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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#461

Thats not good... Six years have been passed

Edited by doll.12 - 9 years ago

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#462

Amazing and emotional update!!Loved it so much...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#463

part 7 - they fought geet broke up with him. maan was aloof not attending lecture or going out of his room. geet came back to him and they patched up. but when she came back to fetch her bag she listened to his & dev's talk. half truth come out and she totally broke with him. what will happen if she comes to know that they already crossed their limit. she was avoiding him and now seems she will go back to her parents...how will he pacify her..?

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#464

part 8 - so finally she came to know about she got pregnant and reminded what happened that drunk night. glad at least maan supported her that time and even ready to get married. she was hurt again , may be this time very badly that her heart could not take. she must have totally broken. but their luck was not with them. her mom heard and disappeared from there. maan so much searched her whereabouts but could not get any into. six years passed...? what might have happened to geet and their child..? or he/she must be of 5 years. hope soon maan find her.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#465

hi thanks 4 updating! wt a twist! amazing update! well written! she forgives him! Maan unable 2 tell her abt that they had sex! Geet pregnant! Maan goes n sees her! she is stunned tht he knew! her mom hears tht she is pregnant! she tells Maan 2 leave! Geet didn't return 2 college! he is tensed! six years have passed! Maan waiting 4 Geet ! he loves her! update soon

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#466

part

a very big twist 😲

😲geet was preg ..God!!! nd she didn't knew anything about that night ..

Maan knew but hide that coz didn't want to hurt her

he suspected nd feared , agreed to get married , but ...

geet deffo felt cheated ..

she vanished nd six yrs passed ...

a very long time ...

waiting eagerly ...

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Krupa

@idunno

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#467

I had read all part together, and the story sounds so natural of today's youngsters studying together,falling,breaking,falling again have seen opposite to my eyes so this is not unusual thing happen in their life, only one place i feel flow was maan told her that we kissed in alcohol effect but she got hyper and so not to upset her he spoke lie, same thing after consuming that night he remain silence as geet said she wants to do sex after marriage,so maan think she will upset again, so when she came to knew truth maan should have explain her instead of saying sorry to her than it might have not cause mu between them, but in any way the way, your writing and dialogue in this story is so superb that i am not not ready to believe that you are amateur writer, you did good job well done Tahir keep it up...👍🏼

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#468

Awesome update, loved it. Lots of twists in the last four updates, enjoyed reading it.

Continue soon, shall be waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#469

Tahir congrats on the New Thread.

You are back from Dubai, you had gone to Dubai right, read it here.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#470

I read this story whenever u update...

very interesting...

Geet is really very innocent...she has so strong belief on Maan that when she realized that she is pregnant and may be they made love when they were drunk, she never suspected Maan or blamed him that he took advantage of her situation...but in all this Maan did very big mistake of hiding truth from her...he didn't want her to get hurt so he hide the truth but this type of truth are not the type to hide...it is about a girl's dignity, her own body is violated so she should know of happenings...

now separation of 6 long years...where did Geet go...Maan searched for her and still waiting for her...

waiting for next part...