i am not going to hate you paaagaal... waise longest comment from you EVER... and i loved it... love you love loads...timer says 32.43 ๐ฒOriginally posted by: Aishuuu.
โค๏ธ
BRACE YOURSELF i am ready ๐
I'm wondering how should I even begin this comment with...
You're very much daring to write such an update and not expect me to go gaga over it ๐คฃ it was the second longest update i guess it took literally three days to write and two day to connect the dots
I've read the update so many times till now, before actually being able to comment about it. So it's Friday night and there's no better moment to write this comment ๐ You know, FSD premiere everywhere today so had to be related in a way. If it's not, I'll make it related in a way ๐ You must be updating on Sunday, but I can't take any risk so I'm writing it right now! :) yes... Friday and Sunday all about shades day ๐๐
You can't even imagine what I feel whenever I read your stories. I know it's also because you're so special to me and I love you โค๏ธ but you have your way with words and you make me forget what the hell I'm doing in that specific moment and just focus on your update. ๐ Which happens to be out of this world! ๐ณ aww thank you for this comment of you on me i am on ninth cloud ๐ณ๐ณ I'm just letting your fictional world messing up with mine and Voila ๐ And seriously, when two one-of-a-kind minds meet, trust me baby, there's just so much fire going on ๐ณโบ๏ธ๐
I'm actually speechless and a bit confused right now. Should I be happy or sad? And yeah, I miss you like you should never know how much ๐ก๐ญ but it happens, it happens... *control, idiot, control*๐ Ufff, I tried so hard to hide my own tears in the introduction but couldn't when it's about my feelings ๐คฃ it's just so annoying when you can't hold yourself back but ermm you love me anyway ๐ค๐ณ๐ aww i know darling how it must be... very hard right... but i am taking myself out from this world... even it is for a short time... it is hard on me as well... every time i open my laptop to work i check IF and i dont even know what i do here????
Sorry for the delay in writing the comment, even if you won't see it till the day you update ๐ lekin kya karu, stalking you takes time too... too busy stalking you ๐ But if you feel I'm too much, you can suggest me to stop doing that... I won't listen to you though ๐ you know me so well... and yes i am reading it today only ๐
Sunday is now my favorite day of the week I guess, cause I get updates... and when I get updates, I get you here so we can actually talk for few minutes. ๐ Even watching you replying to people makes me happy. Truly need you baby ๐ณ๐ณ๐ค And yeah if that means I'll stalk this thread till you update even if I have to wait for hours I'll do it โค๏ธ I think you don't even realise how much positive energy, good vibes, feels (you know what kind of feelsโบ๏ธ) you bring with you *hayyyeee* and what you're doing to me... ๐ Sorry for my long love letters but words are not enough to describe it... โค๏ธ Your PI-D loves her PFbiA so much ๐ฅบ some new abbreviations???? enlighten me... i am sure its not related to some XBOX or play station ๐๐๐
And please don't make me think I'm silly by writing all these... ๐ณ I'm just getting emotional, okay? ๐คฃ Should I continue with my intro or simply go to the update part? ๐ well i will see in next few lines what you decided ๐๐๐ Well, I know you can always understand me ๐ค (please don't ask "Baby, why so many mood swings?" ๐คช cause you are very much responsible for everything ๐๐๐ณ) so don't say a word! ;) from now on no complaints ๐ณ
Okay, so I should get back to the update before you decide I'm MAD, totally MAD ๐๐๐คฃ You know what, I always feel I can be myself (matlab MAD) when I'm around you ๐ณ๐ People do that when they are feeling safe with certain significant other people... ๐๐๐ณ I don't wanna spoil this beautiful thread by adding any of my crazy ideas but then... ๐ you need a weirdness dose everywhere ๐ For that, always count on me, baby โค๏ธ did i mention your are cutey weirdo but MINE ๐ณ
Definitely didn't say much about the update so far, but this is the last part before epilogue ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ so I would just enjoy writing for you โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐ Geet's life is such a roller coaster! Actually, Maaneet's life and this story proves yourself as a writer. โค๏ธ yes for the first time i liked how this story came out the way i wanted it to be....๐ณ Your "Dimensions" are in my mind all the times. You know, even writing this comment is pretty hard as I'm trying to convey my feelings in words. And I'm doing it for you, so it must be easier for me because you always understand me ๐ณ๐ณ our dimensions are different too... G land and M land ๐ณ I'm just trying to imagine what that means for a writer. Baby, I'm very proud of you for whatever you do ๐ณโค๏ธ Like... I have to write just for you, and you already know my likes, dislikes, whatever it is going on my mind but as a writer - As a writer, you have to convey the feelings to so many people and you make it possible so easily. ๐ It is hard to please even one person. and you still keep denying my request... i want you to please me at least once... write for me an OS... even if for 1000 words i will eat i mean read it... and i will try to post the comment a long one... see the offer is intriguing๐๐ One likes that, the other one doesn't. One thinks that would work, another one doesn't. All you can do is being able to actually convey all these, post it and wait. And then - BOOM! When you can make so many people enjoy your writing, it means you are blessed with huge talent ๐ณโค๏ธ This is not just me fangirling, i just imagined you with pom poms ๐๐ I'm just saying I truly appreciate what you do and that you still get time to do what you love and give us joy even being so busy โค๏ธ
You accomplished this "mission" in such a beautiful, memorable and heartfelt way, it's hard to describe your work in words. They fail to represent the true beauty of your every story โค๏ธ Gosh, I feel I'm sometimes acting like a complete Drama Queen and I need a reality check. I am dreading letting this story end. ๐ฅบ something new is coming up ๐๐๐ I'm trying to put off my tears as long as I can ๐ cause... Actually, this one is eternal in my lil' heartieee and will always be like that Your stories just give me all these, I get back to read them all the time... going through them makes me believe I have a pretty good life and I shouldn't complain much or overreact regarding certain moments or events... ๐ And I'm just so lucky I can still feel, hear, see the beauty of this world. โค๏ธ I hope I'm not becoming too dramatic here but this is how I feel... :) Thankful enough for everything. ๐ณ I've set my heart on being positive... it is all I can do whenever I'm feeling low. ๐ณ Oh, that - and talking to you. ๐ณ๐ this story is and will be my favorite one... and somewhere you are also part of it... you make it perfect
Everybody gets high sometimes, you know with what soju????
What else can we do when we're feeling low? ๐ณ๐ drink soju???
Okay, okay - enough about me, let's talk about serious stuff right now ๐๐ abhi tak kya tha fir???? ๐ฒ
CAN I SAY HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU? Can you actually feel I'm screaming? ๐ณ <<<< this emoj showed that screaming made your eyes strained ๐คฃCause you my love - you have to know that, okie?๐ค But even if you don't, I'll make sure I remind you that ๐ Again... and again... and again... i want to keep forgetting then... eeeshhh... cheesy me
First of all (this sounds so odd after all those previous lines! lol)... what's this gorgeousness? ๐ณโค๏ธ Don't you know it's illegal to write such stuff and play with my lil' heart? Do you think the fevicol is gonna work every time, darling? we can always try some new products from the market there is always something new... fevicol seems old now ๐๐๐ Cause no, it doesn't. ๐ณ C'mon... ๐ค Are we into illegal stuff or something? ๐ฒ This story literally left no corner of my mind unexplored. ๐ And I mean it... I'm counting the days till you post an update. ๐คฃ I've lost it, but I don't regret it And you have to agree something is incomplete if I'm not writing my review on an update, naa? ๐ณ๐ *just joking here, but not really joking* ๐
BRILLIANT! Brilliantly done and depicted story here! And it's even more satisfying to know this is my baby's story โค๏ธ So many shades, so many dreams, so many moments, so many emotions and feels. Like I'm actually living all these or noticing their life. Must be so great to write it. And I hope you don't mind me drooling over it ๐ณ๐ณ this story did made me go on a ride which had so many bumps and turns...
I knew the previous fabulous update is gonna lead to such an impactful one - but damn, you always make it better and better. Personally, I don't even care if I sound like I'm so crazy ๐คช - I'm in love! Makes sense
No emoji on that cause I don't know how to end that line. Leaving it for you to guess it ๐๐ณ trust me i did... i did imagine ๐ณ
As for updates, never actually like predicting something - I love it more when you surprise me and won't tell me what it's about, it's way better going in blind and getting a very powerful reaction. ๐ I trust your choices โค๏ธ Even I am one of them... ๐๐ well reminds me of blindfold ๐
It's always so funny when I finish an idea and then realise I didn't actually focus on it. ๐ i saw you strictly stick to everything else but keeping the whole update in your mind ๐๐๐ Just look at the previous lines, I said I'll talk about serious stuff of the update and ended up talking about it but adding my own touch of loveria๐๐ into it, which I'm really proud of. ๐คฃ
Okay, I promise. ๐ณ I'll stick to the update now as I have a lot to say. I'm expressing my thoughts more now because we had just one part left so I need to do that, please, PLEASE ๐ฅบ God bless you always for writing this and not only โบ๏ธ My heart just melts. Oh, sorry... moi just said I love this story? Never in a million years! ๐๐ณ I'm not even thinking and writing about it, nahiii ๐ค
The update starts in a very lovely way, which just makes me fall in love with it more. โค๏ธ Maan is becoming more and more responsible, his actions speak volumes about how much he cares for her and her well being, trying to find out everything about her and her needs being there for her, filling with care, love and attention all those years of pain, unspoken words, when both of them were suffering in silence. Silence hurts the most. Unspoken words ever MORE. Just the thought of separation hurts ๐ฅบ
But... ๐ณ Seems destiny has another plan for them, They won't stay apart anymore. After all, they are true soulmates and their love is gonna win. You can't just stop all these. Time passes by, but does it really make all those memories end? Cause we all can clearly sense how much these two have missed each other, literally craving for each other. This won't go with time and thanks baby for proving it again... Oh, bless my poor heart And exactly - you've described it so well -for Maan, it is NOT LATE. As long as her heart is still beating and recognises his own heart, as long as their heartbeats are dancing to the same old and memorable song, they are gonna have enough time. Time is still patient with them, even after so many years. The same old song and those same steps. If they are just following the same steps, they won't miss a thing. ๐ณ Feels like their life is a dance competition in all these. Lights. The public. Fears. And same old pair of dancers with undeniable chemistry. In the end, they just can't fail โค๏ธ Maan has tried everything to keep her happy and unharmed... where as Geet deserves to have best care... and Maan is the best... the way he came forwards himself and filled the void of her life with his presence... OMG it was so nice...
I absolutely love how you chose to bring back those memories in Maan's mind and compare them to the current situation There was a time when she used to remind him everything about his vows and look at him now - one more to come he is different, just slightly different kind of love A love which is no longer afraid of expressing, but it is afraid of losing. this is the theme i planned to write when i started this story He's not gonna repeat those past mistakes which is indeed so lovely and feeling relieved reading all these ๐ณ๐ณ Thank you so much for playing with my feelings in such a beautiful way ๐ญ well he was not to be blamed here right???
Maan doesn't disappoint and continues fulfilling all of her wishes, I'm just so happy I'm gonna cry ๐ i hope you get your prince charming too... i am only yours shades which he cant do it ๐๐๐
He has his heart on his sleeve now. Cross my heart, I'm getting so many feels with your writing! ๐ค Take a damn cookie and you may take my ice cream too... โบ๏ธ Nota bene: I don't share my ice cream with anyone but you
Love chocolate but... Vanilla pretty much?๐ณ i love Vanilla brownie with caramel ๐It's the month of love and not only ๐ i know i know ๐
Thanks Maan for the eating part too. Geet needs it. Never mess with the food, I tell ya yes... i hate it ๐ก๐ณ
Awiee for me Thailand = you โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐ Thailand > me > push ๐๐๐
Another thing I enjoyed was Maan taking Aman with them. Like it was so sweet of him ๐ณ Truly speaking, I guess he would have enjoyed the time alone with Geet anyway, ๐๐ but I know he feels Aman deserves appreciation and that was the right way to show him that ๐ณ๐ณ I am also truly aware of the fact that Aman is a good baccha, he gave them enough space for themself โบ๏ธ๐คฃ this was to show how Maan gelled up with the others keeping all his feelings asides just for Geet... And how Aman understood them ๐๐
For me, it is very important to know that Aman trusts Maan so much now and he feels he can take care of Geet completely. As a person who always cared for Geet's well being, Aman's point of view in all these is very important, so well hightlighed in the story. No one could have put it better than you. So glad you chose to talk about it, baby ๐ณ๐ You always know what to do ๐คโค๏ธ Aman was much needed in the story according to me... the connection of doctor to the patient and doctor to the guardian is very much important
This is so unique and special. A bonding like no other. Never ever read such a story where I get to read about such an overwhelming and strong friendship.
GUARDIANS. Just love it. You always choose the right words. You described everything so well in just a single word. There is this soft and assuring side about this word. On the other hand, there's the protective and strong side, this word perfectly sums up their whole story and all these years of selfless and pure love for their little Geet โค๏ธ Who knows better than them how it is to watch her suffering every day, learning how to deal with her own fate, living with the consequences of her own decisions, accepting the silence even if her inner self was screaming in pain... ๐ must have been so difficult for them to watch her dying every day. But Oh Lord, how nice it is to see the ray of hope in the end me too loved this part ๐ณ
You're so sassy ๐ ๐ณ I literally couldn't stop laughing reading about his office work and this man's antics ๐ The audacity! ๐ฒ๐คฃ The line about Adi's entry was so adorably cute, love how you've written it. baby ๐
AWWW! This can get even better than that kya??? Maan bringing Geet to his home and reading the reactions of his parents were just so heartwarming and precious, made me cry ๐ญ True, sometimes the best and loveliest people get to suffer the most. is it because someone thinks they can bear everything and overcome all these obstacles? Is it because destiny had other plans for them? It is even fair? They get to a point when they can't even dare to hope for a better future or something to forget their pain, it's just so sad whenever this happens. ๐ญ Geet entering his room and acknowledging all his achievements with pride was so damn touching, the cherry on the top being Maan's words: "I will have more of them only with you by my side" โค๏ธ Beautiful, so beautiful... Maybe Geet thought that Maan is her strength. But the truth is that - if Maan is her strength - she is also his strength, his motivation and the reason he is still going strong โค๏ธ I think they would never bear another separation. ๐ฅบ Gosh, these two are made for each other...
You've got a wonderful point there, baby. And an awesome intuition, just keep it up and keep spreading maaagic ๐ค Geet, the eternal beholder, how true she is about the changes displayed by Maan! She's getting new shades of him, absolutely in love with that ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ why i am thinking i am getting better and better expressing shades ๐
I think the fact that he asked the permission for the kiss speaks volumes itself. Just look at him, how much he cares for her wishes :) He is not gonna touch her if she doesn't allow him to do so. He's just so afraid of hurting her. Aww Gizzz, loving it... though... he shouldn't ask before doing it ๐๐ this is so contradicting to the SOML ๐
My sheets are already all over your bed and I just got to the flashback... ๐ฒ๐ OMG ๐ Already big one. Aww baby, please don't hate me for this ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ญ
Talking about the flashback, you already know how much I love the flashbacks in your stories. ๐ I'm thinking that they always reveal so many things and I love the details as I have a keen eye for them ๐ Always so compelling, reviving memories, changing destinies, restoring faith or making it disappear forever, they are always a pleasure to read. I have to directly state whatever I'm feeling, so be kind enough to touch my sheets. I mean... to read them ๐
THE FLASHBACK โบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ You know what 's on my mind, right baby? ๐๐ณ
Everything in this flashback is pure love and I seriously want to just... do it too... I mean ๐ณ๐ณ๐คฃ Ermmm nvm... ๐ณ๐ mera kamaal bass ๐
From Geet's instant reaction and inner thoughts to Maan's hesitation, everything falls so naturally into place, proving the sensible approach of your storyline. โบ๏ธ Haha, this girl geet and I have so much in common... ๐คฃ Especially showing nakhres and pouting cause Hellooo, we just want more ๐ณ๐ You go girl, Geet, I totally support you ๐คฃ Make him go maaad ๐คฃ๐ The whole kissing scene was so hot and sexily cute too I couldn't stop smiling like an idiot - which I am! How do you get it so right? do you think i wrote about Geet keeping you in mind ๐
The reactions of both of them were hilarious and loved your parallel ๐ On one hand, there's this girl Geet and her audacity to get more. On the other hand there's this Maan having a Billu-like inner fight with himself and he's afraid of kissing her... properly ๐ He must have been so shocked ๐คฃ Geet's facepalm was hilarious, dammit... ๐๐ I'm still laughing... I don't know upon which reactions should I laugh more... Geet or Maan? ๐คฃ chalo at least some relaxed part in the story ๐
Geet is taking the lead and plays the Dom as i always said i dont mind YOU taking lead sometimes ๐ and the best part si that he enjoys it โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ I know you can read your baby's mind right now... ๐ Ummm so cute ๐ณ๐ณ Maan got the euphoriaaa of the moment but he's still so protective and ends up still holding her like she was a doll and his every touch could damage โค๏ธ And if I thought this couldn't get better, she is listening to his heartbeats... <3
End of flashback ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
Gosh, how can you be both so sMexy and cute? ๐ From the way you described Maan fulfilling his every responsibility towards Geet till the "absolutely free" part of Aman and Geet's parents everything is just so adorable ๐๐ Loving the part of his dilemma, very well written, my baby
Awwie, things are finally better for Geet and she is enjoying her life by his side. ๐ค And of course he loves the bossy side of him, this will never change ๐ณ๐ณ Awww he proposed her ๐ญ
Flashback ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ
๐คฃ๐คฃ flashback padhte hi you become happy ๐
LONG FLASHBACK ๐ฒ
... OMG, the flashback โค๏ธ bless my poor heart in these moments!
You hit the nail right on the head with this, baby ๐๐๐ณ SOJU effect ๐
I'm loving this plan of taking her there and surprising her, who wouldn't? Beautiful, beautiful part, my heart skips a beat โค๏ธ What a way to wake her up โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ And the words you used, my heart can't take this anymore, awieee So you โค๏ธ
And Gosh, I'm loving the built-up here, this was just so perfect ๐คฃ Jumping from a supposed bed to knowing that they are in a plane was so hilarious, totally imagining that ๐๐ Damn, he wanted eye contact when she was scared... that was so romantic! ๐ณ๐ณ
There are some particular thoughts you added here which are brilliant and so true ๐๐ It's indeed so true, it depends a lot on the people. And you can surely recover faster when you have the people you love by your side. โค๏ธ When the realisation of it hits Aman, the whole scene becomes so serene and mesmerizing. And Aman trying to make the whole thing lighter just adds to the beauty of this scene <3 You have captured every relationship perfectly, leaving no doubts that I should re-read this a lot ๐ And when they woke up in that bed, just WOW ๐๐ณ "Let me sleep" ๐คฃ๐คฃ Oh Gosh, he loves his sleep so much just like SOMEONE I know ๐คฃโค๏ธ now do you think i wrote Maan keeping me in mind???? Never disturb her sleep awwwieee ๐๐ณ So you ๐คฃ๐คฃ And seriously, Geet pouting and both of them cuddling โบ๏ธ So us... do you want to kill me with this part kya? ๐๐ณ NEVER
Another thing I love - Aman walking keeping distance from them. And it's not about the fact that he keeps distance, it is about the fact that this shows how much happy he is for them and how much he trusts their relationship and he's now relieved watching Geet with Maan by her side, he knows he's gonna make her happy again ๐ณ What a beautiful moment for a proposal, totally touched my heart. โค๏ธ Great symbolism too - the colorful lights may mean their new beginning and their new life together, the b/w of the past couldn't touch them now... wonderful, my love ๐ณ
Maan searching for Aman's support in those moments was also very touching. So many awesome details that make everything even better, when I thought it couldn't get better โค๏ธ
His unique way of proposing - just so many feels right now, better if not confessed But thank you so much for their pure bliss... ๐ณ๐ค๐ relationship goals ๐
Instant reactions coming from Geet, as expected. She is so right to doubt - not him, but her actions, according to her character. ๐ณ You see, she is selfless, she always thought about making him happy while taking decisions. But she knows many of them led her to huge pain. She's afraid she's gonna destroy her life but little does she know her presence in his life is literally his lifeline... โค๏ธ so the connection of her past decision and soon to take one ๐ณ
Obviously, the Soju touch of the stories - I love it so much ๐โค๏ธ
Loved the silent approval and her instant funny answer regarding the Europe tour. ๐ Awwwishhh ๐ณ๐ณ But Maan is also no less, by God, you cracked me up baby ๐คฃ๐คฃ
This story is not only presenting the love life of Maaneet, but it also describes so many wonderful relationships, unforgettable bondings, heartfelt events and life changing decisions. โค๏ธ Even if you usually don't focus on the side characters in your stories, this made me add more characters in SOML... well planning to lets see how it turns out to be ๐๐ let me tell you you did a fabulous job in this one and you explored every single relationship beautifully, making me go lalala ๐คช ๐คโค๏ธBut I will warn you that this is a story geared perfectly towards people like me, I'm unique though ๐๐๐ณI dare you write more such stories I'll love reading them baby. โบ๏ธ There's a substantial amount of drooling, a lot of suggestive themes, many wonderful and frightening moments that made even my heart skip a beat.Before going, I'll write something extra. ๐ค๐คฃList of frustrations:1. Where are my goodnight kisses? ๐ค๐ณ2. 13. 24. All of the aboveWhere???? and in that numbers???? well kisses will always be on their right places ๐๐๐Lows:Ummm, these are not about the storyyy <3 ๐๐Highs:- YOU, as a writer and love ๐ณ shukran- Soju Smooth one- Me, can't tell why, we're changing this into a not-a-very-decent topic ๐คชlet me read- The title, so catchy and you know I love it so much yes yes- The characters- Well depicted emotions- Gorgeousness overload ๐ณ- Amazing changes in couple's life- Realistic scenes written in a sensible approach- Amazing one liners- The shades, of course, no one writes shades better than you- Fantastic twists, with quality drama- Great suspense- You take me to the other side โค๏ธ- Your style which makes me wanna cuddle so much- You managing to do so many stuff, I love you sooo much pagaaal isa-ddorai- My BPThank you so much... for BP problems extra care will be given๐
Your chapters are filled with great insights and lovely lessons hayyyeee, Maaneet's journey is covering love, fear, shame, anger, sadness, joy, grief, disgust, guilt, depression, contempt, self-doubt, paranoia, jealousy, envy, awe, hotness And I personally think I'm learning a lot from this โค๏ธ Thank you so much for this story baby. ๐ณ๐ค And please forgive me for this, I won't write a comment for your other story so in that way you'll deal with the length of this one... ๐๐ That one I'll write on V's Day ๐ณ๐ Waise, must take you an hour or so ๐ญ๐ Doubt you'll read all, but I put my soul into it ๐ฅบ๐ณ my timer is still on to check how much it takes me to reply this I feel you deserve even more ๐ค Trust me, never wrote so much... you, just you ๐ณ๐ I do care about your free time but the story is ending sooo...๐ฅบ๐ญ Please don't hate me, sorry ๐ฅบ ๐คฃ See, I even posted it way before you update so you won't have an instant shock ๐คฃ Waiting for the eplg </3
Waise, wrote this in another shade of this color. As this must be FSD than the other one ๐๐ Come back soon with a new story, love... Love you so much โค๏ธ
Once again, don't hate me. ๐ณ I still tried to make it short ๐ I wanted it much bigger ๐ณ๐คฃ Waise, why am I even saying sorry? You can reply with a simple "thank you" too, if you want :) ๐ณ your choice... ๐
Love Friendship Dating and Relationships
Bindi
106