Invitation for GHSP 6th Anniversary/contest- take part/pg137 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome work by everyone nice update loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Maan : geet ye roni surat kyo bama rakhi hai

Mera banya hua khana ka kar tumar nai jaoogi

Samghi tum ... Chalo chup chap chair par betho ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome concept
lovely pics
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Posted: 9 years ago
Edits nahi chalenge.. lol.. I will try to make.. 1-2..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: preetymaaneet

p2 check pg-17 teri khawaish puri kar di maine 😉


are wah tu line pe aa gyi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

ZARA HAAT KE...!
Maan- Zingi ko bahot seriously mat lo geet,kabhi muskurane ka bhi waqt nikalo,nahi to log tumhe dekh ke bolenge, gor kalyoug aa gaya hai,cartoon bhi tention mein rahete hai...!😃
Geet- han han, udao jitni majak udani hai, tumhe chilane aur mazak udane ke siva aata hi kya hai you cartoon..?.😡

Maan- Han sach baat hai I am your friend with same mental disorder as you! samji PRICELESS PRINCESS...?
Geet- oh...! geet's mouth stay open in frustration
Maan-Hare muh band karo makhi geer jayegi,aa gayi subha subha mera sar khane ke liye, koi kam dhandha hai ya nahi...?
Geet-aur tum?kya kar rahe ho?Apron pahan ke haath mein spoon pakdne se tum cook nahi ban jaoge...
maan-sachi?tumhe cooking bahot achhi aati hai?kya banana janti ho...?
geet chado tumhare munh lag ne se koi fayda nahi...!
Maan-Iska matlab tumhe khana banana nahi aata..?
geet- jaise ki tumhe bahot aata hai...ha ha and she makes faces.
Maan main bahot acha pasta bana sakta hoon tumhe aata hai?
Geet Pasta...?and she went in deep thinking,
MAAN-Geet, Geet kya hua abhi to barabar thi?
Geet- Haan...? she came out of her rewire and said ...no kuch nai...! kuch bhuli bisari, khati mitti baat yaad aa gayi...
Maan- aur wo tumhe phir se tention de gai sach haina geet?

Geet- waisa kuch nahi hai, bus koi friend ki yaad aa gayi jise pasta bahot pasand thaa.
maan -tumhe pasta acha lagta hai?
Geet -kabhi khaye nahi hai..
Maan -bas to aaisa karo tum yanha imtiyan se bahetho aur dekho main kaise pasta banata hoon?
Geet -said ok i will wait for it lekin thoda jaldi banayega zi...ok hum wait kaqrte hai aap banake hume khilao.
Maan- Jaisa hukum sarkar..
maharani ji...!Abhi fatafat khana bana deta hoon tabtak ye geet suno..tum ruthi raho main manata rahoon ke maja jine ka aurbhi aata hai-2
Geet -achi baat hai aaj maan sir hume treat denge hurraeee!
and than again she remember something and pouted her face, and maan got irritated with that...tu nahi sudharegi...hai na?
Geet- phir se datna suru kiya? Maan sirrr...! dekho aap ke khane mein machaar gir gaya...ha ha ha ha ha ha...
Maan- dante to apneko hai na Geet...? do you know how much this beautiful moments matters to me? I love to pull your leg taki tum apane past ki yaado se door raho.
And geet become owe stuck...and bent her head down with shyness
TO BE CONTINUE...😉


awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

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Geet: Maan aap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho.. aise dekhke bachi ko daraane ki koshish kar rahe hona aap... par mein bhi Geet Handa hoo... mein kisi se nahi darthi... samjhe aap... Chaliye apna aankon ko thoda rest deejiye... kahi aisa na ho ki wo baahar nikal aaye....

Saying this she laughs loud

Geet ki baatein sunke hi Maan gusse se laal ho gaya tha... aur uski hasi se jwalamukhi jaisa ban gaya and he roared

Maan: Geeettt

Paagalon jaise hasna band karo aur bolo mera pasta kahaan hai... Meine yahi table par banaake rakha tha... mera phone call attend karte hi wo gayab kaise ho gaya...

Geet: Maaan ...calling so sweetly as if her voice was dipped in tons of sugar..

Maan narrowed his eyes ... He knew that tone... it means kuch tho gadbad hai

Maan: Tumne kya kiya geet

Geet: Meine kuch nahi kiya Maan... Sachi... wo mein kitchen mein aayi na aapko doondthe... wo kya haina... mujhe bahut missy ho rahi thi...

saying so she came loving besides Maan

But knowing her antics he stepped back and said Aage bolo

hearing his voice she knew yaha daal galne waali nahi... so she continued in a meek voice keeping her face as innocent as possible ...

Geet : Wo maan mein kitchen mein aayi na... aapko dekhne ki ithni jaldi thi ki

Maan: ki kya geet

Geet: ki mein bhaagke aayi ... table par takraayi... pan neeche gir gaya... aur aapka pasta ...neeeche

Maan: Tumne mera pasta neeche gira diya

Geet: sab aapki galthi thi maan

Maan : kya ismein bhi meri galti ?

Geet: aur nahi tho kya... aap aaj subah se mujhe mile kyu nahi... isiliye tho mujhe ithni missy hui... aur mein bhaag ke aayi aap se milne... aur usi chakkar mein pan neeche gir gaya...

Maan: ye tho tumne teek baat boli.. ab meine galti ki hai tho sorry bhi tho bolna chahiye.. haina geet

His devilish smile was enough for geet to know what his sorry will be

Geet: arrey nahi maan... sorry ki kya zaroorat... its ok... ab mein chalthi hoo

and she was about to dash but Maan knew his mishty well... he caught her before she escaped and pulled her to him...

Maan: aise kaise geet... tumhein meri sorry sunni padegi

he said eying her plump shivering lips

Geet: Nahi maan

she said shying but her eyes were on his M carved lips

She was expecting those lips to be slammed on hers anytime ... thinking about it she shied but the next moment she jumped with a shreik

Maans expert fingers were tickling her waist mercilessly

and geet ran away from him trying to keep his naughty fingers away from her... but maan followed her and then continued the tom and jerry chase...






😆

its so funny


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

sounds like its gonna be a blast

I doubt I will be much help though
everythings frantic right now
plus im not much of a writer
do love our maan n geet though
love how she brought some craziness n fun into his life
whilst he brought passion n steaminess 😉

yaha koi bhi writer nhi tha

maaneet ne bna diya 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Great job..thanks for pm,will try for sure.👍🏼


we wait for ur response

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