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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Happy B'day to you dear ..stay blessed always ..hope you are fine ..enjoy your b'day..

love you.🤗 have a great day and year ahead.⭐️

aww...thank u dear...thank u so muchhh
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Posted: 9 years ago


.Part 36


" Life is as complex , as we make it "

Today again, Geet came to same park ...the park which not only had her childhood memories but few others too .. The one with the loved one in her life...her maan...she confessed it all to him here ..at this very place ..

After tossing and turning in her bed when she couldn't sleep, she drove towards park ... this place always pacified her ... Deep drawn in her thoughts she haven't realized , when it started pouring ..

The soft drops of water started wetting her making her come out of her thoughts ... Probably it was wrong decision to come to park at this hour .. she saw a shadow coming towards her ..

She stood up and as the shadow neared ..it was maan, who was happy seeing her there ... she was about to leave , when he blocked her way .. she moved to right , he yet again came in front ..

Geet turned around , when maan held her hand to stop her from going ..

Why are u here at this hour Geet ?? he asked nearing her .

with what right are u asking me this question ?? she asked in a stiff tone, trying to maintain distance between their bodies which were getting wet with rain ..

I asked why r u here ,this late? maan asked ignoring her counter question , once again covering the distance Geet created between them

it's late for u too .. what if I ask the same question ??

You have the right to ask ... he smiled at his wicked fate... Geet felt a pang in her heart... the smile he used to give her whenever she told him ...she trusts him and don't want to know about his past

I have to go !! she declared ..

Why can't u stay with me for some more time , Geet ? his tone was pleading one ...

I cannot stay , I got to go .. that's it she declared ..

Don't this park remind u anything about Us ? doesn't this rain bring back memories of our most cherished moment ?.. .. he asked anticipating her to remember all , remember that they shared their first kiss in rain, remember that she shared her past with him in this park ..

No .. I don't remember anything .. nothing reminds me of anything she said reluctantly

Let me remind you then ... Saying so , he cupped her face in his hands and bent on her lips , stopped a while before claiming them ...

He tried to read her eyes, have she really forgot all ...but her eyes were closed now,disappointing him ... as she felt his breath on her lips, she closed her eyes in anticipation... and Maan without wasting a second plastered his lips on hers ..

Same flavor of love as it was before when he tasted but there was a lot of difference between then and now , and he wished it was never as it is now ...

She tried to resist before giving in finally .. Tasting her lips for few minutes along with rain drops , he gained entry in her mouth when she gasped to breath ... he wanted to kiss her to eternity , to pull out the frustration of past few days and turn of events .. to overcome the eagerness being close to her , .. to show her how much he missed her ..to make her believe that he was not playing any game with her ..., He will make her remember all if she don't remember .. and if she does, she has to admit ...

And she ...She was reliving the past , once again she was tasting his lips ... same taste but different site, she closed her eyes to let him do whatever he wanted to do .. for few seconds she too wanted to enjoy this moment .. to forget the miseries of her life ..to forget the painful phase they are going through, she wanted to relive the memories which never faded and could never fade ..

And after long passionate kiss, they broke...they breathing hard ... The cold drops of rain haven't calmed them .. they were ignited , with the passion and more because of tension building with every passing minute ..

After getting their breath to normal, Maan scrutinized her face .. it was flushed and showed clearly that she too enjoyed the moment as much as he did .. why she didn't pushed him and let him kiss her ... his mind was joining the puzzles ..

You still don't remember anything Geet ?? he asked trying to make her confess or to confirm what her face showed was what in her heart too ..

But she denied ..yet again denied and denial seemed as fake as calling it a day when it was night ..

Don't lie Geet , please say u remember our first kiss ? say that you won't forget second one too ...

Geet haven't said anything this time .. Her eyes were glued to the ground ..

look at me and say that you remember me ...u can also feel the bond between us ... But she never did what he asked to do, she kept her gaze fixed particularly at nothing but towards the rain drops , sinking in grassy land ... she too felt her throat drying .. He was standing close caressing his thumb on her cheeks, she could feel him eager to hear her say something , but she didn't ...she couldn't ...

She decided to leave , as staying there would make things more complicated ..and for now she don't want it, her heart refused to go away from him , as she knew the second she would step back the warmth , the heaven will disappear and she would be jerked back to the hell ..away from him ..

But she has to go , so she did step back .. and turned around to leave ..

Maan was disappointed this time , she haven't said anything , and he wanted to listen , even if its something bitter he wanted to hear her ..she can't go like this without saying anything ... He wished she would stop , but she kept going away ..one step , two and three she was a meter away when she heard what she could die hearing ...

I love you Geet ...... maan confessed, he doesn't want to let her go , and when he saw her leaving he just wanted to confess it ..

Geet froze at the very place that was the pure bliss hearing it from him ... .. she wanted to hear it once again , where maan was waiting for her to turn around once , so that he could see her expressions with his confession ...

I love u geet... he confessed yet again , she still had her back towards him ...

A drops or two of salty water flown from her eyes, she hid rest in her hazels and went off without turning around .. leaving a disappointed maan behind ...

...

sameera was sulking in her room ..

who dared to go against me .. who bailed maan out ?? she was in very bad mood , pacing to and fro , and for the nth time she asked the same question to herself .. But there was no answer ..

Geet ?? her name popped up in her mind ... but she don't remember anything .. then who ??

Whole day she has been trying to find out the clues about the person who bailed maan , but she never got any of it...

Things were complicated , there was no clue about the person ,making her angry and frustrated ..she blasted on officer for making weak case against maan and secondly getting him bail out so soon ..

For the first time she could sense big failure ahead ..and she won't let it happen .. she cant let the person win , whoever is behind this .. and whoever is opposing her would have to burn in the fire as she is burning now .. ...

waiting for likes n comments...😉😉
Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
RM14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

aww...thank u dear...thank u so muchhh


Dear...you're most welcome.🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional update dear ..superb and so b'fully written ...👏 ⭐️
loved it and pics etc awesome..⭐️

Geet was in the same park and Maan also there .,wanted her to remind all that memories but Geet didn't respond in that way he wanted..as she couldn't ..🥺
both were in pain..
Maan kissed her too..❤️and confessed his love for her which she wanted to listen but she didn't replied and went away..

hope they will be unite soon.😳
Sameera is so confused that who bailed out Maan..?? let's see what she will do now ..but don't want any of her plan to be suceesfull now.



waiting for next update ..😛but take your time and take care dear.🤗


Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Waiting ...res.😛

updated😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update... both maan and geet are in pain... geet in the park where she has good memories... maan came there and tried to make geet remember her past... he kissed her and though geet didn't respond... maan confessed his love for her ... hope sameeras truth will come out soon and maaneet will become one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
welcome back yaar kahan gayab ho jaate ho lovely update so maan kibail geet ne ki as she remembers everything but she is acting like she dosent she was in the park relieving her foirst kiss with maan who came to taklk to her to make her remember what he didnt know geet remembers everything she is just having trouble trusting him as his past is not known to her maan kissed her inprder to make her remeber though they had an amazing kiss full of passion but geets detachment disappointed maan as geet left not able to answer maan here sameera is fuming like a caged animal she is restless to know who helped maan has her plan is failing
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

welcome back yaar kahan gayab ho jaate ho lovely update so maan kibail geet ne ki as she remembers everything but she is acting like she dosent she was in the park relieving her foirst kiss with maan who came to taklk to her to make her remember what he didnt know geet remembers everything she is just having trouble trusting him as his past is not known to her maan kissed her inprder to make her remeber though they had an amazing kiss full of passion but geets detachment disappointed maan as geet left not able to answer maan here sameera is fuming like a caged animal she is restless to know who helped maan has her plan is failing

thanx for ur beautiful comment dear...
m being gayab...ayr i was not well...i posted noted 2 month back tht wont b actve here...i come here after 2 month just to finish this story...😃😃.

sorry fr delay
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
maaneet are in pain
maan confessed his love

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