Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016

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muskaan.jannat

@muskaan.jannat

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Awesome story
I've just read the 3 parts and I'm already loving it... Maan's such mysitious caracter he's folowing her everywhere... And geet didn't payed attention to it but now that she is getting to jay maan's not able to digest it and he's attaced them
Waitting for next

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

interesting update ...curious for more ...

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avem

@avem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Love the update 😆 pleas update soon⭐️

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Nice update geet went on a date with yash but maan came there

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

wow.. its interesting

Geet is full of life girl... having friends.. having crush with school's handsome hunk Yash..

Aww is that Maan?..who is keep following Geet everywhere?.. she is so scared of him.. has seen him once or twice after night club incident...

oh mysterios person got pissed off..when yash & Geet were going to kiss.. so he knocked out Yash & bring Geet with him..

waiting for next update... add me in your pm list

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Waiting Already For Next Part😆

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Nice update. After the ceremony, Geet and Meera went to Yash's party. Yash offered her a drink. He asked her to go for a movie with him and than for dinner at some restaurant. She agreed. She is very happy. On her way back to home she told Meera about her outing with Yash. After movie and dinner, Yash and Geet were walking in a park. Yash tried to kiss her and she also wanted . At that time someone hit Yash and he was lying on the ground. A big hand covered her mouth and something pricked in her neck.

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sonaly

@sonaly1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Part 4

"Geet"

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I have some personal reason.

When my lips says Yash name, his hand wrapped around my throat.

"MAAN. This lips are made for to say my name." He say darkly. I feel soo much scared. "Say MAAN"

"Ma...maa...n"

"Good girl" he smiles. "Now let go the blanket. I want to see you again."

Again? He must be the one who undressed me.

"Please." I beg.

"Geet be a good girl. It will not be good for you and..."

I losen my hands on the blanket. And he removed the blanket on me slowly, like he unwrapping a special gift. Tear of helplessness role down on my eyes. He kiss the tear on my eyes.

"I will make it special. I promise, it will be pleasurable for you, very special." He explain to me softly, like I a child.

Helplessly I closed my eyes and he unwrap the blanket from me.

Sorry for mistakes...

Please do like and comments...

Edited by sonaly1234 - 9 years ago