|Aye Mere Humsafar...ek zara Intezar| Part. 3 Pg. 11

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY

NICE ONE

WAITING

HAPPY NEW YEAR

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Congrats On New Story

Character Sketch is very Interesting and Intriguing at the same time

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice concept. Waiting for update.

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesme cs
i m loving it already
update soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Happy New Year! superb cs! update soon

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Teaser

"Please don't leave me. I will die without you, my life is nothing without you. Please don't take my life away from me, please don't go away from me, please" She once again cried to him. She pleaded him, she begged him, falling on his knee, but yet again her plea, her tears, her begging, her cries, everything went in vain. And he pushed her away, far-far away from himself, as if she was nothing but a broken toy, that was of no use for him. It was like she is a stranger walking on the crowded road, that he had nothing to do with and he left, leaving her all alone to die. To bear the pain of a shattered heart, to shed tears for him who had himself said that he won't let a-lone tears come in her eyes and today he himself was the reason to give this painful gift to her.

I will update this Tomorrow for sure...

And Happy New Year to All of you. May this new year brings, you all lots of joys, happiness, and blesses you with good health.

Mariam