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Posted: 9 years ago
My love for u never ends - beautiful story geet left maan because she lost her voice so thought she is not perfect for him but in real maan not perfect without his geet amazing os beautifully written loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi ...
lovely story ..
maan lost her maan due to her voice ...but maan's love for geet is too intense..inspite of all hurdles he got his geet back who is unable to speak now ..
maan and geet now together again ..
thank u for lovely story ..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21




Aaj kuch bhi ho jaaye

She has to say YES for marriage

I just dreaming to see her in my gift

Am sure she looks so beautiful in sari

When he reached to venue, looks stunned to see her...she looking more gorgeous than his dream... she feel shiver in his intense gaze try to move , but he held her sari pallu, pull her closer...

Maan : geet today I only want to hear YES from you

Geet : if I deny

Maan : tum mna kr hi nhi paayongi

Geet : over confidence is abd for health

Maan : I will carry you away in the palanquin,

Your friends will be left watching...

You are in love with me, in love, love...

He place kiss near her ear... she removed his hand from her belly...

Geet ; so

You want to carry me

.

Jabardasti karonge mere sath

Maan ; you not left any option for me

Bhut ho gyi dating geet

Now I wanr to settle in our life

.

Aur ab toh hum ek dusre ko achi tarah jaan bhi chuke hai

Now what left more for you?

Geet : aap mujhe propose kr rhe ho

Maan : koi shq hai tumhe isme

Geet : I not like your proposal

Maan : done

Am going

Because my daadi wants to see my marriage

So ab jo daadi ne pasand ki hongi

Wo final

Geet : what

You

She pulled him by coller and gives little slap on his cheek...

Asa socha bhi na tumne

Toh mein tumhari itni pitayi karungi

Apni sakal pechan mein NHI aayengi tumhe

Maan : so say YES

Geet : go to hell

He scoops her in arms and peck on her lips...

Geet : I will come to your house, become a bride.

All my poor friends will be left alone.

Both pass smiles to each other...

Oh My Gosh Both Have Such Great Sense Of Humor
Really Very Beautiful And Vibrant OS

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitu-




Thanks for the comments dear... yaa now u can tick in front of my name too 😆 just joking ...

Yaa I tried something different actually I felt that if I write on one pic a caption like some lines than they will be long forgotten by me too so making them as a story and make it all one... become a challenge for me as I have to turned n twist the story according to upcoming updates which r unexpected for sure... so after few pics I started to enjoy this ride ... glad u too enjoyed too 😳



yep ticked right off 😉😆😆

well i'm glad you did it the way you did it, and true its more memorable that way
ok off to image 5 now 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago


Looking Forward to thread 2😉 i know for that i need to get to work also 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Geet ar..ae...ye ky kar rahe ho...please mera aanchal chod do main tumse baat nahi karna chahati
he said kyun...?hum to aap ki ye addao ke diwane hai
she...aap samaj kyu nahi rahe...mere ko jaane do pheer aapko jitne pyaar ke afsane chedne hai ched sakte ho...
Geet ye mausam haseen hai aur aur hum tum jawan hai to phir kyu na chede pyaar ke afsane?
please maan, chod do muje ,
Dekho maan please aise mat karo, jane do daddi aajayegi to kya soche gi?
lisiko kuch bhi sochana hai sochane do hum aap ko chodnewale nahi hai samji?
kyoun?
kyunki... i will say to daddi that we are playing ilu ilu game
Geet kya...?ye ilu ilu kya hai?😕
are budhu nahi samji...?😆
hum kanha padhe likhe hai jo samjenge...?😉
he said haan woh to hai phir bhi ilu ko samjne ke liye padhana likhana nahi padta, anpadh bhi jaan jate hai ye ilu kya hota hai..?😛
aap ne hume aanpadh kaha...?😡
kyun tum nahi ho...?😃
she gets angry turns her face and wanted to go, but he is no less and lifts her up and said ilu ka matlab I love you hota hai and I love you geet...aaj tum hamko nahi rokogi, ye suhana mausam, hum tum, ye mausam ki aangdai phir hum pyar kyun na kare...?
oh...kab se aap shayar ho gaye...?
jabse tum hume mili ho ab chalo jaldi se hume ilu ilu boldo...mat tadpao hume..!
agar hum na kahe to...?
to hum aap ko nahi chodenge...!
jamana kya kahega..?
hum jama-ne-se nahi darte, jamana hum se darata hai samjee...?
itna garoor...?
ye garoor nahi hai meri shaan hai..
she said okay jee hum bhi aapko wo kah dete hai...ilu with my mouth kyunki mera mouth mere heart se bahot badda hai ji...😃😃
auho geet hume to wo bhi chaleha pyar ka maja kuch jyada hi aayega,,,,😛😉




Edited by idunno - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

<font size="4" color="#0000ff">Zara Hutke-12</font>

Geet ar..ae...ye ky kar rahe ho...please mera aanchal chod do main tumse baat nahi karna chahati
he said kyun...?hum to aap ki ye addao ke diwane hai
she...aap samaj kyu nahi rahe...mere ko jaane do pheer aapko jitne pyaar ke afsane chedne hai ched sakte ho...
Geet ye mausam haseen hai aur aur hum tum jawan hai to phir kyu na chede pyaar ke afsane?
please maan, chod do muje ,
Dekho maan please aise mat karo, jane do daddi aajayegi to kya soche gi?
lisiko kuch bhi sochana hai sochane do hum aap ko chodnewale nahi hai samji?
kyoun?
kyunki... i will say to daddi that we are playing ilu ilu game
Geet kya...?ye ilu ilu kya hai?😕
are budhu nahi samji...?😆
hum kanha padhe likhe hai jo samjenge...?😉
he said haan woh to hai phir bhi ilu ko samjne ke liye padhana likhana nahi padta, anpadh bhi jaan jate hai ye ilu kya hota hai..?😛
aap ne hume aanpadh kaha...?😡
kyun tum nahi ho...?😃
she gets angry turns her face and wanted to go, but he is no less and lifts her up and said ilu ka matlab I love you hota hai and I love you geet...aaj tum hamko nahi rokogi, ye suhana mausam, hum tum, ye mausam ki aangdai phir hum pyar kyun na kare...?
oh...kab se aap shayar ho gaye...?
jabse tum hume mili ho ab chalo jaldi se hume ilu ilu boldo...mat tadpao hume..!
agar hum na kahe to...?
to hum aap ko nahi chodenge...!
jamana kya kahega..?
hum jama-ne-se nahi darte, jamana hum se darata hai samjee...?
itna garoor...?
ye garoor nahi hai meri shaan hai..
she said okay jee hum bhi aapko wo kah dete hai...ilu with my butt kyunki mera butt mere heart se bahot badda hai ji...😃😃
auho geet hume to wo bhi chaleha pyar ka maja kuch jyada hi aayega,,,,😛😉








awesome scene ...
maan toh kuch Jada hi romantic n sayerana ho raha hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Oh My Gosh Both Have Such Great Sense Of Humor
Really Very Beautiful And Vibrant OS


thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika20

Priya Di.. Like press nahi ho raha ..
Reply pehle...
Hmmm hatke image ka stock khatam hone par atleast happy ending.. de dena...
Image 12 me
Gussa aaya Aarti pe..
Maar hi dena tha.. isse toh..
Baki sab okay...
DDD ka DD MSK ...
Me working ...
arre ...
Next image ka wait.. bhi Work hi hai...


yaar wo iamge hatke celebration ka part hai

aur wo story alag ahi jiski tum baat kr rhi ho
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sophiexx

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Priya - pg 28 - the before and after effects of marriage, n I read somewhere people change after marriage. Do they hell? Maan sure hasn't, so unromantic, Geet bechari phas Gaya. But then finally Maan managed to say an romantic line, kudos to him (wink)

Lakshmi - pg 29 - without a doubt Geet has the sole right to call Maan what ever she wants, free liberty of being a Maan. Maan kya kartha hai hehehehe good one. our classic maaneet, always fighting

Maaneetmishtikh - 35 - i know how romantic, what did Geet say wrong, they always fight which results in them watching a move and which in turn results in Maan propsoing to her, what could prossibly go wrong hahahaha

Black widowbaby (BWB) - pg 85- geet n her moods loved it, fake moon spot on girl and then Maan and his moods, why do they mostly result in a chipku Maan hahahah


thank u madam

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