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Part 51

On other side Vicky was finally successful in getting Nishi's new address from HR department without her knowledge , he knew he is doing wrong but Nishi has left no choice for him..he himself tried so much to ask her directly but no use..seeing no other option he finally took this step...but unfortunately his this step didn't helped either because when he reached there her apartment was locked , from the owner he got to know that she was out of town from last evening...this puzzled him..
Vicky- mam do u have any idea where she could go?
Women(owner)- no I don't have any idea...
Vicky- oh..anyways thank u..after a pause he continued a..can u please give a call whenever she returns..here is my number...hesitatingly he asked..
Owner- kyu?..can't u call her..
Vicky- actually..we had a fight so..she is not receiving my calls and I'm worried about her ..that's why.. he lied
Owner- oh ! now I understand so both of u are in a relationship..., the lady assumed Vicky and Nishi as bf- gf, Vicky made a face at this but he can't correct her now , so he let her assume whatever she wants to.. koi nahi aaj kal toh ye sab chalta hi hai..but the main thing is to be together instead of all these fights..whenever she will return I will inform u..
Vicky- thank u..
Thanking her for her help he left the place..he was walking on the road lost in his thoughts..
Vicky(st)- now where she went...kahi geet ke peeche peeche shimla toh nahi chaliye...waise coming to think of it uska koi bharosa nahi.. jaa bhi sakti hai...indeed she is crazy... , lost in his thoughts he forget to notice that now he was on road..but the bright light which was suddenly focused on him made him realize that.. he blocked the light with the help of his hand..but when he removed his hand to see the person he was sweetly surprised to see her...
Vicky- tum!
The girl smiled and moved towards him..
Vicky- miss. Beautiful ..such a long time..glad to see u.. smiling brightly he gave her a friendly hug!
Sameera- miss. Beautiful nahi Mrs. Beautiful.. she showed the wedding ring to him..
Vicky- what! u got married...nahii...u broke my heart (dramatically he said)
Sameera rolled her eyes on his reaction- hadd hai Vicky..u r still same nautanki..anyways how r u??
Vicky- good and u? and by the way whose the lucky guy?
Sameera- a..but they were disturbed by another car horn.. I think we should move from here..
Vicky-there's a coffee shop nearby ..if u r free let's go and catch up..
Sameera- yeah sure!


An hour or two , maan finally gained his conscious , hearing few mummers around himself he tried to open his eyes but as he put the strain on his eyes and forehead he felt an immense pain but still fighting the pain he opened his eyes only to see two men dressed in white coats looking at him..then only the previous memory of the accident sank in him..his worried eyes roamed in whole room to locate his geet but found her nowhere..
Man 1- so finally u gained conscious thank god..may I ask... but he was interrupted..
Maan- geet..where is my geet? Worriedly he asked..

Man1- geet?
Man 2- I think he is talking about the lady with him..
Man1- oh..he turned towards maan who was impatiently waiting for his answer..i'm sorry but her situation is critical right now she is getting operated in ICU actually...but he was cut in between..
Maan- I want to see her.. he tried to get u in hurry but as he tried the pain of his injured forehead ,hand and legs pull him back..but for him the urge to see his geet overpower these pains..the glucose strip attached to his hand too tried to stop him but not caring about anything he recklessly pulled that out from his vein..the two doctors were shocked to see his this reaction and tried to stop him..
Doctor 1- are u mad..what r u doing ..calm down..
Maan- I need to see her!
Doctor2- she is getting operated there..have some patience!
Maan- hell with ur patience I want to see her right now! Saying he got up from the bed..his left hand was bandaged whereas his one leg was bandaged too , he was not able to walk but still with the support of the wall he tried to walk..
Doctor 1- god! He himself is badly hurt but he want to see her without caring about his own wounds..is he insane?
Doctor 2- insane in love I think.. we should to help him.., with that they followed him outside only to see him asking someone about icu..
Doctor1- come with us we will show u..
Silently they showed him the way to icu..here it is.u can see her from here he pointed to the transparent circular glass which was fixed in between the door..and we request u not to go inside as u will disturb the doctors and patient too..agreeing to their orders he looked through the glass and finally saw geet.. doctors were operating her..he touched the glass as if touching geet..unknown to him a teardrop escaped from his eye..one of the doctor put his hand on his shoulder to assure him
Doctor 1- don't worry she will be fine..
Soon a nurse from icu came out..maan immediately halted her way to ask her about geet..
Maan- how is she??
Nurse gave him confused look not knowing about whom he is talking about ..
Doctor 2- he is talking about the patient inside..what's her current situation?, he cleared her confusion..
Nurse- oh..she have lost a lot of blood , so she need blood,,can u please excuse now..saying so she hurriedly left from there leaving maan more worried..followed by the nurse a doctor came outside..she was surprised to see the small crowd in front of icu..she looked at her junior doctors..
Doctor- what's going on here?
Doctor 2- mam actually..but he was cut in between by maan
Maan- how is geet?
Doctor already knew about maan as she was the one who was handling there accident case ..few people have brought them here from the spot of accident at that time both were unconscious and were bleeding..geet's condition was more critical whereas maan too had lots of injury, she checked both there pulses , maan's pulse was kind of okay but geet's pulse was quite weak so, she asked her junior doctors to operate maan and she will operate geet..
Doctor- we are operating her..then she turned towards he junior doctors..what he is doing here?, sternly she asked them
Doctor 2- mam actually we tried to stop him but..he was so eager to see her that.. but he was interrupted as the nurse returned back
Nurse- mam her blood group's blood is not available in our blood bank.. this worried the doctor
Doc- what! God but we need an immediate blood..she held her head in worry..
Maan- what is happening here please tell me!, impatiently he asked..
Doc- calm down..she looked at the nurse call other hospitals to know..
Nurse- mam I already did but they all too are denying ...
Doc- then I think we have to transfer the patient to delhi...
Nurse- but mam it will take another 5-6 hours and it can cost her life..
Doc- we don't have any other option we have to take a risk...
Maan- I have an option.. all look at him..

Delhi

Both Vicky and sameera settled down in a nearby caf and chatted about their on going life..sameera told about her marriage to karan and her purpose of being here..her medical studies were over and now her internship was going on , karan was doing his internship from out of the country in Australia , both sameera and karan had decided to move to Australia after marriage but shifting to an unknown place together was not a good idea so karan decided to do his internship there as that will help him to know the place and settle there and then after settling down there he will come and take her there..so as planned sameera thought to do her internship from delhi as she have handa's known people for her but when she came here she was surprised to see the house empty..she even tried their numbers but that too didn't worked..
Vicky- oh so from last week u r here..
Sameera- hmm..do u have any idea where they are..i even thought to ask u all but urs house was empty too..
Vicky- yeah we have shifted from there..and I just know about geet and nishi about the whole family someone told me that they have shifted to hoshiyarpur!
Sameera- oh..so both(nishi and geet) are staying together..can u give me their address..
Vicky- no..both are not staying together...actually...then Vicky told her everything from starting till now..sameera was shocked to hear that..
Sameera- geet is married to maan..great.. and I'm glad that maan too have started loving her..
Vicky- u r happy right?, surprised he asked
Sameera- yeah but why r u asking me this..should I not be happy?
Vicky- do u have any reason for not be happy?
Sameera- Vicky what are u trying to say...say it clearly!
Vicky- nishi!
Sameera- nishi... what?
Vicky- u r the only one with whom I'm sharing this but I think there is something wrong with nishi...I mean before she never reacted like this but now she is turning out to be someone different..a complete different personality..something is surely not okay with her.. Vicky was not getting the appropriate words to explain her..but his words left sameera to wonder on something else...
Sameera- from how long nishi is living alone?, her question confused Vicky as he didn't understand what's the relation between her behavior and her living alone but still he answered her..
Vicky- I don't know exactly but maybe from the time bro and geet got married..
Sameera- that's a long time..i ..but she was interrupted as at the same moment vicky's phone ranged..excusing himself he picked the call..
Vicky(shocked)- what!
Sameera- kya hua?
Vicky- bro and geet met with an accident..i need to leave.. saying this got up to leave but sameera stopped him saying she too will come along with him..

Maan had called adi to arrange a private plane for geet with medical facilitates as soon as possible ..following his order adi did what was asked to him...soon maan along with geet in ambulance move to board the plane , maan asked the senior doctor too to accompany them if in case some emergency occur..
Sitting by geet's side maan held her hand in his..
Maan(st)- please geet don't punish me like this...I know u have bared a lot of pain just because of me...punish me as u want I'm can bear u hatred but not this..please come back geet please... whole way maan didn't left her hand..his eyes were just looking at her..waiting for her eyes to open and look at him..he didn't have words to describe or express his inner grief but he wants his geet safe and sound again..
Doctor looked at couple..she was really touched by the love maan had for his wife..she adored the couple and wished for them when suddenly her eyes landed on maan's bandaged hand..she can see the red patches on the white bandage looks like his over stretching has opened his wounds again..she moved to them and called him..
Doc- excuse me mr.khurana..ur wounds have opened again ..she pointed towards his bandage...let me change it..
Maan ignored doctor words and said he is okay..
Doc- but its bleeding..don't u feel any pain? But he didn't replied anything..just stared at geet's unconscious body..doctor again tried ..mr.khurana try to understand..
Maan- when this blood can't cure my geet then what's the use of it..let it flow..its better to get rid of it!, his statement left doc tongue tied..she didn't know what to reply him..
Soon they reached at one of best hospital in delhi where dadima, adi , Vicky along with sameera were already waiting for maaneet to arrive, this was the same hospital were sameera was doing her internship...geet was on stretcher while maan was walking along her side..while the doctors in hospital were already ready to treat geet..one of the doctor asked for geet's report from the doctor who came along with maaneet.. while geet was shifted into icu..maan has to wait outside..
Dadima cried seeing their children in this state...whereas sameera moved to doctors who were discussing geet's case..
Doc- this blood group is really rare and...but sameera solved there problem..
Sameera- me and geet have same blood group..i can help..
Doctor- dr.sameera are u mrs. Khurana's sister?
Sameera- yeah..
Doc- good then..i think without wasting time we should start the treatment..
With that they started their procedure..dadima moved towards maan and asked him to seat on the chair nearby...he put her head on dadima's shoulder ...understanding the inner turmoil of maan , dadima caressed his head slightly making sure not to hurt his wound..
Dadima- don't worry maan..soon geet will be okay..
Maan(choked voice)-I know dadima..she can't leave me like this..never..!
In between all this Vicky received a call from the owner of nishi's apartment informing about her arrival..he don't know why but he was getting an intuition that nishi is related with this accident..her absence from the town was the main reason he was suspecting her and then her behavior but the main question was how can she hurt her own sister for whom she is so obsessed?, his brain was bursting with all these questions but the answers were with nishi only ,and he wants to ask her..telling adi to take care of dadima and maan , he left to see nishi..
Reaching her apartment..he was hesitant to knock but still merging his all courage , taking a deep breath he knocked , he waited for few second for her response but no response , he knocked again but response was same ..next he knocked hard but to his surprise door was already open..
Vicky- is she mad to left her door unlocked at this time..he slightly pushed the door and peeked inside..nothing was visible to him due to darkness..he called nishi...r u there..but the ultimate silence was not helping him..he decided to check in himself..he grabbed his phone from his pant pocket and lighted the torch ..but what he saw shocked him..in the dim light too he can make out that everything in the room was messed up things were thrown here and there.. and soon the light from the torch landed on the human figure who was sitting with her knees folded to her chest , her head dug between her knees , her hair was working as a curtain to shield her face..vicky was sure she was nishi but her posture and everything at the moment was scaring him..but he can't run away.. if there is some problem ,,he have to know it ..soon he located the switches on the wall and switched on the light.. suddenly feeling the brightness around her nishi lifted her head to look up..her whole face was messed up , Vicky could make out that she was crying from several hours..her face was swollen, her eyes have puffed up due to continuous crying..but as soon as she looked at vicky's shocked face..she immediately wiped her tears and got up to question him..
Nishi- what are u doing here?, but ignoring her question he asked her
Vicky- why were u crying nishi?, she glared at him
Nishi- why u poke ur nose in my matters, don't u have another work?
Vicky(smirked at this)- are u guilty about something...that..as soon as he said that she averted her gaze from him...
Nishi(rage filled voice)- go away ..leave me!
Vicky- I'm sure u r guilty about something that's why u have created all these mess around urself.. that's when nishi saw what she have done to her house..not a single thing on its place..nothing was organized according to her..and this created a panic in her head..suddenly she got hyper..her voice trembled..
Nishi- what's ... all...th...these..mess..how can..i be ..so messy..chi..she started moving here and there picking things and placing them on their desired place perfectly..the sudden change in her behavior shocked Vicky more.., he tried to stop here..called her 2-3 times but no use..seeing on other option , her aggressively grabbed her and pulled her towards him..
Vicky- R U MAD? What is all this ha..what is going inside ur brain...don't try to act innocent I know u r the one responsible for bro's and geet accident..haina? , angrily he asked her
Nishi-what will u do if I say yes?, her straightforward reply shocked him
Vicky- how could u?
Nishi- why can't i?
Vicky- what have they done to u ..that u took that step?
Nishi- I don't know I felt like killing him...do u know its not my first attempt to kill him..its second time...last time how he saved himself I don't know but this time I made sure not to leave anything in his car..not only brakes.. i destroyed the speed control mechanism too..

Vicky- this much hatred for my bro, why?

Nishi- why not? He destroyed my sister's life because of him she have forgotten me..me..me... lost in her thoughts she repeated me again and again..vicky had to shook her to get her out of her trance..
Vicky- ur reason is stupid..u r behaving like psyco!
Nishi- u feel I'm psyco..i too feel same..do u know sometimes everything goes out of control..i try to stop but then.. but Vicky didn't listened her properly..
Vicky- u urself went there to destroy's bro car then did ur eyes stopped working that u didn't saw ur own sister.. don't u know ur this step will risk her life too!
Nishi- so what..did she ever listened to me..nahi na...kitna kaha durr raho maan se lekin nahi she never valued my words...I even tried to manipulate maan's mind by sending that letter but that too didn't work..because of her I'm suffering this much..because of her my thoughts are not in my control because of her I have become a murder..everything is because of her...and its is getting unbearable for me..sometimes I feel killing myself but then her thoughts stop me...after me who will take care of her who..no one..no one is there for her..so its better to kill her too...all problems will be solved!
Shock was an understatement to describe vicky's condition right now...when suddenly he heard her cries..
Nishi(choked voice)- I didn't want to kill her...but seeing her in maan's arm even after all my warnings , a rage filled in my heart..how can she disobey me..i'm her sister..always wanted her betterment but she never valued me...I felt cheated...I didn't cared about the consequences , the only worry was her disobeying me again and again..how can she do that..i love her so much still.. but now it was getting enough for Vicky to hear her nonsense talk..
Vicky- lair! U r the biggest lair I have ever seen ..u say u love geet but no u hate her..u r jealous of her...u hide ur hatred and jealously behind ur fake concern for her!
Nishi- no..
Vicky- accept it nishi...u r jealous of her..u think how can geet get a person like maan..u think how can she get more than u..u think how can she achieve more than u in this short time right?
Nishi- no this is all lie..i don't hate..i'm not jealous of her..
Vicky- then why u stop her ..at every step instead of any positive feedback u give her negative feedback..instead of encouraging her u discourage her , why?
Nishi- because she never wanted all this...
Vicky- oh please nishi...stop ur nonsense!..accept it that u can't see her happy ..u always wants her to be seeking ur help ,u always wants her to be lower than u in every aspect of life...
Nishi- no..u r lying..taking steps back she uttered..
Vicky- u always cocooned her in ur shell , never allowed her to step out from there only because u were well aware about her capabilities ,u were scared of her..and now when after all ur tries u failed u r blaming geet..the truth is u can't see her success..her success is not letting u to live in peace! U know why bro rejected geet's love again and again it was because geet doesn't had any individuality ..u always hided her in ur shell..she never got the chance to come out of it..it was u because of whom her love was rejected!
Nishi- no...
Vicky- this the truth nishi..today because u she is fighting for her life and trust me if something happens to her then get ready to bear the consequences!
Warning her he left..not knowing that soon he is going to regret his own words!



biting my nails...extremely nervous about this part...eagerly waiting for the reviews😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

pls pm me also...😊😊😊

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Sooo amazing update sweetheart 👏
really very beautifully written ...
The way u depicted maan's emotions on seeing geet...hats off to u...poor maan is totally broken 😭 he just wants his geet to be fine...
Thank god sameera's blood group is same as geet...
Ohh sam got married to karan...
Ohhkk leave all that..lets come to main topic..
GOSH!!!! All this is done by nishi!!!!!! 😲
hell i never expected this from her...i know she was quite insecure of geet and maan's relationship but i never thought that she could do something so dangerous...
She's behaving like a possessed, psycho, insane person...
Vicky too is shocked seeing her condition!!!
But last part confused me 🤪 why is he going to regret his words?
Please continue asap
thanku for pm
Edited by chaudhary_kajal - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Congo for new thread dear 🤗

thank u kaju🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsemm geet complicated maan worried vicky confronting nishi
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsemm geet complicated maan worried vicky confronting nishi

thank u for the comment😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Not shocking update
As I think about nishi that she is the hurdle in geet's life
Very sad for maan n geet
Hope geet get well soon n accept maan's love
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congratulations on your new thread dear...
wow what an update dear...
I knew it this Nishi is a mental case she was jealous of geet and her beauty and knowledge that is why she was mentally weakning geet...
that is why geet never looked at her capabilities always was neglecting herself for Nishi but she couldn't give up maan her love that is why may be Nishi poisoned maan mind that geet is not worth him as she always hides herself and thus maan rejected her first...
then may be he wanted geet to make some identity of herself and come out of her hiding and he rejected her again and again but he might have not expected the outcome of his rejection to go negative...
hope geet gets well soon and sameera should treat Nishi as soon as possible...
will be waiting for the next part dear and thank you for the pm
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Unressed on page 7...please check my comment beautiful..

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