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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

main kal se ye bol bol kar thak gayi hu k abhi update dene ki kya zarurat hai take rest juct chat with us na di baat nahi sunti


😆 abhi kahan de rahi hu..
bas statement change ki hei ..
talking to u , if feel fine then i'll give , otherwise TM ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

Ab aap ki tabiyat kaisi hai..
missed u nd ur story..
nice part...
so he gonna help his daD.
waiting for precap..
good nt di..
take care of ur health nd don't stress much


🤗 thanku sweetie
feeling better now ..
Good night ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

yeah just joined today 😳 di too opened a account recently...are you on twitter???

yes i am on it
but dont twitte much just read others
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 abhi kahan de rahi hu..
bas statement change ki hei ..
talking to u , if feel fine then i'll give , otherwise TM ..

😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu18

yes i am on it
but dont twitte much just read others

m still in understanding mode 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

m still in understanding mode 😆


😊 how is ur editing going ..?
tried something more ..?
priya se poocho na ,, she'll help u

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

m still in understanding mode 😆


i send you a pm
my tiwtter acc
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Posted: 9 years ago


Hello friends

Updating


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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

The Myth


( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 103

Part - 104


😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..

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Maan was adoring Geet ,, he was attracting towards her like a moth to a flame ,, her every small thing pleased his heart ,, her presence around him soothe him ,, he felt delighted when he saw her dimpled smiles ,, she was a bliss for him .

Maan came close to her lost in her flawless beauty ,, cupped her face nd adjusted her loose ringlet ,, Geet was staring at him with a blushy smile ,, sometime his actions made her restless nd uneasy ,, his open adoring embarrassed her .

Geet : Maan plzz , stop this ,, u r embarrassing me .

Maan : nd u r mesmerizing me ,, u r looking very beautiful Geet .

Geet shied : Maan , ab bas , KC nahi chalna hei kya ? owner ho eska matlab ye nahi rules follow na karo .

Maan : Mrs Geet maan singh Khurana every employee knew Maan a very punctual person ,, I never tolerate mistakes in my work.

1st Geet startled with that addressing , but then she composed herself bcoz now a days Maan took her name like this many times ,, he whole heartedly accept their relation , but she taunted him for his perfection .

Geet mocked: accha, strange,, d person who never tolerate mistakes did blunders nd other tolerated that ,, I cn't believe this .

Maan face fall ,, she was taunting right ,, he really did blunders nd she tolerated a lot bcoz of them ,, how cd he say himself perfect in front of her ,, Maan was nothing in front of Geet .

Maan ruefully : yes u won't believe Geet bcoz i failed when it comes to our relation nd family ,, I really disappointed everyone at that front , nd I m really regretting for that .

Geet felt that unknowingly she hurt Maan taunting him like that ,, she forgot that they decided to keep their past away from their present nd future .

Geet sadly: wo ,, I m sorry Maan , my words hurt u .

Maan: I told u Geet plzz don't say sorry to me ,, u said d truth , nd I have to feel d pain which u bear .

Geet: leave this topic here ,, it's only disturb us ,, let's go ,, r u not getting late mr MSK ?

Maan : hum ,, let's go , we have to inform mom nd DM too .

Geet pick d baby bag nd her purse nd Maan their baby ,, both came in DM's room where Reema was busy talking with DM .

Maan : mom , DM me nd Geet r going to KC ,, I told Dad about this nd viv is with us , will be back in few hrs ,OK.

DM & Reema : going KC , wow!!, OK , go ,,introduce Geet to all nd show her KC's office .

Geet: mom , DM u both r tired , plzz take some rest ,, Dev nd Meera r going for frw hrs , so don't burden u with work ,, i'll secure rest of work after coming back.

Reema: sure beta , we'll .

Geet: promise , DM no more work plzz , otherwise I won't go .

Maan: DM plzz promise, nahi to ye nahi jayegi ( he thought about his surprise which he planned for Geet while he was getting ready in study ) Mom , we both help u after coming back.

Reema: Ok promise baba ,, u both go , we'll wait for u nd take care of my kiddu , bye .

Geet nd maan : yeah sure , bye

Both went out nd Maan was very excited ,, he called Romeo when he was in mid way nd told him to be ready ,, they reached in KC's compound ,, Geet saw d building , it was quiet big building of 5-6 floors ,, at Gr floor there was a bank branch nd a food place of a well known branded food chain ,, Maan escorted her towards their Pvt lift ,, a watchman was sitting there who saluted them nd wished maan nd geet ,, d lift reached at Gr floor nd when it's door opened Yash was in that with a client , he smiled at them nd took Viv in his arms at once , then introduce him with d client .

Yash: mr Das meet my Grand son Vivaan singh Khurana , u know MK nd she is his wife Geet Maan singh Khurana , doing MBA with MK in Canada .

Maan wished mr Das nd they shook hands ,, Geet folded her hands in namasty, bent her head lil nd wished him with a smile ,, Mr Das was a matured man nd joined hands with KC in their new project ,, he didn't attend Geet nd Maan's marriage nd seeing Geet 1st time ,, he liked Geet's simplicity ,, related to a rich nd big family she was looking down to earth nd cultured .

Mr Das blessed her keeping his hand on her head : u r very sweet beta ,, god bless u all d happiness ,, r u joining KC with MK ?

Geet: no uncleji , I just come for a small visit .

Yash: after study she cn join mr das ,, she is a part of KC .

Geet felt honoured ,, Yash not only gave her shares of KC but publicly accepted her as a part of KC ,, he did everything by heart , not to compromise for his family respect ,, he gave Geet equal rights ,, Mr das went after bidding bye to them ,, Yash took Viv with him in his room nd called Maan nd Geet there after meeting with staff ,, all staff looking at Yash holding a baby ,, they understood that it was MK's son ,, Romeo got alert nd waited for Maan nd Geet near d entrance door.

He wished both nd welcomed them ,, maan nd Geet entered nd reached in d mid of big office where all wr waiting for them ,, Romeo pressed a key on a remote nd shower of rose petals started over Geet nd Maan ,, all clapped nd wished them ,, Maan was there after a yr nd all wr delighted seeing him sply female staff , who got d precious glimpse of their hotty boss after yr ,, they wr taking deep breaths nd nd drooling over their handsome boss ,, few liked Geet's simplicity nd few took that out dated nd not perfect for their handsome boss ,, Shasa was shocked seeing a diff girl with Maan .

Shasha was in Maan's college nd knew about Maan nd sam's relation , but after her graduation she went in diff college for masters ,, she joined KC few mnths back nd didn't knew that MK married to a diff girl not to Sam .

There geet was surprised with that welcome ,, looked awed at Maan who was smiling ,,, M a a n ,, welcome in KC Geet ,, Maan ye sab ... Sshh,,, Geet ,, baad mei ,, Maan thanked all nd introduced Geet to them.

Maan: thanks Romeo nd all for this lovely welcome ,, meet my wife Geet Maan Singh Khurana nd Geet this is our main staff of diff dept , rest staff r on next 2 floors ,, come i'll show u ,, nd u all plzz go back to ur work ,, I m coming in few min to check everything .

All d staff rushed back to their places ,, even Shasha too ,, she decided to meet him later .

Maan handed Geet's bags to Romeo to keep them in his( now Dev's) office nd went to show Geet other places ,, they wr in corridor nd geet was looking all around nd her foot hit with a sofa ,, she was going to fall but Maan held her in his arms .. be careful Sona ,, where r u seeing ? Thanks Maan .

Maan sat on that sofa having Geet on his lap which shocked Geet nd tried to get up , but Maan held her tight from waist .

Geet: Maan what r u doing , leave me ,, koi aa jayega ,, chodo mujhe ,, tum ye kya kar rahe ho ?

Maan: chup ,, bilkul chup ,, koi nahi aayega yahan , aur aata hei to aane do , MK kisi se nahi darta ,, pahale check karo chot to nahi lagi .

Geet: r u mad Maan ,, this is office ,, where is ur perfection ? leave me plzz ,, babaji !!! koi dekhega to kya sochega ?

Maan: ok chod dunga 1st promise me for a favour .

Geet; promise ,, favour ,, ab aur kya favour chahiye aapko ?

Maan smiled: a dinner with u .

Geet: aur baby? Uske dinner ka kya ?

Maan chuckled : uska meal to always ready rahata hei ,, don't worry about him he'll be with us , but at dinner only u nd me ,, bolo ready ?

Geet looked around fearfully nd then at Maan : Maan u r becoming very demanding ,, sacchi ,, plzz 1st leave me then i'll talk to u .( she Made an angry face) .

Maan: 1st promise me ,, Geet u always eat with ur friends , cn't u eat with me .

Geet: maan we daily take meals nd coffee together , then why this ?

Maan: u come in KC 1st time , nd I want a lil celebration ,, plzz a dinner ,, say yes na .
Geet : forcing me ?

Maan nodded with a smile : no, requesting u .

Geet: like this ?

Maan: giving u rest .

Geet: enough this rest nd care ,, I think u r here to help dad not to waste time like this .

Maan: ok then, be quick nd say yes baby, then we'll go to meet dad .

Geet: fine ghar jaker baat karenge iss per ,, abhi kaam karo .

Maan: plzz sona .

Geet huffed nd tried to pass d topic :OK ,, fine , now do some work mr perfect .

Maan smiled : thanks ,, lets go .

They got up nd Maan took her in a near by office which was his office .

Geet : where is dad's office ?

Maan: wait Geet ,we r going there .

Maan called Romeo nd told him to bring all d files which wr to be check by Dev nd then he nd Geet went in Yash office where he was sitting in big sofa playing music on his phone for baby nd talking with Viv who was replying only in hu nd haan throwing his hands nd legs , Maan nd Geet smiled seeing a big businessman playing with a baby.

Geet: dad, did he trouble u ?

Yash smiled : no beta ,, he was playing ,, have u seen d whole office .. kaisa laga KC ?

Geet: it's really very beautifully organized with all facilities for staff .

Yash: thanks ,, we want to spread our business more , so have to keep d std high .

Maan: dad if u have work then we r taking viv with us.

Yash: yes I have meeting after half an hr ,, there r few financial dept files of last week to check , will u check them ?

Geet: dad i'll do that , give me .

Yash: u want to ?

Geet: yes ,, plzz , if u cn trust on my ability .

Yash: G e e t ,, I always trust u ,, there r d files ,, check it if u get time from this naught baby , otherwise Maan'll do ,, I have to talk with Bansals before meeting.

Maan: ok dad , we r in my ,, I mean dev's office .

Maan took d files nd Geet took baby nd left from there ,, yash got busy in his work nd Maan nd Geet came in their ,, geet settled Viv on sofa nd Maan placed d table attached to sofa to protect baby .

Geet sat near baby nd started reading a file where as Maan sat in his office chair nd started checking d other files ,, after an hr he got up having a file in his hand .


Precap --- Maan nd Shasha's talk ,, Geet overheard ..


Part - 105


sorry for mistakes ...
Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 how is ur editing going ..?
tried something more ..?
priya se poocho na ,, she'll help u

yes tried 2 new things 😃
ruko dikhati hu...n dis are always there whenever i needed any help 😃

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