Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Part 6 is nice part sach ma geet maan ka liya ek puppet hai and ya maan to possessive hai geet ka liya and geet vi ab kisi action ka reaction vi nahi de raha hai jo kaha wo kar rahi hai..

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Part 7 nice part maan na dadima sa kitna rude behave kia lagta hai maan ka kuch bitter past hai jo usa km ma yaad ata hai to wo wanha jana nahi chahta hai and ya to mad ho raha hai geet sa milna.. Waiting for next..

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Nice part

Something surily bad happen in maan past

Update soon

There is no maaneet scene in this update

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Intriguing Update

Maan has left home now for fourteen years but why he does not want to be with his family something in his family home haunts him some dreadful memories but surely he could take his family with him live with all of them .
now he is preparing himself to come to Geet

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

nice update ...
maan family se dur rehe raha hai n dadi usse ghar Jane ko bol rehi hai ...jo ki woh nehi krna chahata ...
aisa kya huya tha past mei jiske karan maan apne family ke sath nehi hai ? apne Bhai behen ke nehi milta but unki har khabar usse pata hota hai ...
dekhte hai agge kya hota hai ...continue soon...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! well written! update soon

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Nice update
dadi wants back to home..bt why is maan relucant????
Wat had happend in past..curious to know...

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

awesome update. but missed maneet scene...

maan is very very possessive, obseesive for Geet... he is feeling good with Geet..wanted her for himself.. not allowing to go, even dream other than him

Dadi. .wants maan to come back his family..his siblings..but don;t want.. there must be some past..

wondering what will be dadi's reaction when will she sees Maan with Geet..

waiting for next update

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dia1234

@dia1234

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

no maaneet moment. But i like this part. now we could know maans family background. what will dadima do when she find out about Geet?? plz continue soon.