Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

nice update..
waiting for next update..

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Awesome update

It's odd to hear Maan calling Geet as a pet

What is this Man up to

Savitri devi she wants Maan to come home and

He doesn't want to go

He left 14 yrs back

Seriously he is a mysterious man

Is he is planning for a holiday with Geet

He don't want to be distributed at night 🤣

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sonaly

@sonaly1234

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Teaser

YES I can open the window. This room is on second floor, ground is full of sands. And I can probably somehow step down to the ground. But that's not the problem, the problem is view of outside. The outside I can see Palm trees sand and out there that is blue color is the ocean. I can hear the wave ripple hic.

It was 12pm when the door is opened. When I lady enter the room. She is older than me probably early 30. She is carring a tray.

"Hello Miss handa" she says softly. I stare at her blackly.

"I'm Jenny for your look after. I got breakfast or I can say lunch for you. You sleep too much." She said.

I watch the door opened. If I attack her, I can probably escape. My expression get harder.

"Please don't attack me. Because there is no place you can go" she said calmly.

"We are in a private...

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dia1234

@dia1234

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Nice teaser. We are private what?

Can't wait. When will you update?

Please update soon.

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sonaly

@sonaly1234

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Thanks guys, who do like and comments on my ff. I will update very soon

Thanks once again.

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

maan couldnt withstand dadis presence

n he talks with him rudely

he is irriatated as he want 2 be with geet only

how will dadi react when she will know about geet

nice part

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Awesome update. Maan's Dadima came to meet him in office but he is rude to her. He has not met his siblings for last 14 years. Waiting for next update.