ahead of him.
He stopped laughing & run to catch up with her.
"Hey wait.. DONT LEAVE ME ALONE.. I WOULD GET LOST WITHOUT U..!" he said getting back to her side, but what he dont know was that his words holds VOLUMES which he didnt understant.
"Then hold ur LIFE not persons... Then u wont get lost ever.." She said thoughtfully.
"THERE IS A LIL DIFFERENCE.. IN MAKING SOMEONE PART OF UR LIFE & MAKING SOMEONE UR LIFE... U CAN LIVE WITHOUT PART OF UR LIFE.. BUT WITHOUT LIFE THERE IS NO QUESTION OF LIVING..!!" he said with utmost sincerity.
She looked confused at him...
"Thatz the longest sentences.. I cant deciper its meaning.." She said sadly.
"No problem" he assured.
"U didnt tell me where are u & where are we going..??"
"We are in mount road.. Just a few distance away is my home" she answered.
"Ohh.. But i cant go there.. I need to go to my mon dad" he declared.
"Ummm.. Then where r they ?"
"I dont know" he replied.
Thats for now... Plz do leave ur reviews...!!
I will continue depending on responses... So plz do LIKE & COMMENT...😊
Love
Aaniya
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