ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please update! waiting! n do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mg FF Aansoon

Hey Guyss I am really sry for not updating bt what to do i m busy with my board exams preprations so sry.. Nd i will try to update bt till 31 march i caN not gurantee.. . Hope u understand... So here is the Part 2 .

Part 2

Geet came to mandir with her tayi ji and mummy ji...

Tayi ji said- "Rano tune sara samaan rakh liya hai na pooja de vaastee..."

Rano said-"ji bhabiji maine saara samaan rakh liya hai ai dekhiye kumkum,roli ,moli"

And other things to do pooja...

Tayi ji said-"phool kitthe hai??"

Rano said- "Are ethe hi th the kaha gaye..."

She start searching flowers... and said- "oh ho geet ko uthaan de chakar vich phool rakhna te mai pul hi gyi... Oh te mej pe hi pade rahe gaye he babaji ae ki hogaya..."

Geet said - "oh ho mummy ji tension kyu lende ho mai ho naa chalo aap log andar jao mai phool leke aandi aa maine nicche phula di dookan vekhi si.."

Tayi ji and Rano said- "Thik hai puttar aram naal jai.."

Geet said-" ji "

And geet goes outside and Rano and tayi in mandir...

Meanwhile outside mandir Maan came with dadi ma in his car.

He said to dadi ma- "Dadi ma aap andar jao mai car park kar ke aata hoon..."

Dadi ma said- "thik hai beta lekin jaldi aana phone pe mat lag jaana ok"

Maan said- "Dadi ma aapke kehne pe mai aapke saath aaya hoo na aap andar jaiye mai pakka 5 mins me aandar aajaoonga.."

Dadi ma said- "Ok but only 5 mins" .

Maan said - "Ji only 5 mins.."

Dadi ma goes in...

And maan starts taking u turn to park his car... When he saw a girl coming in her red suit She was laughing and talking with someone on phone her face was not visible as she was quite far She started coming towards his car He started buzzing horn...

Here Geet was coming out from mandir when her ph started ringing...

She took the call it was pinky...(same as Serial)

Pinky said-"Hello Geet tu aaj aa rhi hai na interview ke liye"

Geet Said-"haan baba main aa rhi hoon"
Pinky said-"dekh geet late mat hui yo nhi th phele hi din tu reject ho jayegi tu DD ko nhi jaanti vo bahaut gusse wale hai"

Geet Said-"DD yeh kaun hai Dusht Danav Lolzz"and she started laughing...

She was laughing when she got bumped with the black merceds

Geet said-"Ouch.. Aah babaji Aaj hi yeh sab hona tha"

Pinky said-"Geet kya hua tu thik th hai.. Hello geet helllo.."and ph got cut...

Geet looked up and started shouting like mad -"oye ullu de patthe gadhe bewakoof Tum pgl wagl ho kya dekh kar gaadi nhi chala sakte kya thumari wajah se mujhe chot lag jaati th u idiot.. .. Hey babaji pta nhi kaise kaise log hai iss duniya me bas apni hi chalate hai bade aaye pta nhi kya samjhte hai apne aap ko"

Here Maan when listened to geet became angry because first tym someone shouted at him like this He saw geet and was mesmerized by her simplicity... She was looking like an angel in her red salwar suit...

Maan was busy in his thoughts when geet shouted again bt this tym little louder He was back to his MSK angry young man... Style .. He came out of his car...

He shouted-"oyeee misss how dare you to shout at me like this ho kaun tum or tumhari himmat kaise hui mujh par chillane ki tum jaanti bhi ho ki tum kisse baat kr rhi ho... Huhhh..."


Geet said- "oye hello mr mai bahaut acche se jaanti hoon ki mai kisse baat kr rhi hoo or rahi baat himmat ki th mujhme bahaut himmat hai mere babaji ne di hai mujhe ye himmat tum baatao mujhe ki tumhe jab gaadi chalani nahi aati th driver kyu nhi rakh lete ho... Andhe kahi ke"


Maan was so angry beacause first tym someone shouted at him like this nd not only shouted said him andha...


Maan said angrily- "How dare you tumne mujhe andha kaha mujhe tum hoti kaun ho mujhe accuse krne wali tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho... Nd for ur kind information andha mai andhi th tum ho... Or sirf andhi hi nhi deaf bhi ho... Bina kuch soche samjhe mujhpe chillana shuru kr diya.huhhh"


Geet made an O shape when maan said her andhi she said - "haww andhi mai nhi andhe tum ho mr.Huhhh..."


Maan said her- "Tumne mujhe phir se andha kaha How dare you?"

Geet said-"How dare me wow gr8 ek th galti karo upar uspe sry bolne ke bajaye behes kar rahe hoo...you andhe "

Maan said-"Listen mai akhari baar tmse bol rha hoo mai andha nhi hoon.. Samjhi tum"

Geet said-"Bolungi andha kya kr loge tum Andhe Andhe Andhe Andhe ... "

Maan said-" U ... Forget it...Huhh..."
And leaves from there in anger...

Geet also goes to take flowers...

Maan Thinking-"Us ladki ki himmat kaise hui mujhe MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko Andha kahene ki vo samjhti kya hai apne aap ko bs upar se hi khoobsoorat hai lekin jab bolna shuru krti hai th huhh..."

Geet thinking-"Kitna ajeeb adami tha kitna attitude tha usme ek th galti kri upar se sry bhi nhi bola ... Babaji mujhe usse phir kabhi mat milwaana plzz"

Precap- Maaneet Meet in Office...

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Edited by himani02 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. awesome
maan n Geet were amazing lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update ...
dono kitna jhagda karte hai 😛
dono ek dusre ko suna ne mei hi mast hai ...n geet lol uski toh band bajhne vali hai office mei 😛

best of luck dear for ur board exam...n don't worry about the update ...we will wait 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyy himani congo for ur new story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its an amazing story yar 👏
geet is jhalli types 😃 and maan as usual angry young man 😡
ohh god first meeting mein hi siyappa ho gya 😲
she bumped with his car..
And called him andha..
I just loved their fight yar 😃
what will happen when she comes to know that he is his would be boss?
thanku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Update
Both Maan and Geet have come to the Mandir with their family but both outside the Mandir
while Geet had to buy flowers Maan had to park his car Geet however received a call
and was all involved in it and did not hear Maan hooting at her neither did she see the car
but she had blames for this stranger while he too was amazed and angry that some girl spoke to him and blamed him
waiting now to see what happens further
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb part loved geet maan fight...waiting to see there reaction to see them in office...update soon will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful star.. Can't wait for story to progress...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! so Maan n Geet meet! Geet on a call n doesn't hear him hoot! Maan sees her n is mesmerized! he tries 2 get her attention as he is parking his car! Geet argues n blames Maan! Maaneet fight! Geet doesn't want 2 see him again! bt alas she has 2! lovely precap! update soon! all the best 4 ur exams! update wen u can bt dnt discontinue!

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