MG- ~With You~ THREAD 1 - Page 24

awesome update...

Beautiful update. Both yearning to be with each other. The night scene of catching up was lovely. Geet has always been in love with him and looks like he is also feeling the attraction now. waiting for next already.

Marvelous update. Maan and Geet met in the night again and shared some lovely moments. Geet wished to have these moments again in their life. Hope Dadi doesn't choose Geet for marrying Dev. Beautifully written. Loved it. Waiting for next.

Phenomenal update aishu ...sincerely u have come long way in ur writing. Or shall I say u hve bloomed to a beautiful writer. For me this update had serene poetic feel ...aisa lag raha tha Ki poori kaaynaat Geet nd maan ke saath thi . Woh raat ,bakula flowers woh thandi hawaiyeen ,chandini se bhari fizayeen .everything was perfect to have sumone spl beside u . ...i can imagine how both must hve spent tym with each other. ❤️ ❤️ur words were expressing emotions my dear nd evry word had put me in euphoric trance. beautifully written aishu .Don't know what stored for us but this update had given me a sense. Of tranquillity..just loved it ...its just like naino Ki bhasha samjhene na...
Continue soon

Its so romantic... And have a fairytale touch ...

Lovely update

Beautifully written update ❤️ simply amazing ❤️

Loved maaneet cute meeting

finally back from schedule.
happy... super excited for this story... love the update and geets feelings

super cute moments

Chap 4

Why does this feeling not evade me? I'm got this sinking feeling in my gut that Maan doesn't fully appreciate Geet, and that's shown in the past. The fact that he forget about her in his happiness over winning the match highlights his priorities and feelings. Maybe I'm thinking too deep, I don't know?

They met and Geet can't get over it, so can't Maan. Then they met again in the garden, what a beautiful image you created with mere words. If often said words can create an world of its own and that's what I experienced with your work. I can just imagine the beautiful Geet under the tree in the dark stary night, picture perfect well to be more apt word perfect. I'm liking that Maans equally smitten by Geet, like I said this devdas tragedy feeling isn't leaving me but I'm not complaining. I'm loving it

They finally converse and fulfill that void they felt for he past 10 years, ofcourse I realise the voids to big to be filled in one night hence I request you for some more instances between them 😃 for they together can create a new love saga