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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#851

tara didnt say to geet about her disease

she was protective towards with geet after that

n it made maan suspicious which made tara to say about geets disease

maan is worried

n a slight hit on door too made maan worry for her

he hugged her..his boss..

when will geet cme to know about her disease

nice part

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#852

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional fab update! well written! Tara did nt tell Geet abt her heart disease! Tara tells Maan! he is stunned! he realizes money cannot buy u everything! Dev n Meera talk! Dev explains Geet is his best friend! Meera nw nt j of Geet bt stil angry! Geet hits her head! Maan worried! he assures Geet she wil nt die! Geet confused! Maan seems 2 b assuring himself! update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Fantastic Update

Tara is worried about Geet and Maan notices that he ask Tara and she tells him that Geet is suffering from Heart problems but now both has decided not to tell Geet immediately they will tell her when the time is right , how can they decided that Geet again will believe that she has been betrayed by her friends they should tell yes she will be sad but at least she can take better care of herself .
Dev and Meera talks were awesome and now both back together that is simply great
the office scene where both Maan and Geet hugs and he tells her that she will not die now was almost like a lover telling his partner he'll do everything to make sure she survives .

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Nice part.. I think Maan is more emotional to see Geet. Dev clear his view to Meera that Geet is best friend which he do anything for her.. Finally Meera accept his love..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Part 13

Geet is changed and Maan changed as welll..Earlier he used to be always rude with her..now he does irritate, specially while reminding her about rich status and ego, but always softens when it comes to her parents and her sorrows for losing them..
and Geet, she is not able to stop herself from thinking about him..in fact both of them, they quarrel, argument, irritate and get irritated with each other when together..but alone many a times think of each other..
finally Dev realized the blunder he made, but now decided it rectify it..and it is Geet who is suffering from the heart disease..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Part 14

beautiful update..the sudden & spontaneous reaction from Maan, a reaction that of not believing on what Tara said, or his heart's wish that nothing is going happen to Geet or that of a hope that she will survive...

Maan envying Geet made him close to real life character, but then I was wondering how it will get removed from his heart or replaced by love..and this is that exact moment when he came to know about her disease, it made him realize taking out the enviousness. He did not pity her now, else the sudden reaction would not have come from him...worry for Geet, fear of losing her and a determination that he won't let it happen..
Meera also understood what Dev meant about her and the place she has got in his life

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago

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mardej

@marde

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Nice part dear

Update soon

Waiting eagerly for your coming updates

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#858

Nice update

Waiting for next update.

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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#859

very nice update
geet unware of her disease

waiting fr nxt

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#860

wow what an update...felt terrible for geet...she is unaware of her health issues...there is no way she can die right...both maan and dev will be devastated for different reasons of course...glad dev and meera sorted things ...hope meera can find a solution to geet's problem...