Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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sanum23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Awesome ud

geet realize wat maan said wen he first found hr here and reality hit hr that rathods cheated him

maan first thoughts she's angry on him but wen she apologized and mention Rathods name maan told hr to leave

maan is not angry on hr but he also realize wat Rathods did with him

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

it's really awesome... I liked it so much

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it

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..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

So finally Geet comes to know that the place belongs to Maan and it was his parents house... She is angry because not only Tara but her parents too cheated on Maan..

Maan was shocked to know about the truth of Rathods... He is hell angry ! But where did he go ??? Send him to Rathod's house to kill them😛 jokes apart 😆

Geet is worried and shocked at the same time to see him so angry...

Let see...

The roof room was wonderful... I loved it... Wanna same one😭

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..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

Jaldi se update kar do...

Teaser hi de do... 😳

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana
So finally Geet comes to know that the place belongs to Maan and it was his parents house... She is angry because not only Tara but her parents too cheated on Maan..
Maan was shocked to know about the truth of Rathods... He is hell angry ! But where did he go ??? Send him to Rathod's house to kill them😛 jokes apart 😆
Geet is worried and shocked at the same time to see him so angry...
Let see...
The roof room was wonderful... I loved it... Wanna same one😭

mere gawn main hai 😉 .. And it's lovely place , with no disturbance 😆 .. I was wondering if u guys would understand the concept or not 😆

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
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will update soon 😉

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#728

Part 37

his parents trusted wrong people..Rathods were there only for the land and money, they deceived Maan and his parents..despite of his own home and land, he was living like a protege, all alone at a tender age...and few years after received the news of his parents death..which also is a mystery.
being there back in his home, brought back the childhood memories..and finding him there with the toy made Geet realized about the unfairness life has thrown towards him..
finally the things are getting revealed for Maaneet. It seems Maan has gone to get his answers from the Rathods..

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Nav2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Awesome!!! Very well written. Real all updates one two go. Rathod played him very well. Can't wait for next part?

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#730

Teaser # 1

" Maan beta tum ??".. I cringed upon the word " beta" , I so wanted to correct her but I had to talk to one master planner of all this ...

" Is Mr Rathod home ??" .. I asked and even I was shocked at my own tone ... it sounded like I just wanted answers and no nonsense ..

" Yes beta come in .. your uncle is home .. "

I made my way inside ,correcting her " He isn't my uncle Mrs Rathod "

" what are u saying beta ...??"

Teaser # 2 ..

I was going to respond to his ever demanding kiss , but he left my mouth and i felt his lips on my collarbone next .. he bit my skin and kissed the spot , repeating it to different spots on my neck , seemed like he was enjoying it to great extent ...

My nails scratched his back over the cloth , as he kept teasing me ... He let out a lusty groan and i realized my action ... But i too needed something to torture as he was doing to me ...

Uhhh !! enjoy ..It may be the last part of story 😊

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago