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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

One more season🤗

We'll be waiting for next part

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Interesting prologue.

due to mistaken identity Maan wil torture Geet.

eager to read more.

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rvlatha

@rvlatha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

i have read ur season 1 it was very nice with guddi and mania.thanks for pm

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bhatya1

@bhatya1

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

wow what a start . Wonderful

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Wow what a prologue!!! :O

Loved it :D

Loved the concept

Geet n sameera are identical twins

N sam is the typical vamp

N forcefully made geet to be sam :/

Now goddi going to mania but mania is planning to torture her :(

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

WOW!! interesting start dear...loved it

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

AWESOME PROLOGUE ..ND GREAT START...DIS WILL BE REALLY THRILL TO READ...ONE SIDE MAAN IS LONGING FOR COMEBACK OF HIS GUDDI AND OTHER SIDE HE IS GONNA TORTURE HIS GUDDI THINKIN HER AS SAM...WANNA SEE IF HIS TRUE LOVE WILL IDENTIFY D REAL PERSON HIDDEN BEHIND THOSE LENSE OR WILL HE FALL FOR HER BLUE EYES..

AM REALLY REALLY EXCITED TO READ UR STORY..CONT SOON..

DEAR WILL BE WAIITN..

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Amazing start dear.. It's more complicated than I thought after reading the start. And evil twin is surely something new and aashi is the biggest twist... Love u dear for this wonderful and awesome start. Will be waiting eagerly for u to update sooonn😉

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Congrats for the new story.

Nice prologue.

Poor Geet. Paying for her sister's sin. Sameera made her to take her identity so that she can live peacefully making geet's life miserable. how can she do this to geet. What she did to dev.?

Maan kidnapped geet & torture his guddi thinking she would be sameera.