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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

Awesome part

Happy to see u update this after long time😉


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sree10

Super update. Geet is gone today. Half spoon if sugar? Maan will blast her for sure. But she's going in positive direction .

Waiting for next update


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree



<font size="2" color="#009900">Waiting for next</font>


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Lovely FF dear

Nyc CS
Loved it!!
Liked each and every updates
Geet and maan's family are family friends and they shared great camaraderie with each other
Maan shared lovely rapport with reet and was his only best friend
With tym geet and her sister reet lot their parents
Gradually reet took over geet's responsibility and wanted to pursue her education from London
With turn of events Reet's flight crashed and resulted in her death leaving Geet alone
With years geet returned to Delhi to pursue her education
Everything was changed but geet accepted the fact that Dev will be would be husband and knit dreams regarding her life with Dev
On other hand maan turned arrogant and preferred to be aloof and lack of emotions
Geet was hurt when maan didnot recognize her but maan did recognize her but preferred to be aloof and unconcerned
Geet made friendship with Pari and showed seniors her presence of mind who had presented themselves to rag her upon dev's insistence
Dev considers geet to be old fashioned and not his type
Nt being Dev's current GF is insecure abt geet and confronts her and states that dev is ashamed of her and her clothing sense
Geet is determined to win dev's heart and seeks maan's assistance indirectly
Maan helps her out and geet being naive and innocent wants to win dev
Geet added sugar to maan's black coffee
Hope he doesn't yell at geet
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update😊


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




Geet is trying to impress Dev...

but she is not understanding that he is not interested in her...

food of his liking can be prepared by cooks...he is not interested in marrying a cook who can make food according to his choice... he wants his type or choice of girl whom he can love and surely Geet doesn't fit in his choice...

but I think Geet needs jhatka to realize the truth...but hope that jhatka should be halka not zor ka jhatka...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...



Let's wait to see how she reacts..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Oh No !!!! Geet is in major trouble now adding extra sugar to Maan's coffee </font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Geet wanting to impress Dev but as Naintara told her she is not worth it to prove to Dev </font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">now Geet determined to be much more studious and be the best so Dev can be proud of her </font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">learning his likes of food will certainly impress him and she thought everything that Maan likes Dev too likes it </font>

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That's because Maya told her that..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

part 9 nice dear geet aska maan indirectly how to ompress dev wht will happen nice continue soon dear


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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 10

With tinge of excitement in her heart, she entered inside the study room,Maan was busy in searching something on the shelf ,Geet went and stood beside ,but he ignored her presence which annoyed Geet so she cleared her throat to get his attention which did the trick and he looked at her..getting his glare Geet smiled and forwarded the coffee mug towards him..He stared at the coffee mug and then looked at her..
Maan- why you brought it...where is Nakul?
Geet- he is busy in some other stuff so I brought it! , nonchalantly she said..
Taking the coffee mug from her, he turned to do what he was doing before, he excepted that after giving the mug Geet would leave to do her stuff but she stood there only as if waiting for something..
while on other side Geet was eagerly waiting to see his reaction after having a sip of coffee..
with cornered eyes he looked at her, fidgeting with her dupatta she was anticipating for something but what ...he don't know but observing Geet for so many days he knew she will herself blurt out her inner thoughts soon he just have to wait..thinking this he took a sip of a coffee but as the coffee reached his taste buds the extra sweetness spread in his mouth which he hated..while on otherside as soon as his lips touched the mug Geet with her hawk eyes looked at his face but instead of getting any reaction she got to see a plain face only ..before she could even make out anything from that plain face he glared at her

Geet immediately bowed her eyes down..

Maan(in stern voice)- you made it?

surprised by his sudden question she looked up

Geet(st)- did he guessed it?

Not getting any reply he asked again

Maan- I asked you something??

Geet- a..y..yes...how is it?, scared by his stern voice still she dared to ask him but instead of answering her Maan shouted for Nakul, confusing Geet

Maan- Nakul!

Confused Geet looked at him, while he directly stared her as if accussing her something, he again called Nakul, poor Nakul who was damn scared literally came running there..

Nakul- ye..yes sir..

Maan- bring that dustbin here!

Following his master's order he went and brought the dustbin which was kept at one corner of the room, Geet eyes followed Nakul, while Maan kept looking at her as Nakul came to them with dustbin, Maan emptied the whole mug of coffee in it shocking both Geet and Nakul!

While emptying the mug in dustbin too he stared at her as if warning her for something

Maan(looking at Geet)- bring me my coffee , Nakul!, he ordered him

Nakul immediatedly left from there knowing his master's temper while shocked Geet kept looking at him, her eyes questioned him for his action.., as Nakul left

Maan- you are neither my servant nor my caretaker...so mind your own business!

saying this or rather say warning her, he left to sit at his usual place with a file in hand leaving a shocked Geet behind..

Geet expected bad remarks and even thought he will scold her for adding extra sugar in his coffee but not even in her wild dreams she ever thought that he will throw her hand made coffee in dustbin!

Angrily she looked at Maan who was sitting at his usual place busy in his work ,looking as cool as cucumber, his mere presence was increasing her anger at that moment, her blood pressure seemed to get higher and higher, so instead of wasting her more time there she decided to leave that place, stomping her feet she left, Maan saw her leaving but ignored her!



Whole night she cribbed about Maan to Reet while talking to her through her photo..., when she was done with pouring out her anger on Maan , she felt nice...

Geet(st)- Geet you are mad..you are expecting too much from him..he is not the same Maan like before..he has transformed into something devil ..he don't care about you like before, it doesn't matter to him whether i'm happy or i'm crying , he is always rude with me...he didn't even ask how i have been when i came here...why he have became like this babaji, why???, i think the only thing that matters to him is his work.., that's why nobody in this house talks to him because he don't talk to them..., but babaji it's wrong na.., he should understand this.., give him some sense babaji..., but now enough he think himself as someone great na and don't like when i talk to him then its okay...if he wants it and then let it be..i'm not dying to talk to him either, here i was trying to be nie with him but the fact is he don't deserve! her whole night went in like this only...


Next Day in CollegeCollege


Walking to and fro in the corridor Geet was waiting for Pari so that both could leave for the class together, while walking Geet eyes got the attention of notice board..She went there and started looking at the contents of it...suddenly her eyes landed on the notice which was of some debate competition which was going to be held in college , the winner will further represent her college on next level...,this interested Geet, in school days Geet was best in these kinds of competitions, she always loved to participate in these kinds of stuffs rather than singing or dancing...in addition to that if she wins , she will get popular among her college students and maybe Dev too will get impressed by her...

She was thinking all this when Pari came there and looked at her friend.., who was lost in deep thoughts that she didn't even notice her presence , to get her attention Pari patted her shoulder..which worked and Geet looked at Pari..

Pari- where are lost??

Geet- i..bas aise hi...a..i was thinking to participate in this debate competition(she pointed towards the notice),.what do you think about it? not sure of her decision she asked Pari..

Pari first read the notice regarding the competition then looked at Geet...

Pari- are you sure?..i mean..our internals too are nearing and in additon to that if you will particiapte then you have to prepare for it too along with our internals, your pressure will increase!

Geet knew this but she wants to impress Dev too, yeah the pressure will be more but she is cofident to handle the pressure she will study for extra hours to do well in both the fields..from childhood she have learnt that god help those who help themselves , she just can't sit and wait for Dev , she have to put in efforts from her side too and if she is willing to give her 100% than she is sure god too will be on her side..., with these thoughts in mind she registered her name for debate competition...


Night


It was same usual night after dinner Geet was helping Nakul with the cleaning and all...soon they heard Maan shouting for coffee.., the memories of last night came back to Geet but then she shrugged it off as she was already over it

Nakul moved to prepare the coffee ,Geet thought something and stopped him..

Geet- i will prepare it !

Nakul- but last night..

Geet- yesterday i added an extra spoon of full sugar in it , that's why..

Nakul- what... but i told..

Geet- pata hai kaka...me hi pagal thi..but i will prepare it again..you just look ,if i do some mistake while preparing it , pinpoint it , if you get statisfied then take it to him, okay!

Nakul- me..but..

Geet- me hi jaati but i doubt if he sees coffee mug in my hand then he will definetly throw it in dustbin before even tasting it!

Nakul- are u sure...i mean what if he recognises that it's not me who prepared it then ...kahi phirse..

Geet- what will he do, throw the coffee in dustbin again, then let him do it, either its him how will get tired of throwing this coffee in dustbin or its me how will get tired of making this coffee!

Nakul- hmm..., he didn't know what more can he say in this matter, he just hopped that Maan sir just don't fire him from his job..

Geet prepared the coffee with extra attention while Nakul looked at her, she did it in same way like he does..the amount of everything was exactly same ,so from his side there was no mistake ,seeing him statisfied Geet passed the mug to Nakul so that he can take it to Maan...

With scared steps Nakul went inside the study room , Maan was busy in his work..

Nakul- s..sir..coffee..

Maan- hmm place it on table..., obeying his order he placed it and was going to leave when Geet entered inside..

Geet- good night kaka...

Nakul- good night beta...

As Maan heard Geet for a second his attention got diverted but then it was usual thing of her wishing Nakul good night and then saying hi to him , he expected to hear her hi but she didn't rather she just came , sat opposite to him, opened her book and notebook and started to scribble something in it..., compeletly ingoring him...

Maan(st)- maybe she is upset about yesterday...but it is good..she will soon understand the reality that i'm not the old Maan...i just hope she don't forget it soon and again start behaving like before!

thinking this he grabbed his coffee mug and took a sip..., he felt something different.., the bitterness is same, the sugar level is exactly what he prefer but still something is different..., he looked at Geet but she was totally engrossed in her book...

Maan(st)- she haven't prepared it..then???

For him everything was perfect but still something was unusual in it...it tasted more good today..., not able to pinpoint the exact reason he shrugged the thought and again got engrossed in his work while enjoying his coffee...

While on opposite side, Geet didn't dared to look up at his expression knowing if he will see her looking at him then he will surely guess it that something is wrong in his coffee and she don't want that, so when she felt that he is drinking it silently she thanked her babaji that he didn't throw it in dustbin again ...

Geet(st)- that means i have done a good ..well done Geet well done, she patted her back on her achievement!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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