Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. How can Maan do this. A rapist cannot be a hero under any circumstances. Geet will must be broken.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6



"Maan"



She is just Sobbing at my arms. And I just holding her, she is so soft, just like a fluffy pet. Yes pet. My pet, only mine. She is not only pet, she is everything. I want her, want her everything. Her body, her soul, her love, her hate, her smile, her tear, her pain, her pleasure everything. Every bloody single thing. And I know I will get everything.

When she says its her first time, I feel joy. I feel l am a teen age boy, who get first kiss from a beautiful girl. I her first, I will make sure that I will her last teal end of the life.

I Caresse her hear softy they are smooth and silky, just like her. Her lips are swell for our passionate kiss. Her body have few bit mark, which I give. Now I surprised, how i could be so much in controlled. Because I never been controlled , when I f*ck someone. Before, It all have been my pleasure but this time I wanted to pleased her.

Yes, l pleased her. She wanted to denied me but her body can't.

When I first saw her at club, I know that I want her. But I can't take her because, with me she wasn't safe. So I let her go. But the times flow and my urge to take her is grow. My lust for her has no boundaries. And she goes out with that boy, my lust mixed with anger. So I kidnapped her.

And now here she is, in my arms, in my side, looking very desirable. I want to take but I can't. Because its her first time, she can't handle me. She is so delicated, I don't want to crashed her. She is mine, mine to protect. And I will protect her from every denger.

DANGER. I smile shyly, how funny it is that the biggest danger is saying that he will protect Geet from every danger.

Yes, the biggest danger is me. And no one can save her from me. She is my obsession, my possession. She is mine, all mine.

Now she is not crying now, she is calm. I picked her to the washroom. She didn't protest, she let me do what I want to do. I lay her to the bathtub with little warm water and washed her hair with shampoo. Next I wash her body. Her skin feel like creamy smooth. If do the little longer than I can't able to wait... So hurriedly washing her. There is blood on her thighs. I washed them, the blood mixed with the water and running down to the drain.

I smile shyly, I took her virginity. I am her first, this feel my hart rates risen. I feel like teenage.

I bathing her and then myself. And Dry us with a towel. Wrap her to a fluffy robe and carried her to the kitchen.

She didn't eat anything since I brought her here. She must be hungry. I give her some sandwiches, which jenny made for us. And she eat quietly. Good girl. Now she is listening to me and I love that.

When we finished, I carried her back to the bedroom. Now the badsheet has changed. I told Jenny to change the bedcover, and she made it.

I lay Geet to bed and I also lay next to her and cover us to the soft blanket. And take Geet to my arms, she slept peacefully.

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Morning sun ray come from the window, I open my eyes and see the beautiful sight that , My Geet is sleeping peacefully in my arms. She is smiling in her sleep. Maybe she is seeing some dream about her parents or friends or... My jaw tighten, yash?!

How can she sean some dream about him. She is not allowed to see any dreams about any man. She is mine, her dream also have to filled with mine.

I kiss her lips in such a force that she sob. But didn't wake up. Tear roll down to her eyes. And now I know, she is dreaming about me.

I smile. She get used to it. She will learn to live here with me. This is her new home and she is not allowed to go anywhere else.

When I was seeing my beautiful pet, my phone ringed. I go outside, because I don't want to break geets sleeps. So I go from there and lock the door behind me.

"Hello??"

******

"Why you call, when you know my answer??"

******

"No, I don't want to know anything. And DON'T CALL ME, I HAVE NO FAMILY."

******

"Good bye, dadima. Don't call me ever."

And I cut the call. Why she alway call, when I clearly says that I never want to go there. But no. She never tired. She always call.

I go to my room and started to get ready for office.

...

My day is going very badly. From when I come to office, I can't concentrate in my work. I get hard, only thinking about her. My all goes only thinking about her. I call twice to jenny, how is geet, have she eaten or not, what she is doing? Oh my god, I act like a teenage boy. But this feel good.

My chain of thought broken, when my office door is opened.

"Adi how many times I said that don't disturb me "

"How are you Maan?."

"Why are you here?"




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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
he is so possessive n obsessive about geet
she has stopped denying him after whatever had happened
he bathed her fed her n made her sleep
she didnt deny anything
she is a captive in him now
dadi wants maan n he denies
y adi is here
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
awwesome part dear ...update soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part maan lust her n wants to keep her looks like he doesnt like his family thnx 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
maan wants geet to stay with him..
Whats his rift with dadi
cant w8 to know..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update ...
maan lust geet but he feel something for her ...
that's why he feel pain to see geet's pain
he is so obsessive n possessive for geet ..n his angr omg ...!!
he wants to protect her but who will protect geet from maan ?
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Note


Hi guys as u know my story is inspired by a Book "twist me". i have written this story not fully but at some point copy the Sean not by word but thought. So I removed some part, also i dont want any DT note.


those part have also not any copy by words but i copy by thoughts. but now my story fully change so i'm not remove any part now. Sorry guys.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update! Maan possessive of Geet! frm the moment he saw her, he wanted her! he seems obsessed with her! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan takes care of her! She is his prisoner! Maan doesn't 2 meet dadi! Adi comes 2 see Maan! update soon

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