Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! superbly written! wonderful Maaneet moments! Maan teases Geet! Dev comes 2 see Geet! Maan is angry! Dev happy seeing Geet alive! Dev tells Maan Geet is like a sister 2 him! Dev reveals abt Rathod property! Maan takes Geet out! update soon

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Awesme part
loving it
yeah both need to spend lots time together...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

loved maan teasing geet

it makes geet feel lighter

maan is too dramatic

making geet blush

n he loves it

devs presence makes the air tight

maan is j

when dev told his pov maan finally tries to think good about him

where is maan taking geet

to his house hai kya..

nice part

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

WOW!! superb part dear...loved it

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Happy friendship day 😉

Teaser

" I want to know u Maan .. All about u , only if u want me to ?"

" I would love to share myself with u Geet .. I don't even know how you became so important part of my life .. "

" u make me feel special ..so special " she placed her head on his shoulder ...

" U r so special to me .. You are mine , I feel like a richest man" his arm went around her shoulder pressing her more to him ..

" I know these lines , seem fake .. u know much like movies .. but I am being honest .. I love this feeling .. I love having u beside me .. "

" I always thought only parents make u feel special .. only they could love u , their love is real .. I never thought about life partner .. a boyfriend or husband .. For me this was all so unreal , but now I realize , how good it feels .. how amazing is the life when someone reminds u constantly that how u worth the life , and how precious u r .. "

" My parents sent me to Rathod's when I was child , to complete my studies .. " He started sharing his life for the first time ... Till now he kept it all to himself ..

Enjoy reading 😉 .. Maan is sharing his past and Geet is all ears .. how about u ??

i am drafting , so will try to to update soon ( fingers intertwined 😆😆)

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago