O Saathi Re MG SS - TSR pg 145,new thd pg 1 ***

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: ArchanaRoy
eagerly waiting for geet ka maan's waky waky time ... okey update na sahi teaser he
sahi kaam chala loogi wahi dedo plss !! Banda on demand pls wake him up from his Hansom Sleep
uff enna Hot Hot Msk still sleeping sleeping I'm heartbroken 💔 💔 ..
uff uski hotness ka kya hoga babaji 🤣 🤣 ...

removing record snow from my home 26 inches
😭
will try though to post something before I go to India 😃

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

TEASER

"Maine keh diya toh keh diya Kiran. Ma kabhi bhi nahi chahegi ki Maan ki bahu doctor ho. Wo humesha se yeh maanti hai ki bahu se ghar chalta hai, bacho ko acchi parvarish milti hai. Agar bahu apni padhai aur career mein busy ho jaati hai toh poore parvivar pe asar padta hai iss baat ka. Hum dono ke liye Ma ne ye socha tha aur baat sahi bhi hai. Main bhi Ma ki baat se sehmat hu. Tum ghar pe thi toh Maan kitni acche se padhe aur doctor banne", Maan's father said to his mother.

"Par .." Kiran barely spoke when her husband cut her off.

"Bas. Iske aage koi baat nahi hogi. Tum Maan ko samjha dena. Jawan hai, doctor hai; aissi lakh ladkiyon ki line laga duga apne bete ke liye".

"Maan usse pyar karta hai", Kiran put in, " .. main usse khush dekhna chahti hu. Kya aap kuch bhi nahi kar sakte? Apne liye kabhi nahi maangti par apne bete ko main dukhi nahi dekh sakti".

Raj was quiet as he recognized that he had not been able to give Kiran a lot of time in their life together.

"Ek choice hai. Agar ladki apni padhai chod de aur doctor ban ne ke sapne ko bhool jaaye, toh main Ma ko samjha sakta hu. Ma pilgrimage se wapis aa jaaye tab baat karte hai", Raj spoke.

Hazel eyes teared as she heard their words by accident.

There were some dreams she had, some promises she had made.

She was not about to let that go.

She made up her mind to speak with Maan on the way back.

A/N: Something about the past opening up. There will be more of past and present. How they met etcetra but for now... miss me.

Yes, Daadima is a bit of a khadoos in this one😆

I will be back in 10 days. I hope I get a chance to write something for you by then.

Thanks for the comments and encouragement to keep writing 😃

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

😃 very nice tsr ..

waiting ...

🤗 hello Avi dear ..

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#454

wow emotional teasers yar

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#455

lovely teaser! update wen u can. Njoi ur trip!

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#456

Nice update. Dadima of your stories are too sweet. I will love to see this khadoos dadi.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#457

Chapter 2

beautiful portrayal of Geet's emotions..the brain cell, molecules...at one side she was cribbing of all the hospitals you have to send him to mine..the reason was it will unset the wall built around herself..but then no longer could hold herself from keeping away.

Maan himself seems a great human being, who chose to be part of the rescue unit putting his life in danger when he had the choice to lead a more safe and comfortable life.
Dadima does not look like the usual Dadima :) she accused Geet of being the kind of girls who are after his money..how come she did not know or recognize Geet as Maan's fiancee..

Tara part -- that was much painful and emotional part..but Dev's rubbing her hand even in her unconscious state was like soothe to the pain...when one side the policemen averted from the matter, but he and other doctors stood there with humanity doing their duty and helping the law in a way...lakha and rakha and all involved, do not feel to even write their names..they should be given the highest level of punishment.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#458

nice teaser..so the reason and past getting unfold..but Dadima herself was a doctor, she mentioned that in the last part..why would she oppose then.

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nish285

@nish285

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#459

After seeing the teaser and theupate...i aso happy with geet...she did not act like a culprit before dadima on finding her with maan like dat...though dadima did not take much time and drawing conclusions and labeling her as the bad one.. ..i wish geet would have given her a smug nd attitude wala smile wen she revealed who she was to maan ...she upheld her self respect ...and even her dreams for dat matter...
Wat makes me sad here is dat...its sooo easy for ppl to dismiss a gal her wishes and her dreams...the belief here is ..."she is a girl...she should know to adjust anyhow"...the thought is sooo wronggg...
Anyways
Once again after pnp ..i am even more glad dat dis geet here is such an "AWESOME" charater...lookung forward to how she ll deal with such ppl in d story...:)