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CHAPTER 10(a)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, architectural terms,IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

Hearing Geet's promise Maan became concerned and realised that he has to get things done fast! He unlocked the door and called the peon and asked him to get hot tea, coffee and sandwiches. Maan called Dadimaa and said that what they had suspected is true and he wants to marry Geet as soon as possible! Maan then called Sameera and told her his wish to marry Geet. Sameera was overjoyed! He asked Sameera to give Dadimaa, Geet's date of birth; time of birth; and place of birth so the 'mahurath' could be decided. He kept trying to revive Geet in the meantime. Half an hour later, Dadimaa called to tell that 'mahurath' has been decided for tomorrow morning! By now Geet was conscious. Maan made her forcibly have tea and sandwiches! Maan tried calling Vicky but his phone was coming unreachable! He called Dadimaa, Yash, Sameera, Adi to GK Apple Orchard Cottage and went with Geet there. In presence of Dadimaa, Sameera, Adi, Yash, Bhola and Gauri, Maan went down on his knee and proposed to Geet, "Mishty, mujhe se shaadi karogi?"

Before Geet could answer the door bell rang. Bhola opened the door and Vicky stepped in, "What bhai, you were proposing to Bhabhi without Vicky? NOW PROPOSE!"

Maan again said,"Mishty, I LOVE YOU! Mujhe se shaadi karogi?" (Geet, will you marry me?) Geet shyly nodded "yes".





Dadimaa had got Khurana Khandaan's engagement ring for Geet. Sameera gave a male ring saying, "Maan yeh angoothi Geet ke nanaji, Mr. Brijeshwar Khanna ki hai! Agar design old fashion lage to hum badal sakte hain!" (Maan this ring belongs to Geet's grandfather, Mr. Brijeshwar Khanna. If you find it old fashioned, we can exchange it!)



Hearing about her grandfather, Geet had tears in her eyes, "Kash Arjun, Teji aur Lucky Veerji yahaan hote?" (I wish my brothers- Arjun, Teji and Lucky were here!)

To lighten the environment, Vicky started his jokes, "Bhabhi, aap apne is dull and boring devar Yash se toh mil lee, abb apne interesting devar, Vikrant Singh Khurana, I mean 'Vicky' se milye." Vicky bowed regally towards Geet, making her laugh. Getting happy and affectionate glares from everyone present.

"Geet beta, kya aap ke ya Sameera ke paas thodi heavy saree hai? Kal pehne ke liye!" Both nodded no. Giving Maan the cue he needed as now it was going to be the ladies talk.

"Guys, I need all three of you !" Adi, Vicky & Yash followed Maan. "Guys, Geet's life is in danger and I'm trying to contact Rishi but he is somewhere on a mission!"

"Bhai, why is bhabhi in danger?"

Maan and Adi narrated all the available facts to Vicky and Yash.
"The reason Geet and I are getting married in Manali is so that Sasha and Rahul are not aware of it. Tomorrow the mahurath is for morning so less people will be around! Hopefully wedding will be over before the office starts thereby not arousing any suspicion! Adi, can you please get our marriage registered as soon as possible!"

"Adi bhai, why are Sasha & Rahul against Maan bhai?"

"Vicky, its a long story! Rahul's friends were Third Year students at XYZ college. From the name you must be aware of what kind of reputation that college holds! Anyways they came to our college 6 yrs. back and started troubling Pinkyji (Adi blushed saying Pinky's name). Geet went to her defence. The three ruffians asked Geet to kiss the first male who enters the college. Guess who enters?"

"MAAN BHAI!" Vicky & Yash yelled.

"Yes! While kissing Maan, she apologised in advance saying that she has been forced in it for Pinkiji's safety! Maan was furious and got them arrested! Since then, those two are against Maan for getting their friends arrested and Geet for complaining against them. Things were blown out of proportion when they tried to murder Geet but instead Maan & Geet's baby was killed. Now they have vowed to harm Maan, Geet's family, Meera and Pinky!"
The moment "Meera's" name was said, Vicky came in his attack mode. How could he stand by when Meera, his love, her life was involved?

"Bhai, what do want us to do?"

"For now, tomorrow just keep a watch that no suspicious person is near the ladies. Once back home, no one should be aware of Geet and my relationship! Just now, I'm more bothered by Geet's emotional state as she is totally broken from within!"

Dadimaa came outside where men were and said,"Shaadi ka mahurath kal subah 6:30 baje ka nikhla hai, iss liye kuch zaruri rasmein aaj karni hain!"(The auspicious time for the wedding is tomorrow morning 6:30am. Therefore some important rituals have to be done today!)

"Kaunsi rasmei?" (What rituals?)

"Sangeet aur mehendi ke liye to samay nahi hai magar Maan aur Geet ki "haldi" ho sakti hai!"(There is no time for Sangeet and mehendi but only for Maan and Geet's "haldi"!" ) "Adi, Yash aur Vicky aap Maan ki 'haldi' ka program Hotel Suite mei shuru kijiye aur hum Geet ki 'haldi' ka! Bass ek baat ka dhyaan rakhiyega ki haldi ke baad Maan aur Geet shaadi tak nahi mil sakte!" (Adi, Yash and Vicky you organise Maan's 'haldi' in Hotel Suite & I'll organise Geet's 'haldi'. Only remember one thing that Maan and Geet can't meet after haldi until their wedding!)

"KYA? Dadimaa, mai yeh sab nahi maanta!" (WHAT? I don't agree with all this!)

"Humne aap se maan ne ke liye nahi, karne ke liye kahaa hai!" (I'm not asking you to agree but follow!)

Maan's "haldi" was done at Hotel suite admist lot of fun and laughter with Adi, Yash and Vicky passing teasing comments and pulling Maan's leg!



"Adi bhai, who is going to wear pants in KM from now? I mean figuritively!" Yash said seriously.

"Yash bhai, do you need to ask? Maan bhai is going to be a "Joru ka Ghulam" soon! Adi bhai, now there will no longer be pasta for breakfast but parantha dahi!"

"Instead of tai-chi moves, now melodious bhajans!"
There was a burst of laughter. Maan was helpless and couldn't react as he was smeared with haldi.

Maan's "used haldi" was brought to GK Orchards Cottage for Geet, but before it could be applied on her door-bell rang to everyone's surprise. Sameera went to open the door and stood transfixed! Seeing Sameera standing frozen on the door, Dadimaa went near her, "Sameera beta, kaun hai? Haldi ka samay nikala jaa raha hai!" (Sameera, who is it? The "Haldi ceremony's time is elapsing!)



"ARJUN!"

"Arjun, tum sahi samay par aaye ho. Kal Geet ka "Kanyadaan" tum karna!" (Arjun you are here in time. You can do Geet's "Kanyadaan" tomorrow!"

"Geet? Kanyadaan?"

"Sameera, aap Arjun ko ander le aaye. Kuch khilaaye peelaye phir jald se jald haldi ke liye aaye!"(Sameera, you take Arjun inside and make him eat & drink something. Then quickly bring him for "haldi" ceremony.) Dadimaa left giving privacy to the couple.

Sameera briefly explained about Geet, her life and whereabouts! Sameera told Arjun about Maan and Geet's love story, Dhruv's untimely death and reason for Geet's disappearance was because there is danger to Maan's life & Geet's family's life! Arjun was guilty that he was not there to support his sister in her time of need! Arjun met Geet hugged her and cried, "Geetu mujhe maaf kar de ki maine tera saath dene ke bajaaye Maa ka saath diyaa!" (Geet forgive me for supporting Mom instead of you!)

"Arjun baaki baatein baad mei karenge abhi Geet ki "haldi" ka samay hai!"(Arjun you can have heart to heart talk later, come for Geet's Haldi!)
Arjun started the Haldi ceremony, followed by Dadimaa, then Sameera and ended with Gauri. Bhola was sent out for miscellaneous works! Arjun accompanied Dadimaa to their Hotel Suite to meet Maan. Geet with Sameera and Gauri's help went for bath!



Arjun went and met his two long lost friends, Maan & Adi. They had a long chat bringing back old memories. Finally Arjun said, "Maan what have you thought regards Geet's security?"

"Arjun, Dadimaa and I have decided that we'll get married here in Manali. As Rahul will be having us under surveillance both KM and Khanna House. Thereby giving them no indication about Geet's whereabouts!"

"I think this is best as after Maa's death, I will NEVER take my Geetu where that devil in form of father, Mr. Mohinderlal Handa stays!"
Dadimaa was an intelligent and worldly-wise woman. She knew the underlying meaning behind Arjun's words. She also could put two and two together and understand why Rano did not let Geet stay in Khurana House. Before Arjun could get more angry, Dadimaa tried to calm him by saying, "Arjun beta, abb toh aap ladkiwale ho gaye toh aap ko humari ek baat maan ni padhegi!" (Arjun, now you are from bride's side, so you have to listen to our one demand!)

"Boliye Dadimaa! Aap ka hukum sar aankhon par!" (Yes Dadimaa! Your wish is my command!)

"Bass itni baat hai ki aaj raat yaani jab tak Maan aur Geet ki shaadi nahi hoti, aap dekheyga ki yeh dono mil nahi sakte!" (I have a small request that till Maan and Geet don't get married, please see that they don't meet!)

"Ji Dadimaa! Aap bilkul sahi keh rahi hain!" Arjun said trying to hide his laugh seeing Maan's irritated expressions. (You are absolutely right Dadimaa!)

"Dost, dost naa raha...!" Vicky teased Maan
Maan left banging his room door! Making everyone in the room burst with laughter they were controlling."Dadimaa, what about Bhai's "Bachelor Party!"

"Vicky, yahaan toh hum chup chupakar Maan aur Geet ki shaadi karaa rahe hain, aur aap "Bachelor Party" karke usse broadcast karna chahte hain! Chaliye abb khaana kha ke sab soye. Kal subah ke chaar baje (4am) jagna hai!" (Vicky, here we are trying to get them married in hiding and you want to broadcast it to the world by celebrating "Bachelor Party"! Now quickly have dinner and go to sleep. Tomorrow we all have to be awake at 4am.)

Arjun was about to leave when Maan came near him and asked in hushed tones, "Can you please give me Sameera's mobile no.?"
"Why do you want to talk to my wife? What do you want from her?" Arjun said in a fake angry & jealous tone.

" I want Geet...Get lost! I'll find out her no. myself!"
Making Arjun, Adi, Yash and Vicky laugh at Maan's desperation! Before Maan could stomp off, Adi had mercy on Maan and said, "Maan, Geet doesn't keep a mobile phone. She is only contactable at the Cottage phone!" Resulting in another uproar of laughter from the four men present!

While everyone was teasing Maan, Geet had taken bath and her milky skin was glowing! Dadimaa had sent Bhola earlier and got a mehendiwali to the cottage. Geet's hand and feet now were being decorated with mehendi and having her love's name, "Maan" decorated in her palms!



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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 10 (b)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, architectural terms,IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

Next day, it dawn nice and bright! The sky was clear with sun rising, bringing joy in lives of two sad souls! Geet could not sleep the whole night as her dream which she had been dreaming for past 6yrs. was finally coming true! Maan's pure and true love had Geet's mehendi filled hands turn to a shade of extremely dark red making it look black, much to Geet's delight! Sameera and Gauri had woken up early at 4am. After doing their daily chores and having morning tea or coffee. Sameera and Gauri got Geet ready along with Meera & Pinky. Yes Meera and Pinky had arrived last night after Geet had slept. It was Dadimaa's surprise for Geet!
Geet got dressed in a brocade Indian pink saree with zardozi border, it was an old saree of Dadimaa along with the saree was a red chunri and khandaani jewellery set also which Meera had got. Although the saree was heavy from Geet's everyday saree but light compared to a wedding attire. The beautiful red chunri gave her mysterious look and grace of a bride. Thereby making her look like a new bride who has come to temple for a pooja or a festival! Dadimaa also got for Maan a dark green brocade sherwani with a bandhani safa (turban).










Dadimaa came at 5:30am on the way to Hidamba Devi temple to give Geet glass bangles after having pooja done on them. Sameera had questioned Dadimaa about Geet's "chura".



Dadimaa had replied, "Sameera beta, agar Geet ko "chura" pehnaya to sabko Geet ki shaadi ke baare mei pataa chal jaayega. Aur phir sb uss se uske pati ka naam puchenge iss liye usse chure ki rang ki kaanch ki churiyaan pehna dete hain pooja karke!"(Sameera, if we make Geet wear "chura" everyone will come to know about her marriage. Also people will ask her husband's name. So best is to make Geet wear glass bangles of same colour as the "chura" after doing pooja!) Seeing Geet dressed as a bride and soon going to be their family's new member Dadimaa had tears in her eyes. Yash seeing situation getting emotional nudged Savitri Devi, "Nanimaa, der ho rahi hai!" (Its getting late!) Dadimaa kissed Geet on her forehead and left.





Its was 6:00am., both bride and bridegroom were present at the Hidimba Devi Temple. Panditji, who was a 70yr. old man wasconsidered very auspicious and pious priest to perform marriages! He started the ceremony, Maan was called he was asked to sit on the left side of the mandap and asked to perform some rites. Then Geet was called and made to sit on Maan's right side. Soon Arjun & Sameera were called for Geet's "Kanyadaan." Adi did the "Kheeldaan" on Geet's request. Meera tied the "Gatbandhan" as Maan considered Meera as his sister! Pheras started followed by "sindoor daan" and tieing of "mangalsutra". Geet felt complete that she and her soul has been tied to Maan for next 7 births! Maan was at peace getting his love, his life and his junoon(obsession)! Both restless souls were finally at peace. They went and touched Dadimaa's feet then panditji's feet.















"Yash aur Vicky, aaj se aap dono Geetika ko "bhabhi" bulayenge!" Dadimaa said indicating them to touch Maan and Geet's feet. (Yash aur Vicky you will address Geetika as bhabhi from today!) Vicky opened his mouth to say something when Dadimaa interrupted, "Abb Geet rishte mei aap dono se badi hain! Kyuki Maan dono se bade hain!" (Now Geet is elder to you both according to relationship! Because Maan is elder than both of you! )

"Aaj se aap Yash bhaiya aur Vicky bhaiya hain mere liye jaise Arjun, Teji aur Lucky Veerji hain aur Rishi Bhaiya aur Adi bhaiya mere liye!" Geet said with folded hands and tears in her eyes! (From today Yash and Vicky you are my brothers like Arjun, Teji Lucky, Rishi and Adi are my brothers!) Yash and Vicky were delighted as two of them did not have any sister. Blessed Geet by touching her head.
Pinky did "juta churai" (stealing of shoes) of Maan asGeet's sister and got the nek.

Khuranas left for Hotel Suite. Meera did "dwaar chaar" (blocking the entry of Maan & Geet at their home) as Maan's sister and got hefty nek! Dadimaa did Geet's official "grah-pravesh" then. All Khuranas left for GK Apple Orchards Cottage. Arjun, Sameera, Gauri and Bhola had left for cottage from Mandir. Khuranas arrived to a beautifully decorated Cottage. Geet was feeling like she is actually coming home seeing Arjun & Sameera there. Everyone finally relaxed with tea/coffee and snacks. Yash even commented, "Bhabhi makes best 'adhrakwali chai'!" Maan was about to ask when Yash had tea made by Mishty? (Bhabhi makes best ginger tea.) Dadimaa answered, "Haan bhai, Geet 'adhrakwali chai' aur samose bahut achi bannati hai!" (Yes! Geet makes best ginger tea.)

"Dadimaa aur Yash bhai aap ne 'adhrakwali chai' aur samose kab chake?" (Dadimaa & Yash when did you have ginger tea?)

"Jab hum mandir mei behosh ho gaye the aur Geet hummei yahaan laai thi!" (When I fainted in the temple and Geet got me home.)

Geet got up to go to kitchen but Maan held her hand tightly and made her sit besides him. "Tum kaheen nahi jaa rahi ho!" Maan said in firm but hushed tone only meant for Geet's ears. (You are going no where!)

Suddenly Meera asked, "Geet tum Maan bhai ko kya bulati ho?" (Geet what do you call Maan?)

"MAANSIR!" Adi, Vicky and Sameera replied in chorus

"Kya? Tum abb bhi unhe 'Maan Sir' bulati ho che saal baad bhi?" (What? Even after 6yrs you call him "Maan Sir"?)

"Woh mere boss hain, toh aur kya bulaon?" (He is my boss, what else would I call him?)

"Boss nahin pagli abb tere pati hain!" (Not Boss my dear, husband!)

"Pati!" Geet blushed deep pink like newly ripened apple. Making Maan want to nibble her cheeks! (Husband!)

"Haan Meera, aaj phaisla ho jaana chahiye!" (Yes Meera, lets decide!)

"Bhabhi, aap bhaiya ko bulaaye "Maan Darling ya Maan Jaanu ya Maan sweetheart"?"

"Chup kar badmash! Woh unka private mamla hai." Dadimaa said to Vicky

After lot of teasing, fun & jokes by Arjun, Sameera, Adi, Pinki, Vicky, Meera, Yash and Dadimaa on Maan & Geet; and delicious breakfast, Adi got up saying, "Bhaee, mujhe toh abb office jaana hai toh mai chalaa. Maan & Geet Congratulations once again!"(Ok! Now I have to leave for office!)

Maan saw the time, it was 10:00 am. "Jaana toh mujhe bhi hai!" Maan got up.(Even I have to leave for office!)

"Aap dono jaaye. Geet abhi nayi dulhan hai, woh nahi jaa sakti!" (You both go. Geet is a new bride, she can't go!)

"Magar Dadimaa?" (But?)

"Nahi matlab nahi!" (No means no!)
Disappointed Maan with Adi left to Hotel Suite to change and then left for Chopra Construction.



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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful updates
Maaneet wedding fixed
Arjun, Vicky, pinky, meera all came for the wedding
Loved the teasing part
Maaneet married... Ye kya maan babu office jaraha hai...
Will sasha n rahul come to know about maaneet... Waiting to know
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wonderful updtde... maan d geet got married geets life in danger waitng for d nxt updte..
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awesome update dear...
maan and geet got married wow...
Arjun came and also meera and pinky...
All were teasing maan and geet especially geet as she calls maan as maan sir...
dadima disappointed maan by not allowing geet to go to office as she is new bride...
will be waiting for the next part dear
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chalo atlast dey got married...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
finally maaneet got married :)
lovd it alot
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hi thanks 4 da double fantastic updates! Maan proposes 2 Geet! they set the wedding date! Arjun arrives! Maan tells them abt Geet's life in danger n wt Sasha n Rahul did! Maan asks them 2 b alert! Haldi n Mehndi ritauls take place! the guys tease Maan! Geet is a beautiful bride! Maaneet get married! Vicky teases Maaneet! update soon
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Amazing pts
maan at last remember everything wen he heard sameera
and daadi told him to marry hr otherwise he have no haq
from that word he dreamed his past and confront geet
and now married secretly only family members joined them

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