Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#331

hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! well written! Geet saves Maan is injured by he bullet! she questions Maan abt the drugs! she reveals he is nt the Maan she loves! Maan stunned! update soon

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Nice update. Geet reached to the place where Maan was kept. A goon was ready to shoot Maan but Geet threw a wooden plank to his hand and bullet missed the target and one of the goons was shot dead. Geet was also shot in her arm. In the precess of saving themselves Geet shot a goon and he was dead. Geet was shocked. Maan and Geet managed to escape from the place and reached her car.

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saro

@saro

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#333

Super update... Geet n her sign .. Maan is too concern to note all that.. Finally geet shot some one she also got shot ..hope old maan wl b back..

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#334

mind-blowing update...

Geet just confessed and Maan is in shocking state...she loved him all the way and he thinks she cheated him...

Geet saved him from those goons but a goon was killed by her in process of saving Maan...she is in shock and stress that she took somebody's life...

hope Geet recover soon from mental and physical trauma...

thanx for pm...

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Ankeeta Gupta

@dreamy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#335

very interesting nd awesome part

eagerly waiting for next

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chinkidrashti

@chinkidrashti

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Story going fantastic my dear...do well in exams...love u

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#337

Superb update!!!Finally both are safe and fine...Loved Geet confessed her feeling...Loved it so much...waiting for the next...

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#338

Superb update dear Amna... 👏
Loved it ..Geet went to save Maan and Maan too saved him... ⭐️
Finally both are safe ..that's great and also Maan come to know about Geet's feelings... 😳
She want her Maan back ❤️ its a thrilling update...

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Superbly written 👏
All the best for your exams..👍🏼
Waiting for next part ..but take your time dear..🤗

Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago