I had read all part together, and the story sounds so natural of today's youngsters studying together,falling,breaking,falling again have seen opposite to my eyes so this is not unusual thing happen in their life, only one place i feel flow was maan told her that we kissed in alcohol effect but she got hyper and so not to upset her he spoke lie, same thing after consuming that night he remain silence as geet said she wants to do sex after marriage,so maan think she will upset again, so when she came to knew truth maan should have explain her instead of saying sorry to her than it might have not cause mu between them, but in any way the way, your writing and dialogue in this story is so superb that i am not not ready to believe that you are amateur writer, you did good job well done Tahir keep it up...👍🏼
Thank You Di , actually this kind of behavior I've seen in the University in Spain
and I was totally shocked that how girls get drank do stuff and forget so that idea actually came from there ,
actually I had planned when Geet finds the truth Maan will explain everything to her and the reason for keeping quiet but than while typing the update I just omitted that whole part and typed something else
you do know that I'm an amateur 😆
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