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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: doll.12
No.. Why maan will kill her?? Nor Tara did.. Neither meera or dev did.. It was YOU... Uaaahhh.. It was you who killed her.. Now we have to wait for their love ... Uaah

dont tell me u are filing case on me now 😲 aisa mat karna bay 😔

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: abba12
awiee ..thank u so very much🤗 😉 who killed is actually the problem 😆 😆
haha update jaldi milta ha yahan .😆😆 ..har 2 din main
PS : itne saray PS 😆

aaj kaunsa din hai??? dusra??? update kab degi????

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: vandy28
Just waiting for next...update soon

aj mil jay ga ap ko 😉

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby
aaj kaunsa din hai??? dusra??? update kab degi????

😆 aj hi update kia tha ... Dusra kaisay hua 😆 .. Abi tak 27 march hi ha😆

Pm dusray id se milay ga😉

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel
she died?😲

looks like 😛

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: abba12
😆 aj hi update kia tha ... Dusra kaisay hua 😆 .. Abi tak 27 march hi ha😆
Pm dusray id se milay ga😉

maine date chk nahi ki 😆😆 dusri id ho ya teesri pm chahiye bass

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Nice update
Geet ab nahi hai aur dev maan pe ilzaam lagata hai,
geet ki mout ka! .. Meera dev ko samjhati hai
aur maan jail se bahar aa jaata hai...
Woh sochta hai ki jasa tara soch rahi thi waisa hi
hua par ab maan badal gaya hai...
money mein itni takat hai toh ab usse woh bhi chahiye...
Poore update mein maan self talk mujhe bahut achhi lagi
Mujhe yeh update mein kuch lines bahut pasand aayi...
he felt someone else' pain for the first time ... ..
what If everything was snatched and just Geet lived !!"
no not dying girl .. "jaan " ..this was her name .. " was "???
" If money is this powerful , he will also earn this power ,
specially to make life hell for .. Certain people "
Pehle toh mujhe aisa laga ki geet ki mout ek sapna hai maan ka...
Phir mujhe laga ki shayad yeh geet ka hi plan hai...
usse kahi na kahi pata tha ki kuch galat ho raha hai...
aur woh maan ko pahechaan ne lagi thi ki woh kuch galat nahi kar sakta..
.usske saath...bharosa karne lagi thi...issi liye shaadi ke baarein mein bhi haan bol diya aur
maan ko kuch bataya nahi...doctors ko bhi usse apni taraf kar diya hoga..
.geet ka wapas aana aise hi ho sakta hai... aisa mujhe lag raha hai!!
Aur ek baat...
Tumne update se pehle note mein likha hai ki...
Awesome comments and 100+ likes for my ordinary story!
Mera problem yeh hai ki tum khud batati ho ki comments aur likes badh rahe hai toh ...
yeh story ordinary kaise huyi?????????
Aur humare liye maan geet kabhi ordinary nahi ho sakte.. .woh khas hai aur rahenge!!!!!!
Tumara hard work hai ki yeh story ab ordinary nahi par extraordinary hai...!!!!!!!

wow yaar ..what can I say about ur comment ..no words ❤️ ..muje guesses walay comments bohot pasand hain ..aisa lagta ha yaar such main koi shauq se read kar rha ha ..

Guess kafi theek ha ..thoda modified ho ga according to update 😉

I know maneet are never ordinary but I am not that good with words 😛 that's y ..and concept is not that extra ordinary too .. 😉 .. Hardwork to rehta ha but writer in me gets happy with such comments and lovely response 😛

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby
maine date chk nahi ki 😆😆 dusri id ho ya teesri pm chahiye bass

😆 pm mil jay ga kalia ..wese update kab mil rahi ha 😛 .. Aik to students ka kabi exam to kabi new semester

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: abba12
😆 pm mil jay ga kalia ..wese update kab mil rahi ha 😛 .. Aik to students ka kabi exam to kabi new semester

me to puri phass gayi hu... lets see... if i have to take break in between i will pen down the first chapter for this new one... then i can update

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby
me to puri phass gayi hu... lets see... if i have to take break in between i will pen down the first chapter for this new one... then i can update

Congo for new one ..abi dekhi main n ..comment wahan kar dia ..

Chalo jab time milay tabhi kar lena .. Will be waiting ..